FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[lollypop licker]

Ouch my ears!

Ehh... Ok look, not to be rude, but I did not like the beat AT ALL. You need to cut out that swishing noise in the background and it would sound a whole lot better. It was a bit repetitive, and some sounds randomly appear and dissapear at times past 1 minute. I did like the loop you used in 125, but that is about it. Sorry, but I have to vote a 1 on this. Try again, and I am sure you will do better next time.

savoytruffle responds:

yeah, I think I'll fix that

[8bit - Feliz Navidad/Crank Dat]

8 bit ehh?

VERY NICE FOR THE 8-BIT CONTEST!!! I would enter, but sadly I can not create such music. But I LOVED the Spanish music yo. Hahah, I didn't notice it was Spanish until half way into the song. Well, besides being a little bit too simple, it was a very good song. Congrats!

endlessnumber responds:

*thanks*
I'll try to look at some of your stoof this weekend

[~Goodbye~]

What the hell...

OH MY GOD. This is a coincidence I am sure, but you created a song for the same purpose I created my song called (::Goodbye::) Lol, check it out and you will see what I mean. Well, goo djob in playing it all on your own, but I really didn't like the style. It seems to have a good score, however, so I will give you that. =)

Cosmos8942 responds:

Hmm...its because this style is different from the either 'Calm and collective, or Chaotic and Messy' style that is normally heard on a piano, or any song in general. The ups and downs, along with the higher pitched notes combined with the lower pitched ones shortly after tend to create a symphony few can truly enjoy. But look past those quirks and listen with your heart my friend, then you will feel the music, for listening is only part or what should be done.

-AJ-

Thanks though, reviews are always appreciated ^^.

[The Morning After]

Hmm...

FREAKING AWESOME. Would the game happen to be Chrono Trigger? It sounds like it... Great job! Though, you should probably be a little more creative, which I am sure you are going to do, and create songs by yourself rather than create one that has already been done before.

Cosmos8942 responds:

Thanks for the "FREAKING AWESOME." O.o.

No it is not Chrono Trigger XD...in fact, you are not even close .____....anyhow!

I am working on creating more of my own stuff (check out my Fleeting Times Final(?), which was my own). Slowly I am gaining the level where creating something like previously mentioned isn't so damn hard I need to be having a REALLY REALLY good frigg'n day.

Thanks again :),
-AJ-

[freestyle track]

Interesting.

The beat was very hip-hopish. You should have put in a synth in there to change it to an even better song. Well actually, it wasn't a song at all. It was more of a constant and non changing beat. Try mixing it up a little. Good for a lopp however.

Klassykilla responds:

iight man i appreciate the love. its just a lil beat to freestyle too. thinking bout makin it a full beat though.

KK

[Dreamy |Final|]

Great!

I have noticed that ALL of the FL studio songs sound alike... well anyway, it was a very nice beat and I enjoyed the way you brought it out. I didn't see any thing that you needed to change, except try to be a bit more creative next time. Keep it up!.

proshot responds:

Yeah, it can get a little boring. I'll do better on making effects and stuff sooner or later. Thx for the review! :]

[Chaotic Angel]

Ok, heres a few tip.

One, turn down the very begginning drum down just a tad bit. It was a very original track, and you choose the perfect title for this song. But, the main thing you need to do is add different types of synths and not just that one. You also did a good job in looping the track I noticed. Good job al in all.

Phiya responds:

thanx for the tips

[HFB! Finished and Remastered]

FRAKING AWESOME.

That was fantastic, the piano combined with the synth and heavy industrial sounds. Very good.

DomesticTerrorist responds:

I appreciate it man, glad it turned out alright :D

[Clear Cut]

That WAS weird.

I loved the slow... steady intro you used. And I liked it how you kept on adding beats and things. It needed some more synth to it you know? It got a little annoying. But it was pretty cool.

liasmen responds:

Thanks for the review. Bear in mind that this is one of the first songs I ever made and that I have submitted different versions.

[Bossa Loop 1]

Good!

It was perfect for a loop. I might use it!

liasmen responds:

Thank you so much for all of your reviews!