FatKidWitAJetPak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[electric eel]

Dedicated Review...

I am trying to do something like this so I mind a well write a very long review for this Flash. First of all I could see you hand drew the Strawberry thing in the pre-loader. How? I want to try to do that. :) And how did you get the sound to fit perfectly with the flash? Those are the only 2 questions I have.

Second, I enjoyed the nice splash effects you used with the blobs of ink. I am going to use that effect for my flash now if you don't mind. :) The music was catchy with it. Third, I loved the flashlight and converse shoe animation! Very nice indeed. You can draw in flash thats for sure. Fourth, I thought the way you made the background color change went very well with the song itself.

ANd now for the bad:

It was very original and all, but It isn't something I would see twice or show to my friends. You need to put some kind of flare in there to get people to want to watch it again. Use different effects like particle actionscripting. (This is where Flash created customized random particles and they move in all kinds of directions. Perfect for music videos.) It got kind of boring after a while because you used the same effects in different ways. (Different colored dot in other words) The only change I saw was the car animation in the beginning, the converse show, the flashlight, and then the end. You repeated the same effect of ink blobs in between each 200 frames or so.

Good luck with your next project!!!

8/10
5/5

Good job for front page.

ArcadeRobot responds:

the strawberry was drawn in photoshop just by using the brushes. I got the song to fit with the flash because on the timeline i set the song to stream, and then i could hearr it as i animated. thanks for the comments i'll take it all into consideration.

[Alien Hominid 2]

Amazing...

Hey I am the head of a major game company and wanted this game on our site. Interested? There will be a 10,000$ payment. I have emailed you further information.

NGxtra responds:

Awesome!

[Charlie the Unicorn 2]

I BOUGHT A SHIRT!@!!!!

CAN I HAVE MY MONEY BACK NOW.

[Edible Castle #5]

uhh.

The graphics are real nice and the voice acting is pretty cool. But it simply isnt that funny.

EdibleCastle responds:

cant win em all

[Mindy Learns a Moral]

AHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

That was hilarious. Great job with your animation skills. WHAT A TWIST!

[Mooselove]

The best one so far!

I am seeing them all from first to last and this is the bets one so far, Great job!

[Fernandohyde]

WHA.

Lol you have improved with your flash skills recently.

This just.. well suck. Well it doesnt SUCK. I just dont like it that much.

[Horseman: Newsreader]

LOL.

I was once in love with a horse... ohh those were the days.

[Chibi Eyes]

WHA?

Wow that was wayyy too predictable. good animating skills but a terrible plot. X |

[Wii love Brawl comedy]

ROFL.

I can't wait till that movie comes out. :3