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FatKidWitAJetPak

Age/Gender: 17, Male
Location: Qrbrbbrlbrll Town
Job: Flipping Flapjacks

Yeah, I like Pancakes... and muffins. I mainly voice act on Newgrounds and people say I do a pretty awesome job too. So if you need any lines at all, feel free to contact me! And the above picture is me... I have a strange growth syndrome. ROOOOAAARRRR!!!

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Score: 8
Panic puppet final

"How to boost up your scores"

submission: Panic puppet final
date: March 26, 2009

USE DIFFERENT INSTRUMENTS

The generic and organic byte sounds you use sound way too annoying and not very pleasant to the ears. Replace every byte noise with real instruments such as pianos, guitars, drums, and you can use some sweet synths and pads if you want.

Try it. The melodies you come up with are pretty cool, you just use the wrong insturments.

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Score: 10
Kazmo - Euphoric [Full 80kbps]

"Wow..."

date: March 23, 2009

I already know this is gonna be good... The intro really counts for keeping people interested in the song. Oh it building up... annnddd... oh god this is freaking sweet progressive music.

March 23, 2009

Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

:P

Funny how you already knew it was gonna be good. ;]

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Score: 10
Heaven's Storm (A->N)

"0_0"

date: March 23, 2009

Wow... this is pro. REAL PRO. every synth and beat is freaking sweet.

March 23, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, man! We've put a whole lot of effort into everything; we're glad you thought it showed.

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Score: 9
WindyCity_TheAir

"OOOhhhh"

submission: WindyCity_TheAir
date: March 23, 2009

The generic bite sounds you used were actually pretty freaking awesome! The wind sound was a nice touch as well. As a remix though, you should put in more sounds and different instruments like the tune in guitar form or piano form. ;)

Put in more drumS!

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Score: 4
VoiceActingContest1{Kilgore}

"''''"

date: March 21, 2009

FINAL JUDGES AVERAGED SCORE

__38__

Well, it seems like you really didnt try for this. It wasnt very good acting at all and the ending just wasnt original. There was only two characters and they both sounded the same. Try to include a longer story with more characters instead of just saying a random 30 second voice clip.

Thanks for entering though. ;) Better luck next time. *Lol whats up with the da dda dum dum da d daaa at the end?*

Dylawrence said:

Suggestions: needs more content, and the characters could seem more real... but the real problem was the story, it needs more depth!

Compliments: fucking awesome punch line!

March 22, 2009

Author's Response:

is that out of 100? whatever. i did actually try, this is just the first time i've ever done anything like this. the "da da dum" part was really the only spur of the moment stuff. i'd like to improve my voice acting and participate in any future contests.

thanks Dylawrence!

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Score: 7
No Homework

"PFFFTTT HAHAHAHAHA!!!"

submission: No Homework
date: March 21, 2009

FINAL SCORES AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES

___65___

Now personally, this was one of my favorites. It was HILARIOUS. I give it a 99 for comedy. However, the voice acting wasnt really VOICE ACTING... it was more like a guy just making up a story like on a radio show or something. There was only 2 people in your story talking so I couldnt really tell if you had any talent in voicing multiple characters. So anyway, thanks a lot for entering. CAUSE THIS MADE MY DAY. It was so funny. xD

Dylawrence said:

Suggestions: maybe have the other characters in his story talk as well, it might've been more enjoyable to actually make it seem like it was happening, instead of a dude talking the whole time (even though it's already been done)

Compliments: For what it is, it's such a good rendition of a kid bullshitting his way out of trouble, and it has nice humor to it

March 21, 2009

Author's Response:

LOL yeah, I did this real quick as soon as I heard about the competition. Next month ill try to rock some faces.

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Score: 9
VA competition.

"LOL!!!!"

submission: VA competition.
date: March 21, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES

___88___

Wow... that... was... TERRIFIC. I laughed at everything in this. And lol are you mentioning me just so ill give you a high score? WELL IT WORKED YOU BASTARD. This acting was waaayyy unexpected. It was VERY good. You do a very well british womans voice! and the gay voice was just too funny. This was the most original one so far, thats for sure.

YES

Dylawrence said:

Suggestions: some of the sound effects sound a little out of place, and could be a little cleaner.
Compliments: I LOVE how you made fun of the same contest you're entering, and it's entertaining the entire 9ish minutes. You're definitely winning something I hope!

sirjeffofshort said:

(Personal note: as a writer this was my favorite entry, if this were a writing competition he would have had my top vote no problem haha, just felt the others had a better show of range and fit)

March 21, 2009

Author's Response:

i am so pleased you enjoyed this LOL. i was really worried that it sucked the big one. i am really pleased that i got third place though. i was sure there where much better ones than this. but i am not complaining! the sound effects where done using a keyboard. because i had no programmes or anything. everything was done via the keyboard. and the sound effects where applied to the original instruments via reaper. and OMG lol, the gay voice? i didnt intentionally do any gay voices! hahaha!
if you mean the main character it is the voice of the kitty in my puppet show.

I certainly didnt mind making fun of the contest. it was all in good humour, and i felt it could relate to everyone juding and entering. i certainly plan on making all my entries as interesting as possible! and i will certainly try to improve my range and effects though. i appreciate everyones constructive criticisms, and evryones input. and thanks Fat kid! you rock. :D:D:D

3rd place! yayness! horay!

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Score: 10
VA Comp - General-Ivan Part 2

"Wow this was just TERRIBLE."

date: March 21, 2009

Yeah I would have said that if I was drunk and high on 5 different drugs at the same time. ;)

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM JUDGES

___92___

I was sitting in my chair when all of a sudden a vortex opened up on my computer and pulled me into some amazing world where women come to YOU for sex, pudding grows on trees, and rivers of pepsi are scattered across a land filled with rainbows and gigantic spiraling towers. Yeah thats your voice acting. It was.. just AMAZING. Every person sounded gorgeous and the acting was perfect with only few minimalist errors. Each voice sounded completely different from eachother. The story sent a shiver of excitement up my back. By the way the ending made me fall out of my chair laughing.

Damnnn niiiga.

Dylawrence says:

Suggestions: some of the sound effects sound a little out of place, and could be a little cleaner.

Compliments: I LOVE how you made fun of the same contest you're entering, and it's entertaining the entire 9ish minutes. You're definitely winning something I hope!

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Score: 10
VA Comp - General-Ivan Part 1

"''''"

date: March 21, 2009

''''

Oh My God... see your second part for the final review.

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Score: 9
VA Competition- Shockdingo

"HOLY CHEESE STICKS"

date: March 21, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES

___88___

DAMN. This was really good! I was NOT expecting something like this! You did very well in making each charecter sounding different! THe acting was VERy good as well. The only thing that made the score lower from each judge was the fact that you had a sort of monotone thing going on. Each voice was too stressed. Relax a little while doing them! Put in some evil laugh every now and then to spicen up it a bit if you cant get away from that monotone. OH AND THIS ACTUALLY SOUNDS LIKE A MOVIE LOL. Very original!

Dylawrence said:

Suggestions: the pacing seems a little slow at times, and if it's a trailer then it should be faster paced!

Compliments: cool story man! The music choice is excellent, and I'd like to see the real movie!

Timmy said:

Noodles

March 21, 2009

Author's Response:

Hi there,
Thanks a lot for review, I appreciate it. :) I'll take your suggestions to heart for the future. Thanks and have a nice day!

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