Score: 5

"Hmm."

submission: Desert dance v 2.0

date: February 19, 2008

It sounded very desertish that is for sure... but you selected the wrong loops to plug in here and there. They didn't sound good when put together. It sounded OK, but this song doesn't deserve any more than a solid 3. It is good at some points, but you simply didn't create the song very well.

You need to go back to the drawing board for this one. When making your songs, make sure it sounds good instead of OK. It needs to sound good to other people as well.

The main reason it didn't sound so good was because of the drums you choose and loops. Just experiment some more and I am sure you will do just fine.

Remember, the best example I can give you of Garageband loops is my song

(::Creation And Its Purpose::)

You can find it easily because it is one of the first songs i ever made.

I hope that helps you. You are just starting out, and could very well be a cool artist.

Cheers!
(I liked the very beginning)

Score: 10

"LOL"

submission: Pico Theme Remix

date: February 15, 2008

Very nice man.

Score: 1

"JESUS!"

submission: Art Of Madness Pt1

date: February 15, 2008

Ow my ears... sorry man, but that just was way too high pitched with to much master volume to listen to.

Score: 10

"LOL"

submission: Most of Newgrounds' techno!

date: February 15, 2008

It is so true. You got some beat skillz!

Lol, you want to be in my next episode of FattyMcpatty and LardyLarLar?

It is about 2 fat guys who fly around with jetpacks eating people. We are on our 7th episode now LOL.

The very last alalalal at the end was hilarious.

Score: 9

"Pretty cool!!!"

submission: Celestial Skies

date: February 15, 2008

I loved the classical style with harps and strings combinations. Something you could really dream to.

It was very nice and swift to the ears.

That major string background you used near 100 was amazing. It went perfectly with the harp. Not all was perfect however... it got fuzzy at 135 or so, and I had to turn it down. Try to correct that, and this would be a 10 song.

Great job!

Score: 3

"Hey man."

submission: Jenova Electric (FF VII)

date: February 15, 2008

The master volume was way too low! You need to turn it up by a lot so people will enjoy the song better.

Score: 8

"lol"

submission: ===RunningOut2===

date: February 15, 2008

The beginning instrumental band instruments sounded really bad. I see you were trying to make it sound intense after that, but wvwerything was just kind of maggled together in a crap pil;e... XD It sounded pretty cool at times... but usually it didn't sound to good with all the generic instruments you used. For this type of song, you should only use synths and trace sounds.

Score: 3

"Oh god... That was really crappy man."

submission: pet's ghost

date: February 15, 2008

You need to turn up the master volume by A LOT. I couldbarely hear a thing. The guitar sounded nice, but I could just hear a little bit of it. Please turn up the matser volume, or all your work will go to waste.

Score: 9

"Cool tune."

submission: Faces of War (Hardcore Remix)

date: February 15, 2008

It was a well done remix overall, but that is the best thing i can say because it wasn't original. What was original is the tracy techno beats you used in place of the original way the song would go like. I liked the beats that came in at 1:00 and then went off smoothly to the nice synth texture tune.

Really cool remix. Nice job!

Score: 7

"Instrumental and Generic."

submission: Turks' Theme (FF VII)

date: February 15, 2008

That guitar that came in at 16 seconds was bitching man. It sounded great to teh generic background beat. Everytime there was a build up, I thought there was going to be something new, another beat, more instruments, ANYTHING. But, you were way to repetitive. It was nice.. but dull and boring. You need to add some synths and dancy styles to it.