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This would be a great song if you used real huiman vocals rather than mucrosoft sam. HOWEVER, this sounded like a great song with perfectly placed drums and a nice ringing synth in the background. Becasue it sounds like every other song in the Mac 08 July contest, I dont think it will win X C Good luck though.
Author's Response:
microsoft SAM????? Dont know what you talking about...
Anyways, everything I had to say in return is written down on Timmo's funeral (other track) in the reply. Thanks for taking the time anyways to write out a review.
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Because this song is more uplifting with high spirits than sad, it doesnt fit well in the Mac 08 contest. Also, it sounds a lot like the other entries. Stil though, you did and Ok job with this. You inserted the drum sounds in sometimes the wrong places.. and some of the sounds didnt fit very well together... but other than that, it was a nice listen.
Author's Response:
Well eerw thank you for the comment.
Just a little feedback to your words.
Uplifting is the very last vibe this song should give ya, its my own inspiration for a funeral that happens in one of the stories that I am writting. The drums are just a bit offbeat to give it an ambient vibe, for me there are no rules within making music, cause if there where rules, then where is the originality/creativity? I dont care/mind if the song *sounds like* others in the list, for me participating is more value then winning, mostly because I admire the fact that I am able to make so many kinds of different music. Ofcourse there are MUCH better and more skilled people out there, but music that I create, is just for myself at the first place, if other people like it to, its only a little stroke on my creative ego, cause then I know that I did a good job ;).
Keep up the creativity.
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Sorry to say.. no offense or anything but the voice actin made me laugh a bit. If you are going to make a song like thise, you got to have a real child crying or something. It has to be sort of erry. This just sounded.. well corny.
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You are trying to reveal your talent.. but you just composed this terribly dude. The vocals sounded awful and some of the guitar playing was off tune.
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i don't hear the out of tune guitar, maybe a flubbed note somewhere, but i tend to stay in tune when i record.
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The song isnt sad at all so it doesnt fit very well in the Mac 08 contest. I liked the vocals though and the instruments sounded great. Keep it up! :)
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thanks fat kid.
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Just wondering. Oh and I dont think this will win the Mac 08 contest because every other song sounds a lot like this. I have repeated myself through each review I have written on this contest so dont worry lol.. I am not a judge either.
As for the song, it sounded wonderful as all piano songs with violins should sound. Good job. :)
Author's Response:
I used Logic Mainstage to perform the track wit my midi keyboard and I used Wiretap Studio to record the sound back in. I like the sound of it and it being live gives it that "extra" feeling. I do agree with you because there's a lot of entries that sound like this. I do believe that there's a lot of really good entries. It's all in good fun and hopefully we can make a collection or podcast with a bunch of the songs, that'd be fun.
Thanks for the good review, and good luck to you in the contest!
~SinJim
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It had a very mediveal tone to it. The harps and epic sounds made it seem like you were going on a journey on a mountain or something. A good entry into the contest, but because 80% of them sound a lot like this... It might not win. The one to win will probably have vocals in them... and will be very original.
Great song overall though.
Author's Response:
Like I said, this is my first classical song so of course it's not that good lol. Thanks for the review!
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I don't get it.. are you trying to show how we get stuck sometimes in our lives or something? Well, It was alright. The pad wasn't as brilliant as I was expecting... plus the notes werent very well placed. It sounded soothing alright.. but not very good.. a song I would only listen to once. You just need to playsomething better with the same pad.
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Hmm... this was percular song... I think you need to change the way you made this.. it sounded so.. WEIRD. Just because you made a sound come in in very strange timing. Plus, it wasnt very oringinal. Oh well, Thats just me. :D
Author's Response:
hah you weren't the first to say it was strange lol
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This was brilliant... Really it was. I have been trying to compose an ambience song with a beat for a loonng time now. This is the 2nd song I have seen in all the MAc 08 entries that is original. It has a good chance of getting that 100$ prize. Great job. The only error I saw was the flutes that came in, or whatever that instrument was. (Right before the piano, which sounded much better)
Very nice job. A 9 because of some repeatitiveness (if that is a word) and the other errors I mentioned.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice long review. I appreciate it!
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