Score: 9

"Final Results From Voice ACting Contest! :X"

submission: (gaia) va4C 2nd muffin

date: November 2, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 88

Wow. Just like, holy shit. I expected a good submission from you and I see this wasnt a good submission... it was a fantastic submission. Each and every character was acted very very well, and you have about 8 of them. I LOVED the background voices. You are very good with making boy and girl voices. The acting of the main character was hilarious. The hippy cafe goer, terribly awesome. The guys on TV, just fabulous. The jokes, lolable. It wasnt to long and it wasnt to short. The ending could have been a bit less adruptive, but it still was great. You need to go ask people if they need any voice acting because you would be a GREAT addition to the voice acting world. You have loads of talent and this is my favorite submission. Great job, just wow. I expect great things from you. -95

EDDACHE SAYS:

rednikaiaG
va4C 2nd muffin

Acting = 35
Fit = 24
Originality = 15
Range = 15
Mixing = 9

98

Comments
Excellent voice acting. Really superb. The voices fit so well and it's a great display of your range. The sfx were too loud in places which smothered the voices a bit but I loved the use of bg voices during the café scenes, people not involved with the main characters at all but really help populate the scene. The TV section felt a little bit of a cop-out, but what you did with it was really well performed and an original method of using the word, "muffin". It's a double-thumbs-up-latte with extra cream!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

rednikaiaG
(gaia) va4C 2nd muffin
Acting 28/35
Fit 20/25
Originality 12/15
Range 8/10
Mixing 9/10

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STALAGMITE SAYS:

Rednikaiag
VA4 second Muffins-
Acting - 30/35
Fit - 21/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 13/15
Mixing - 10/10
84

A pure gold performance with hilarious characters and a VERY convincingly mixed scene! Improvements? MAKE MOAR!

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Score: 8

"Final Results From Voice ACting Contest! :L"

submission: Snively's Dirty Duty

date: November 2, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 85

LOL. First off, I would like to say that the acting was fantastic. There were very few errors and the characters actually sounded like the ones from the cartoon. That laugh by the chicken robot guy at the end sounded EXACTLY like he does in the cartoon. I could picture the characters very well and laughed at the originality of this piece. You need to go to the nearest music store and buy a nice AT2020 microphone. Or just a good mic. I could tell the mic you used wasnt a very good quality, but you still managed to alter the sound to make it sound good quality so good job on that. I wish that you would have made sound effects of guts falling to the floor when Snigglet was sewing up Sonic, and maybe you could have made the skit a bit more lively by putting in some small background music, but other than that it was fantastic! Great job! - 89

EDDACHE SAYS:

AMTRAX91
Snively's Dirty Duty

Acting = 33
Fit = 25
Originality = 15
Range = 15
Mixing = 9

-97

Comments
Ah yes, The Adventure Of Sonic. Grand memories. It's been a while since I've seen an episode so I can't say how accurate the voices are to the show but regardless: The voice of Snively was absolutely excellent and hilarious. Robotnik was great when in shouty mode, but it slipped in places. There were a few unfortunate pauses in places and it dragged during the taxidermy scene which really hurt the pacing (You're ToOOoo Sloooow! - sorry, couldn't resist!). Also the piece was a little too quiet, but overall, it was excellent work!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

AMTRAX91:
Snively's Dirty Duty
Acting 30/35
Fit 18/25
Originality 12/15
Range 7/15
Mixing 6/10

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STALAGMITE SAYS:

AMTRAX91:
Snively's Dirty Duty
Acting - 27/35
Fit - 22/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 15/15
Mixing - 10/10

-84

although lagging in events in some parts you performed with fantastic diction and very fun personalities

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Score: 3

"Final Results From Voice ACting Contest! :C"

submission: Bacon Beans Jason's VA

date: November 2, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 37

Well, this wasnt taken seriously i see so I wont waste time telling you how to improve. It was funny but.. wasnt really voice acting. It was just you randomly screaming into a mic, laughing to yourself on some lines, not planning a script ahead of time, and noT mixing at all. I did laugh at it though hehE. Bacon Beans? Lmao. -21

EDDACHE SAYS:

TARDOM
Bacon Beans

Acting = 20
Fit = 15
Originality = 10
Range = 7
Mixing = 4

-56

Comments
I downloaded this and listened without reading the description, but I immediately guessed this a one take job. It felt very rushed which was disappointing as there was a lot of energy bursting here which could've been captured better. It was clearly a lot of messing about and sounded like you had fallen out of an episode of Monty Python. The recording quality wasn't great with lots of distortion due to the loud voices and heavy breathing. Well done for adlibbing for two minutes but more planning ahead and effort with the recording quality would've been greatly beneficial.

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Tardom:
Bacon Beans Jason's VA
Acting 15/35
Fit 10/25
Originality 12/15
Range 3/10
Mixing 2/10

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STALAGMITE SAYS:

Tardom:
Bacon Beans Jasons VA
Acting - 9/35
Fit - 7/25
Originality - 5/15
Range - 6/15
Mixing - 4/10

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I LAUGHED SO HARD A LITTLE BIT OF WEE CAME OUT. NOT A JOKE!!!! Now I have to wash my underwears! (and I had a years unwash streak going on those!)

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Score: 7

"Final Results for Voice ACting Contest :U"

submission: Jones Family VA Contest Entry

date: November 1, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 71

First off, this is my second favorite so far out of all the entries, and i have seen almost all of them. I thought it was so funny and cute and the way you purposely sounded like a girl trying to sound like a guy narrator made me laugh. They main thing that you need to work on is the acting. I could tell you were having fun with this lol, so you trailed off and kind of lost the acting in teh characters, They sounded more silly and random than good acting characters. but there were tons of very well done lines that got you some major points. Your a good voice actor when it comes to these cute characters, but you should try to get as INTO the character as possible. I liked the range you had, all of them sounded squeaky and cute but you still managed to make them sound different. I LOVED THE STORY!!! Attack by food? BRILLIANT! Its like that powerpuff girls episode haahah. -86

EDDACHE SAYS:

Jessismith
Jones Family

Acting = 30
Fit = 25
Originality = 15
Range = 10
Mixing = 7

- 82

Comments
This was very well acted with lots of very entertaining characters. The narrator's voice was a bit weak, and there seemed to be a bit of a struggle with Butch's voice. However, the overall piece has whole a lot of charm! The music/sfx was a little loud in places, swamping the characters voices and there were a few pauses which slowed the piece done. But it was well acted and I hope to hear more from this super family!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Stephanie Young (Jessismith):
Jones Family VA Contest Entry
Acting 18/35
Fit 15/25
Originality 12/15
Range 6/10
Mixing 6/10

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Stephanie Young (Jessismith):
Jones family VA contest entry
Acting - 14/35
Fit - 17/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 10/15
Mixing - 9/10

- 60

The cutest performance I have ever heard. However some voices seemed a little forced but overall very funny!

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Score: 6

"Final REsults For Voice Acting Contest! :P"

submission: Keepers Of Hell

date: November 1, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 63

Personally, I loved LOVED this. Why? Well, because of the strange mixing that you did where you can barely hear the voices of the characters, and the mix of the strangSo 10 for originallity, but 5 for acting. The guy who woke up didn't sound like he was to freaked out when he said "oh my god". He just said it so forcefully. Plus, the characters talked a bit to dull. They didnt sound like they were really talking, rather that they were being forced to talked by some director. In other words, your forcing your voices to much. Try to think like YOu are the character so that YOU just simple talk like him and like you are really there. the mixing was bad because i couldnt hear the characters to well, make sure to lower the volume on the layer where the music is by about 30%. By the way, that ending where you purposely blew into the microphone and said lalal was just fabulous for the muffin ending. I loved it. -80

EDDACHE SAYS:

Kirbyfemur
Keepers Of Hell

Acting = 15
Fit = 20
Originality = 13
Range = 10
Mixing = 5

63

Comments
The acting was ok, but it was very difficult to understand what the characters were saying. The use of music and sfx was good but at the beginning it was smothering the voices so much it made it even more difficult to hear the characters. I had bit of a hard time understanding what was going on but it was quite an original tale. The voices did fit quite well but it was let down a lot by the lack of clarity.

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Kirbyfemur:
Keepers OF Hell
Acting 21/35
Fit 13/25
Originality 12/15
Range 7/10
Mixing 4/10

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Kirbyfemur:
Keepers of hell
Acting -11/35
Fit - 14/25
Originality - 8/15
Range - 8/15
Mixing - 8/10
A very cute performance with charm and light humour. However, I barely even felt any real emotion or expression...

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Score: 7

"Final Voice Acting Contest Results! :3"

submission: Out Of Control TV Programmes

date: November 1, 2009

IMPORTANT: Disqualified for being under 2 minutes long! The minimum requirement was 2 minutes long. Its not fair for it to be so short because it gets rated higher, because there is less to rate. Its like saying one line very well and getting 35/35 for acting, but someone who has 4 lines says two of those lines badly and gets 17/35. I am very sorry and hope that you understand. Also, you were supposed to talk about someone working in their jobs. I see that it was about someone tired of working for such a crappy TV station, but you should have started it out with him coming to work and slowly growing insane over the horrible programs coming on. This way you would have made it to at least 3 minutes long and have it a story that could be altered into this random style you have going.

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 75

You have a very funny range of voices. A lot of them sound similar because they have that high pitched nasally sound, but thats not bad because you are perfect for that sort of character. There are TOONNSSS of characters like that so your good to go for that. You have a nice old voice and I thought your jokes were preety funny. Lol, all the pigs are dead. The ending with the mystery gang didnt sound anything like them, but I thought it was still funny. The mixing was great with good background noises and good equalizing. There was some peaking, make sure to pay attention to how loud your crazy voices are. Its hard to sound low when you have such a crazy character to do, so make sure to lower the mic volume a little for the crazy characters. nice Job overall, your a good voice actor with this crazy style you have! Sorry you didnt meet the requirements. :( -81

EDDACHE SAYS:

Diamond-Armada
Out Of Control TV Programmes

Acting = 35
Fit = 23
Originality = 13
Range = 14
Mixing = 10

95

Comments
Comes in short of 2 minutes so not sure this fully qualifies but here goes: Superbly acted. I'm surprised there's a room that can contain you for very long with the amount of bouncing on the walls that you do. It was very well produced with great use of music. My only real negative points were that the TV Shows bit for voice acting is a little overdone and the Scooby-Doo scene was a bit weakly voiced (although Shaggy was excellent). Plus the keyword "muffin" felt a little forced in the end there. Either way, you're clearly a pro!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Will Ryan (diamond-armada):
Out Of Control TV Programmes
Acting 20/35
Fit 14/25
Originality 6/15
Range 5/10
Mixing 6/10

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STALAGMITE SAYS:

Will Ryan (diamond-armada):
Out of control T.V programmes
Acting - 24/35
Fit - 13/25
Originality - 5/15
Range - 10/15
Mixing - 10/10

- 72

A nice little compilation of random scenes, but lacks holding a plot and something fluent to follow, and to allow the listener to really absorb the characters. Also lacking in diction in some places.

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Score: 4

"Voice Acting Contest Final Results! :I"

submission: The beaver king

date: November 1, 2009

FINAL AVERAGED SCORE FROM ALL JUDGES - 41

I thought this was kind of funny because it was just so silly, but you were extremely monotone for all of your characters. It didnt sound like they were any developed character at all. Plus, each one sounded the same. They all just sounded like sarcastic teenagers with the exact same voice talking to theirselves. The only way I could tell characters apart was by knowing how slowly or fast they talked. Try experimenting with different characters by sort of moving your throat and talking to form differeet and unique voices. Instead of talking in slower of faster ways with your normal voice, try tightening the grip on your throtr, twirl it around, lower and higher the pitch, e.t.c. You will form some pretty cool characters this way and you can continue to develop on them from that. For example, if you find a high pitch character that sounds kind of crazy you can begin acting with him and form him into a non-monotone mad scientist, a homeless man, a strange carnival owner, a hospital guy, an old man, e.t.c. If you dont you will just have... your own voice trying to be a monotone homeless man. You have good potential man and some nice ideas, just work a bit harder on that acting and range abilities! - 32

EDDACHE SAYS:

lillefyr
The beaver king

Acting = 19
Fit = 15
Originality = 14
Range = 8
Mixing = 6

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Comments
Hmm... with the corny acting, I couldn't really tell if you were acting bad on purpose or not. A bit oddball to say the least but showed a lot of enthusiasm. However, all the characters sounded so similar to one another it was hard to tell them all apart or tell what was going on. The mixing wasn't great and there was a lot of puffing and generally didn't sound very well put together. It didn't feel like you spent a great deal of time on this piece which is a shame since you seem to have a lot of energy.

FORNOREASON SAYS:

casper staehr (lillefyr):
The Beaver King
Acting 12/35
Fit 12/25
Originality 13/15
Range 4/10
Mixing 4/10

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STALAGMITE SAYS:

casper staehr (lillefyr):
The beaver King
Acting - 7/35
Fit - 7/25
Originality - 5/15
Range - 2/15
Mixing - 5/10

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I am a beaver.

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Score: 7

"Final voice Acting Contest Results! :L"

submission: Juio's Folly (cps Va-reel 1)

date: November 1, 2009

Final Averaged Score From All Judges - 74

The acting was well done, but it didnt sound like they were speaking to eachother because it was a bit monotone. The range was great, because the spanish guy was very well done. THe comic relief guy sounded ridiculous. just as he was supposed to. The chef, however, didnt really match his character. He kept pausing like that guy in star trek lol. It was an original character, I didnt really understand just exactly who he was hehe. I laughed when you kept using the same loop for each character and then immediately switching to another loop that matched the current character talking. Good mixing skills. HOWEVER for some reason each character was either in the right speaker or in the left speaker. This made the listening annoying. You should always make all voices throught the lfet AND right speakers for listening pleasure.

Keep it up, you have great potential! - 74

EDDACHE SAYS:

CartoonplanetStudios
Juio's Folly

Acting = 33
Fit = 24
Originality = 15
Range = 15
Mixing = 9

-96

Comments
This is a peculiar one! The Spanish/Latino voice was fantastic and the doctor's voice was very funny. The comic relief was a bit odd and a little misplaced but overall, this piece was very well done and displayed a good range. Great story, very original and brilliant use of sfx and music with each character having their own theme song. Great work!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

CartoonplanetStudios:
Juio's Folly (cps Va-reel 1)
Acting 19/35
Fit 12/25
Originality 9/15
Range 6/10
Mixing 4/10

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STALAGMITE SAYS:

CartoonplanetStudios:
Juio's Folly (cps Va-reel 1)
Acting - 24/35
Fit - 19/25
Originality - 8/15
Range - 10/15
Mixing - 9/10

70

Nice demonstration of your vocal talents! Love all the voices, ESPECIALLY that damn Spanish one! Just WOW!

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Score: 3

"Voice Acting Contest Final Results! >:)"

submission: Beta Unit

date: November 1, 2009

IMPORTANT: Disqualified for using Microsoft Sam!

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 30

I couldnt tell if you were being serious or not on this. The acting was very bad. it sounded like you just accidently hit record on your computers recording program while reading the voice acting contest thread. So then you decided to half ass your way through some random skit. You kept breathing into the microphone and pausing for unnecessary amounts of time that completely through my attention off of the story. You used microsoft Sam as the robot, which sounded better than your acting. Sorry to be harsh, its just that you really need to put forth more time and effort in this. Take a deep breath AWAY from the microphone, then say the best line you can for the character you are voicing. For this you rushed every line and it sounded crappy. The doctor was alright, I liked his voice. The german ruler sounded alright, the cyborg sounded horrible. The story was decent, I thought it was interesting that the man was being taken over by some strange experiment. You didn't use muffins in the way i was expecting, you just randomly said it. Thats not very original.

If you want to improve, simply take time away from the microphone to develop your characters. Try saying some random lines to yourself in their voice. Practice practice practice the lines. Then when you think you are ready, go up to the mic, and say the line to the best of your abillity. Make sure to turn your head away from the mic when breathing. Good luck. I hope to see another piece in the next contest. -31

EDDACHE SAYS:

Bou1der
Beta Unit

Acting = 15
Fit = 10
Originality = 9
Range = 5
Mixing = 3

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Comments
The acting wasn't great. There were some scenes of drama that could have been done a lot better, such as the "state your directives" scene which just sounded dull, but then other scenes when the main character got angry showed some improvement. The evil scientists voices didn't work very well as I couldn't tell if they were supposed to be comical or serious and the story was quite poor. The use of a machine generated voice was disappointing and possibly against the rules? Regardless, not a great range. The mixing wasn't very good either as there were lots of pauses and moments of silence (i.e. right at the start), some of the sfx were bad and there was a lot of puffing on the microphone proving far too much a distraction. A lot of improvement required but with more practice your skills may improve.

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Bou1der:
Beta Unit
Acting 5/35
Fit 10/25
Originality 5/15
Range 3/10
Mixing 0/10

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Stop breathing in the mic please.

STALAGMITE SAYS:

Bou1der:
Beta Unit
Acting - 8/35
Fit - 3/25
Originality - 5/15
Range - 3/15
Mixing - 6/10

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I sense a potential talent. Its wasn't very fresh or unique, but it was fairly charming and easy to listen too., but if you wanted a Microsoft sam voice you should have impersonated one.

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Score: 6

"Voice Acting Contest Final Results! :S"

submission: In a Cartoonist's Mind

date: October 31, 2009

TOTAL:61 ***FINAL AVERAGED SCORE FROM ALL JUDGES***

LOL. This was a very original idea! I loved the way you implemented the perfect sounding background track with the perfect mood. The idea of a cartoonist going crazy and killing his boss... thats just hilarious man. I listened to this twice and couldnt stop chuckling at the ridiculous mood it set. However, the acting was not very good. You need to pause every time a line is spoken. A lot of the times you immediately switched to another character without pausing, and thus your voice cracked many times and it sounded like you were just talking into a microphone rather than setting up a scene. Either that or the scene was full of guys with stuttering problems. Just take your time with each line, you seem to have good ideas, now just take your time on each line and pause in between each one. Great mixing with the noises. I didnt like the way you used muffins, I was expecting him to barge into the bosses room, point a gun to his head, and say Hey... is that a muffin? If you give me that muffin I uhh... i wont kill youuu... or something crazy like that. Nice story, bad acting. keep it up you have great potential. -69

EDDACHE SAYS:

Zuckyshow
In a Cartoonist's Mind

Acting = 32
Fit = 20
Originality = 13
Range = 10
Mixing = 9

- 84

Comments

There was a good range but there were a few of the creations that really didn't fit very well and jarred, possibly from attempting too many voices. The CEO sounded far too similar to the cartoonist, but the whole piece was very well acted. The cartoonist's voice, which I'm gathering is your natural voice, was fantastically done. I showed a lot of real emotion and I was very impressed. The sfx, music and chanting characters worked very well but there were a lot strange abrupt cuts in the voice clips and music. Great story, but muffins was clearly just forced in, like an after-thought, which a slight disappointment. However, this piece showed some great acting abilities and I can see a lot of potential.

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Zuckyshow:
In A Cartoonist's Mind
Acting 20/35
Fit 12/25
Originality 4/15
Range 3/10
Mixing 2/10
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STALAGMITE SAYS:

Zuckyshow:
In a cartoonists mind
Acting - 11/35
Fit - 12/25
Originality - 11/15
Range - 8/15
Mixing - 8/10

- 50

Where a nice array of characters was used, it somehow lacked personality. Despite that it was overall fairly entertaining.

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