Score: 10

"Groove On Baby"

submission: ==(Drifting)==

date: November 25, 2009

So chillax! Its like im just drifting away in the air wearing cool sunglasses, an afro, and Driving a 1970s car. Floating past stars and some colorful blotches of ink in the sky. Then I get to a city in the clouds and drive through it. Its like a trip into the 70s.

Right on! *too bad i never experienced the 70s... or even the 80s cough*

Score: 10

"Im In Love"

submission: Kazmo - The Blue [loop]

date: November 19, 2009

Ive been reviewing your music latley and i have fallen in love with your music. Im glad you are still making it as well. i am planning on putting it in a game I am working on, and I think it might be perfect for it. This is more laid back than most of your songs, but it is very catchy neverless. I can picture this as a menu theme!

Great job and never stop making music.

Score: 9

"Final Results From Voice ACting Contest! :X"

submission: (gaia) va4C 2nd muffin

date: November 2, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 88

Wow. Just like, holy shit. I expected a good submission from you and I see this wasnt a good submission... it was a fantastic submission. Each and every character was acted very very well, and you have about 8 of them. I LOVED the background voices. You are very good with making boy and girl voices. The acting of the main character was hilarious. The hippy cafe goer, terribly awesome. The guys on TV, just fabulous. The jokes, lolable. It wasnt to long and it wasnt to short. The ending could have been a bit less adruptive, but it still was great. You need to go ask people if they need any voice acting because you would be a GREAT addition to the voice acting world. You have loads of talent and this is my favorite submission. Great job, just wow. I expect great things from you. -95

EDDACHE SAYS:

rednikaiaG
va4C 2nd muffin

Acting = 35
Fit = 24
Originality = 15
Range = 15
Mixing = 9

98

Comments
Excellent voice acting. Really superb. The voices fit so well and it's a great display of your range. The sfx were too loud in places which smothered the voices a bit but I loved the use of bg voices during the café scenes, people not involved with the main characters at all but really help populate the scene. The TV section felt a little bit of a cop-out, but what you did with it was really well performed and an original method of using the word, "muffin". It's a double-thumbs-up-latte with extra cream!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

rednikaiaG
(gaia) va4C 2nd muffin
Acting 28/35
Fit 20/25
Originality 12/15
Range 8/10
Mixing 9/10

- 77

STALAGMITE SAYS:

Rednikaiag
VA4 second Muffins-
Acting - 30/35
Fit - 21/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 13/15
Mixing - 10/10
84

A pure gold performance with hilarious characters and a VERY convincingly mixed scene! Improvements? MAKE MOAR!

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!

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Score: 8

"Final Results From Voice ACting Contest! :L"

submission: Snively's Dirty Duty

date: November 2, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 85

LOL. First off, I would like to say that the acting was fantastic. There were very few errors and the characters actually sounded like the ones from the cartoon. That laugh by the chicken robot guy at the end sounded EXACTLY like he does in the cartoon. I could picture the characters very well and laughed at the originality of this piece. You need to go to the nearest music store and buy a nice AT2020 microphone. Or just a good mic. I could tell the mic you used wasnt a very good quality, but you still managed to alter the sound to make it sound good quality so good job on that. I wish that you would have made sound effects of guts falling to the floor when Snigglet was sewing up Sonic, and maybe you could have made the skit a bit more lively by putting in some small background music, but other than that it was fantastic! Great job! - 89

EDDACHE SAYS:

AMTRAX91
Snively's Dirty Duty

Acting = 33
Fit = 25
Originality = 15
Range = 15
Mixing = 9

-97

Comments
Ah yes, The Adventure Of Sonic. Grand memories. It's been a while since I've seen an episode so I can't say how accurate the voices are to the show but regardless: The voice of Snively was absolutely excellent and hilarious. Robotnik was great when in shouty mode, but it slipped in places. There were a few unfortunate pauses in places and it dragged during the taxidermy scene which really hurt the pacing (You're ToOOoo Sloooow! - sorry, couldn't resist!). Also the piece was a little too quiet, but overall, it was excellent work!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

AMTRAX91:
Snively's Dirty Duty
Acting 30/35
Fit 18/25
Originality 12/15
Range 7/15
Mixing 6/10

- 73

STALAGMITE SAYS:

AMTRAX91:
Snively's Dirty Duty
Acting - 27/35
Fit - 22/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 15/15
Mixing - 10/10

-84

although lagging in events in some parts you performed with fantastic diction and very fun personalities

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!

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Score: 3

"Final Results From Voice ACting Contest! :C"

submission: Bacon Beans Jason's VA

date: November 2, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 37

Well, this wasnt taken seriously i see so I wont waste time telling you how to improve. It was funny but.. wasnt really voice acting. It was just you randomly screaming into a mic, laughing to yourself on some lines, not planning a script ahead of time, and noT mixing at all. I did laugh at it though hehE. Bacon Beans? Lmao. -21

EDDACHE SAYS:

TARDOM
Bacon Beans

Acting = 20
Fit = 15
Originality = 10
Range = 7
Mixing = 4

-56

Comments
I downloaded this and listened without reading the description, but I immediately guessed this a one take job. It felt very rushed which was disappointing as there was a lot of energy bursting here which could've been captured better. It was clearly a lot of messing about and sounded like you had fallen out of an episode of Monty Python. The recording quality wasn't great with lots of distortion due to the loud voices and heavy breathing. Well done for adlibbing for two minutes but more planning ahead and effort with the recording quality would've been greatly beneficial.

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Tardom:
Bacon Beans Jason's VA
Acting 15/35
Fit 10/25
Originality 12/15
Range 3/10
Mixing 2/10

- 42

STALAGMITE SAYS:

Tardom:
Bacon Beans Jasons VA
Acting - 9/35
Fit - 7/25
Originality - 5/15
Range - 6/15
Mixing - 4/10

- 31

I LAUGHED SO HARD A LITTLE BIT OF WEE CAME OUT. NOT A JOKE!!!! Now I have to wash my underwears! (and I had a years unwash streak going on those!)

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!

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Score: 7

"Final Results for Voice ACting Contest :U"

submission: Jones Family VA Contest Entry

date: November 1, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 71

First off, this is my second favorite so far out of all the entries, and i have seen almost all of them. I thought it was so funny and cute and the way you purposely sounded like a girl trying to sound like a guy narrator made me laugh. They main thing that you need to work on is the acting. I could tell you were having fun with this lol, so you trailed off and kind of lost the acting in teh characters, They sounded more silly and random than good acting characters. but there were tons of very well done lines that got you some major points. Your a good voice actor when it comes to these cute characters, but you should try to get as INTO the character as possible. I liked the range you had, all of them sounded squeaky and cute but you still managed to make them sound different. I LOVED THE STORY!!! Attack by food? BRILLIANT! Its like that powerpuff girls episode haahah. -86

EDDACHE SAYS:

Jessismith
Jones Family

Acting = 30
Fit = 25
Originality = 15
Range = 10
Mixing = 7

- 82

Comments
This was very well acted with lots of very entertaining characters. The narrator's voice was a bit weak, and there seemed to be a bit of a struggle with Butch's voice. However, the overall piece has whole a lot of charm! The music/sfx was a little loud in places, swamping the characters voices and there were a few pauses which slowed the piece done. But it was well acted and I hope to hear more from this super family!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Stephanie Young (Jessismith):
Jones Family VA Contest Entry
Acting 18/35
Fit 15/25
Originality 12/15
Range 6/10
Mixing 6/10

- 58

Stephanie Young (Jessismith):
Jones family VA contest entry
Acting - 14/35
Fit - 17/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 10/15
Mixing - 9/10

- 60

The cutest performance I have ever heard. However some voices seemed a little forced but overall very funny!

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!!!

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Score: 6

"Final REsults For Voice Acting Contest! :P"

submission: Keepers Of Hell

date: November 1, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 63

Personally, I loved LOVED this. Why? Well, because of the strange mixing that you did where you can barely hear the voices of the characters, and the mix of the strangSo 10 for originallity, but 5 for acting. The guy who woke up didn't sound like he was to freaked out when he said "oh my god". He just said it so forcefully. Plus, the characters talked a bit to dull. They didnt sound like they were really talking, rather that they were being forced to talked by some director. In other words, your forcing your voices to much. Try to think like YOu are the character so that YOU just simple talk like him and like you are really there. the mixing was bad because i couldnt hear the characters to well, make sure to lower the volume on the layer where the music is by about 30%. By the way, that ending where you purposely blew into the microphone and said lalal was just fabulous for the muffin ending. I loved it. -80

EDDACHE SAYS:

Kirbyfemur
Keepers Of Hell

Acting = 15
Fit = 20
Originality = 13
Range = 10
Mixing = 5

63

Comments
The acting was ok, but it was very difficult to understand what the characters were saying. The use of music and sfx was good but at the beginning it was smothering the voices so much it made it even more difficult to hear the characters. I had bit of a hard time understanding what was going on but it was quite an original tale. The voices did fit quite well but it was let down a lot by the lack of clarity.

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Kirbyfemur:
Keepers OF Hell
Acting 21/35
Fit 13/25
Originality 12/15
Range 7/10
Mixing 4/10

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Kirbyfemur:
Keepers of hell
Acting -11/35
Fit - 14/25
Originality - 8/15
Range - 8/15
Mixing - 8/10
A very cute performance with charm and light humour. However, I barely even felt any real emotion or expression...

- 51

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!!!

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Score: 4

"Final Results From Fourth Voice Axting Contest! :D"

submission: Childrens book writer

date: October 30, 2009

TOTAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES: 46

Well first off, the mixing was pretty bad. You didnt include any background sounds other than you saying "flashback" in order to indicate that there was a flashback. That was pretty funny though. The sound quality was bad and it really did hurt my ears. As for the acting, I think you need to come up with your own original characters and work a bit harder on them rather than just making one based off of something that youve seen online. *metal gear* The story was alright, it could have been done a bit better and built upon more but the idea itself was good. I didnt like the way you use muffins though, you should have perhaps had the guy write a childrens story and cleverly end the story with the word MUFFIN instead of just randomly throwing it in there. The range of all the voices was ok, but It sounded like you just did this all in one take and you didnt try and emphasize a different voice for each character. Try taking a deep breath, and recording the first line as best as you can with a character you developed, three or two times. Then choose the best take and repeat with the other lines. Make sure you sound good! Please get abetter mic. That white noise killed me. -65

ECCACHE SAYS

Painted-Gorilla
Childrens book writer

Acting = 27
Fit = 23
Originality = 12
Range = 9
Mixing = 5

TOTAL: 66

Comments
Ow! Loud! Very loud! And slightly distorted, perhaps from being too loud! Acting was good, the angry guy was definitely angry, (I can sense a heavy egoraptor influence there) but the supporting characters were quite weak. Not a great range or mixing but it was well acted and fit pretty nicely.

FORNOREASON SAYS

Painted-Gorilla:
Childrens Book Writer
Acting 12/35
Fit 12/25
Originality 5/15
Range 2/10
Mixing 1/10

-34 ***added 2 points because he only gave a total of 95 not 100***

STALAGMITE SAYS:

Painted-Gorilla:
Childrens book writer
Acting - 12/35
Fit - 12/25
Originality - 3/15
Range - 3/15
Mixing - 7/10

-37

A very loud main character with potential, but a very impractical and uninteresting script. None the less.... FLASHBACK ROFLS!

Score: 10

"LOL"

submission: Dead Wordz

date: October 22, 2009

Man you need to stop rapping llololololol xD

Get smacked like a boxer ahahah dude this stuff is hilarious.

Score: 10

"Amazing..."

submission: The Travel to Polaris

date: October 17, 2009

Its raining over a large mountain. Camera zooms over mountains and trees, it is foggy and hard to see. Suddenly a large tribe is shown dancing around a fire in the rain. They dance and clap and chant while drinking and talking. The party ends and they retire back to their homes. It continues raining. In their sleeps, a spaceship arrives and they wake up to see an alien emerge from the spaceship. An overwhelming feeling of terror and amazement washes over their bodies. The alien says for them to come forth, and they do so.

The tribe boards the ship and the ship floats into the air, then flies off into space from where it came. It flies past stars and planets of all sorts of color. Yellow, red, black, blue, green, violet, pink, every color of the spectrum they see mixed in the universe. Finally the ship enters a blackhole and nothing can be heard. Time slows down and the black hole collapses on itself. The ship is in between time and the universe, reality and fiction, in between dimmensions. The tribe gazes out the window in awe as the black space turns to white. They see a large planet, larger than any of the planets or suns that they passed. The spaceship lands on this planet on a large tree in the middle of a city made entirely out of a forest.

They get out and the alien begins to show them all the wonders the aliens have created. Buildings as tall as mountains made out of trees and roots stand before them, reaching towards the skys. Then it all abruptly ends. They got one small glimpse and then a young boy awakes to stare out into the rain outside his hut. He turns over again and falls asleep.

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Nice pads and beat. Very touching. Great job man.