FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[TechDBump]

Nice!

It was a very original track man. The only thing I recommend doing is changing the synths because they sound very "disturbing" But you looped this well, keep it up man.

DJ-Diceman responds:

true true, ill see what i can do

ehehe, im a poet and didnt know it....... now i must show it

XD

[Ninja in Action]

WOhoh!

FL studio right? No?! My god... you di not make this with FL studio did you? The beat was freaking awesome I'll give you that. You have a talent in that regard. Keep up those beat son! If you ever nees some beat ideas, try listening to some of my music. =) Thanks.

Arthur187 responds:

yes indeed, thats fl studio XD
it was supposed to be a house/techno beat originally, but as i added the strings and the violin it had to be this miamibass-beat^^
i definetly will listen to your tracks, maybe we can even work together lol

[Chillout 808-style]

I am chilled rightr now.

Man! That was a pretty cool beat. When you added that bumb.. bum bum bum sound in with the main synth line, it sounded really cool! And I noticed how you changed the choorrds range with the synth line to so it wouldn't sound to repetitive. Very good job! It is bringing back the 90's for me. =P Well, the only thing I can recommend is trying to asdd some violins there around 2.00 or some sort of major strings beside the very soft one you can barely hear... if you did that, it would still sound really cool even to the end. Just keep on adding stuff instead of bringing back beats.

Arthur187 responds:

yeah i looked for some violins back then when i did the song, but then i didn't had as many vsti's as now, so melodys i came up with sounded like crap^^
maybe i will search for the saved file and add some stuff now (if i ever find it)

[Get yo groove on!]

''''

Notice one thing, you barely have any votes on your songs. If you want to get noticed then you need to RESPOND TO YOUR REVIEWS!!! Well, this beat was perfect and I loved to type to it, somehow it was exactly a my typing speed lol. This beat was perfect to get my groove on. you are certainly bringing back the 80's. Do me a favorplease and tell me what you rhink of some of my stuff. I have some funk in the beginning like (::Groove On::) That you would like. =B

groovatron responds:

i am not sure how responding to the reviews helps but anyway thanks and i will review some of your songs

[a sprinkle of funk]

Crazy Funk!

This was very original on your part as well. I enjoyed the synth you have going there. You added another beat. synth, or changed the song in some way at the most perfect timing. You make good funk, now combine your skills, keep on learning, and make a really tight funk song so I can bring back the 80's! =)

groovatron responds:

thanks youve given a lot of reviews, much apreciated

i really should stop listening to my dad's old tracks though! i spose it's just my style to do 80's

[[Kriz] - Revolution of dreams]

LOL

I gotta ask, is that crowd real?

Kr1z responds:

Naah xD its actually a sample thats like 2 seconds long, repeated all the time, but filtered.
:D

[[Kriz] - Aerox]

*Sigh*

Alright, look: Almost all the FL songs sound alike, they just aren't very original anymore. Even so, they sound really cool and I see how you make them "original" Sadly, the tone you use obviously has been done before. I am not saying it is a bad thing or anything, you just should put some major pads in the background like stars in my song (::Run With Me::) With those stars and complex electronic energy, you could have some really great tunes. Keep it up though! This song is a major accomplishment to be heard in 4 entries! =)

Kr1z responds:

Dude this was like one of my first songs ever..
Im trying!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^^
Thx for the tips, ur right :)

[Kriz: The Beginning]

Chaneg that main beat.

Don't change the way it is, just the tone of it. Like a different drum or something. It was a great trance song, just a litle to simple and I have heard it before. You have a talent, you just need to put forth much effort into combining your techniques. Great job though. 4/5 9/10 for the unoriginality. (Yeah I grade harsh sorry)

Kr1z responds:

ah well, im still learning alot :)
Thx for the tips!

[´Kriz: Reaching For You]

Very Very cool.

Ok, one question. Did you make this usinf FL Studio? And if so, how? I mean, do you play the choords on the synthisizer? Well anyway, it was a really tight trance song but the beat got kind of messed up around 1:01. It was the coolest trance song I have ever heard, great job in that regard. The main techno beat ALMOST didn't go well with the beat so you should tweak that just a little bit to avoid messing up this great song. I might just use it for a game I have. 10/10 for the first (Normally it would be 9 for the tiny mistakes but it is your first which is excellent) 5/5.

Oh and if you have the time, could you review some of my songs? I am going to review some more of your to see what I can find in your music...

Kr1z responds:

Its made with FL Studio 7 :), without a keyboard. All done by software :)
Thx for the 10/10! Means alot coming from you hihi :D
I think the maintechno lead goes pretty well !

Ill check ur songs too :)

Kriz.

[Facing Defeat]

Simple.

It was a very god song, don't get me wrong. It is just that it was a little but to simple. You need some sort of heavy emotinal synth going in the back there. Good job overall!

x-Exodus-X responds:

By a heavy synth, do you mean a stronger bass? The one in this song sucked, i'm definitely working on that! thanks for the review!