Score: 7

"Fantastic Art, Awful Plot"

submission: //Necropolis Xenophobe

date: October 12, 2009

ART 11/10

The art was extremely impressive. Every character had lots of high end detail and animation. The backgrounds were great and were enjoyable to look at. I loled at all of the hidden messages like STOP READING THIS haha. The glow effects you used were really nice and didnt lag the video but by just a little bit to where it was barely noticable. The animation design and art is the high of this movie, however the lows are much less impressive.

SOUND 3/10

Good god man you need to mix the sound a bit better for this. There was tons of screeching and popping and buzzing going on in my speakers. To make sure it mwasnt my speakers I switched to headphones. Same thing happened. You need to get better voice actors and turn down the music whenever someone is talking. ESPECIALLY for the girls. The wife of the guy that scream was very painful to the ears. I could barley understand anything she said because every time she talked my speakers popped. The only good voices were romeo and the white guy with weird powers. This mixing problem is very easy to resolve as well. All you need to do is...

1.) GET BETTER VOICE ACTORS! Or at least voice actors with better quality mics.

2.) Mix all the voices together and make sure it sounds good, easy to listen to and good to the ears.

3.) Export it at least at 60KBS, thas a good quality and wont take up that much file size.

PLOT 7/10

The plot was fairly nice but made me go WTF. I didnt udnerstand what the hell was up with the guy having magic powers and the obsessions of the girl with needles... lol. I just recommend making it flow together a bit smoother. It was cool with the whole anarchy concept but it didnt flow to well. Make it understandable by the majority of the public.

Well thats pretty much all i have to say. You have a WONDERFUL animation skill and talent, some of the bes tI have seen on NG. You just need to learn how to mix better and you can hire someone to do that for you hehe.

Hope to see more!

Score: 10

"I laughed so much."

submission: The Disney Collab

date: October 2, 2009

This was so vile and disturbing I couldnt stop laughing. Well done.

Score: 10

"WOH."

submission: Magic School Bus: Grade 5

date: September 26, 2009

Its about time someone made a parody of that show. This was freaking gold lol. Well done. i love how you made arnold a player that was just great.

Score: 10

"And of course"

submission: Life in Portal: Madness

date: September 26, 2009

I laughed my ass off. Sorry i wasnt able to give you the lines aheheeh would have been funny watching my head been blown off. ahahah.

Best yet, great job.

Score: 10

"Lol Made Me Laugh"

submission: An Afternoon Walk

date: September 19, 2009

YOu have some good potential man. Keep a good focus on facial expressions. Great job and thank you very much for animating this. :)

Score: 8

"xD ."

submission: My 1st Flash Animation

date: August 30, 2009

I laughed so much when i heard your voice acting. Great job on this start off for your frame by frame style. I like the sound effects and the music was good. Keep experimenting with little things like this and youll get better and better. And the guy below doesnt know what he was talking about, you didnt use any tweens in this because you dont even know what tweens are hahah. If I were you i would add as much color as possible to your future flashes. I can do some voices for yah as well and help you with any writing, but Tommy is your writer isnt he?

For shooting, you chould have included multiple lazers isntead of just one or two for a better action effect. nice explosion animation, it wasnt too sketchy. And i am not sure how you got this up to 2.9MB... you probably had the sound in a weird format or something, happens all the time.

Keep it up!

Score: 9

"THERE YAH GO!"

submission: ~~Trippy~~

date: August 30, 2009

See there? One of your first animations and your featured on the front page in Tom Fulps newspost. Good job christian, you got some great compliments by two great NG animators in these reviews. I love your frame by frame style and loved the winners dont use drugs hahah.

If you want to compress your movie, here are some useful tips.

__Compression Tips__

1.) Make the audio export quality about 30KBS. This dramatically decreases your file size.

2.) In publish settings, check mark the COMPRESS MOVIE option.

3.) Limit yourself on layers. Dont create a layer for every single movie clip, I usually only user about 3 layers for every movie I have!

4.) If your music doesnt need to be on time with the movie, but just as an ambience then stream it from an outside source. All you do is put some coding in a frame that plays the music from another website, into your swf. It only is 1KB. :) Ill give you the code if you want it.

__Things you can do to improve your movie easy and fast__

FILTERS. Add glowing effects, bevel, gradients, e.t.c to some parts of the movie and you can get some kickass effects that are easy to do. Remember i showed you that red glow effect in school? That took like 3 minutes.

BACKGROUND. Never use a white background unless you really need to. I usually use a nice black background with bright colors ontop. It looks really nice, especially for the frame by frame style you use.

MUSIC. That music kind of sucked hahaha. Choose some really nice ambient music from the NG audio portal. You have so far, but next time choose something you think the majority of the public will enjoy.

COCKS. Put cocks everywhere. Instant front page. :)

Good luck! PM me if you need any help or something.

Score: 10

"Good god."

submission: Telefrancais collab

date: August 23, 2009

That was the trippiest thing i have ever seen.

Score: 10

"Co-Author Xelu"

submission: Xtreme 5 Min Shootemup

date: August 21, 2009

That art was superb, and very original. It is rare to see art that good in games these days. He desrves a co-author so I would strongly recommend coing him. As for the programming, it was superb as well. Hell everything was superb. I loved this game and I was so glad you implemented medals into it. It is juusstt the right length and I loved the simple controls. I always enjoy your style colio, and the music was AWESOME.

Great job.

Score: 9

"Sup Faggot"

submission: Life in the Portal: Clock

date: August 16, 2009

So anyway, I was very pleased with how this turned out and am glad we are working together. Thanks a lot for giving me a chance to write your cartoon! That really means a lot to me. You can never truly find out if someone has a talent until you see them do it. Sometimes in order to do it, you have to let them do it. This was one of those times. I saw flaws in my writing, but since it was my first ever written flash animation I dont give a shit about those flaws. Here is a review... or whatever the kids call it these days, of our work.

Plot 8/10

I felt that the plot was great, but it had some bad weeds to be rooted out of it. For instance, the ending could have been better and more witty. We had to think of something fast and I think the ending settled for what it was, i just wish we could have thought of a more original way to explain the origins of clock day. I also saw that my circle n circle animat, as predicted, dragged on. Of course it was MEANT to drag on since it was his crappy flash and it was MEANt to have bad voice acting and it was MEANT to have bad graphics... people still didnt understand the joke behind it. It was far to vague to be thought of a joke. *thats how the clock crew thinks, and many people do not like the clock crews humor... :/* As for the rest of the writing, I was glad it turned out how it did.

Voice Acting 9/10

I cant really count my voice acting because my voice acting was meant to be god awful, although for some odd reason people enjoyed it LOLZ, so I will judge your acting. I always enjoy the witty and strange nerdy voices you can come up with. I thought you could have put in more emotion into the voices, but all in all each character sounded good and different. Good job!

Animation 10/10

We both know this is easy to do animation, but hell I still enjoy it. That circle n circle thing.. that was hard! Moving those circles up and down on that one grey line takes precision and mad skills... thats why I animated it. HHHAHAHAHAHAHahahahsohohoh. I love your animating skills man, seriously.

FINAL 9/10

All in all, it came out greater than I originally planned. FIRST PLACE MAN?! KICKASS!!! Now lets get on to the next project about that orgy-- OH WAIT IM NOT SUPPOSED TO TELL. :o

Great job, respect all the way. And thanks again.