Woo!
Your best yet! I loved that tune that you used... and the synths you used with it. Just a little bit repetitive... that is the only error In saw! Great job for your efforts. My songs are just like yours you know... SERIOUSLY REVIEW SOME OF THEM!! =p
Thx lol,even though I can't understand why people like this one more than my others lol.
Very cool!
Good job, it sounded great. The only thing I recomend to changing this song into something great is putting in some violins or synth pads. But everything else you did very good on. My songs are basically like this one but all are different from eachother. If tyou want ideas, just have a look at some of my songs if you want. Thanks man, glad to help.
Thx for the review,no thx for the tips. It's nothing personal,it's just that I dont have any background in music,I never had any lessons related to music so listening to your music won't help me much ^^
what can I say,I'm an ammature xD
Ok.
All your songs have noise! People HATE noise!!! It did not sound at all great with all that edgyness and noise in the background! Turn it DOoowwwwwnnn... Try listening to my songs. They are all techno or ambient and i also have some funk and drum n bass. I'm not sure what you would like... but try reviewing some like I did yours. I try to help people man and you need help by turning down the edgyness and having mor eharmony and beat in your tunes.
Alright i'll put this out right now... Edgy, what do you mean? I can't get rid of it if I don't know what you mean by edgy! And yes i know about the whole noise thing and people hating it, I can't until i get a new chord (which is causing it) and i don't know when i can get it. I will turn it down, but i don't see how that'll help. I'll als o review some of your stuff, though i'm only really into Metal and hard rock.
Oh I get it.
Look, I understand what your trying to do, but being symbolic doesn't mean it can't be a "song" It is far to edgy. You need to turn the electric guitar into something more calm yet angry... like a synthisizer or something. I am trying to make a song like this right now in fact...
Yeah, i got it a bit fixed. I still need a new chord. I'll work on not making it as edgy.
Woh!
Very nice! I liked your theme! The only thing I reccomend is making it less edgy. That will make the song far more enjoyable.
Describe to me "less edgy" first then i will try to make it better.
Very good for your first one!
Yes, I think you are getting the basic idea of "techno" Add some piano here and there, some harmony type stuff, and different beats. Oh and NEVER be repetitive. Not many like repetitive techno songs. If you want an example, try listening to some of my songs. I have plenty that would give you ideas like (::Groove On::) and (::Let Me Explain...::) Those are the main ones. Keep it up! AND MAKE SURE TO RESPOND TO YOUR REVIEWS!!! PEOPLE HATE IT WHEN ARTISTS DONT RESPOND! IF YOU DON'T KNOW HOW, CONTACT ME. Thanks.
Woah, f'real man, thanks.
I'll contact you if I'll need some support...
What software are you using for making music?
Wow.
Very cool. Man, I love ALL your stuff! You have a talent for composing and should consider making a production. =)
Thanks a lot!
I've been getting really nice compliments like this via the PM system and reviews like yours, and I've got to admit, it's starting to make me think I should try to make it.
That said, I'm not particularly fond of this song... I got a little sick of it after I made it :P
Holy crap...
That was the best beat I have heard in a LONG time. Very, very cool. I love this song. Oh and I raised your score 2 POINTS. Oh yeah.
Very Catchy!
Loved it. I only saw that you needed to add something BIG in there besides soft notes. You know what I mean? Even if it is Ambeint, this one had a beat, which means it needs a big lead instrument. Like a star synthesizer or something. But the beat makes this song amazing. Mainly the one that comes in around 1:40. Keep up your nice songs man, You sound a lot like me, but with a lot more talent. You think you could check out some of my songs like (::Across the Planet::) (::FLying Down To The Shadows::) and (::Flowing Through Space::) ? Thanks. I'll review some more of your songs.
Thanks for the compliments. I'm glad you've taken an interest in my music. I dropped a review on one of your songs.
Garageband?
I am just wondering... you use garageband?
Well... this song was VERY VERY good. I am not sure why it doesn't have that many votes... but you know it is on the top of the drum n bass list? This is what I was talking about when adding to your songs. Add things like THIS. Great job, and jkeep it up. like I said before, try listening to some of my songs please.
I dont use garage band....as i said in my other submissions (im not sure about this one) i use a KORG EMX-1 Electribe groovebox with all the parts origionally created by me. I Write all my own songs and i create all my own loops and beats from scratch. Thanks so much for the feed back! Like your stuff but try to move awway from garage band loops bacause there is much more out there that you can do with electronic music beside move around loops! Its very fun to create electronic music live (like i do with my songs) so i would highly suggest an EMX-1 Electribe if you want to try somthing new!
Oh, hello there. I guess you want to know who I am. I mainly create ambient music and voice act here on NG. Occasionally youll see me produce some silly animation or game. If you want to chat or something, send me a spanky danky PM. *Sig by Magical-Zorse*
Age 32, Male
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Little Rock, AR
Joined on 7/28/07
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