FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Forest Choir]

Lol

A wood elf? Ahahah... Well anyway, I liked the song mainly because it is my style, you did a good job with the beat and synth combination, but it needed to be a little louder and have more complexitry. But it was a good song overall, so I gave you an 8. =) Keep it up!!

[For now]

Cool!!

It was only a little annoying though because of the synths you used. I thought it was cool though just because it was very original. Though, it was WAY to edgy and it hurt my ears a little. Do more harmonizing!!

[Journey into the unknown]

I actually liked it...

I don't know WHY your scores are so bad! If liked the way the sound switched from the left and right speakers. The only thing that I saw that needed chanthey vote low, shouldn't they tell why? Lol. Well, I liked how the sound switched from the left and right speakers. The only thing that I saw needing of change is less repetivity. Everything else was pretty good. Keep it up! =)

[Example I - Dream]

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Your songs are absolutley perfect... really. I can't type anymore.

Adam-Beilgard responds:

Lol, I'm running out of responses as well - thanks!

[Improvisation Number One]

Strikes feeling up my spine...

It is kind of funny... this brought tears to my eyes. (That's an oxy moron...) Well... I ahve been through rough times recently and... it ALMOST wanted me to just go and... die. It was that overwhelming. You do have a good artistic talent when it comes to music. Me, I just make all my songs with a piano synthesizer and play them! This is actually music!! I don't know how you come up with the ideas either... Well if you excuse me, I am going to go think for a while.

Peace.

Adam-Beilgard responds:

I'm sorry to hear that, hang in there.

This particular piece was inspired by the sparse Japanese Togaku Theatre. The flute you hear playing 'bass' pedals is supposed to be like the Ryu teki. My saxophone like a Shakuhachi flute and the guitar like their Biwa. So basically I ge tmy ideas from me ecclectic exposure to music!

I'm glad you liked it and I really do hope you feel better.

[Example II - A Hero Found]

Damn...

That was overwhelming, especially because you actually PLAY the instruments. Good job!! Oh and yes, I am being completly honest. I tried looking for failure, but there just wasn't any!!! Well, try less harder next time! '=C

Adam-Beilgard responds:

Thanks for all the reviews, I'm glad you like these. Unfortunately I won't stop trying. That doesn't mean everything will come up roses, but it gives you something to look forward to, I guess.

[Bittersweet Dusk]

Really Cool.

You know, we need more people like you here at newgrounds. Seriously. Most people here ar eimmature little kids! Well, you should find a better site, if you don't already have one, than newgrounds. You could even get some money out of it. Well, good luck. I gave it an 8 because the piano in the background needed to be changed to a different kind of piano, just a little bit lower. Like a bass.

Adam-Beilgard responds:

Oh, I'm plenty immature 8p! But I like NG, and I don't mind sharing my music (if I did come up with a million dollar song, I probably wouldn't post it, but until then....).

Right now I kept it piano and guitar because I'm in my "less is more" stage. Soon I'll be back to my "what new sound can i come up with?" stage and all will be well with the world.

Thanks for the review!

[Lullabye]

Hmm?

Hey great job! So the contest was for the way it was brought out? Or was it for the originallity? I really did love the poem/lullabye. Good job! I should try to enter contests of some sort on newgrounds... I hope it has a cash prize like this one did. Keep it up!! The only thing I saw that needed work on was your voice. It was really good, but try to work on every little part of your voice if you know what I mean.

Adam-Beilgard responds:

You know, I think originality was mentioned, all I remember was seeing a lullabye contest, lol! Unfortunately I don't know what you mean, but I'm always trying to get better, so I guess it'll fall under that category.

Let me know if you do decide to enter a contest, I'd love to hear your stuff (there's a Monthly Audio Contest on now - check the AP).

I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the review!

[(OLD) Life in a Breakdown]

really really GOOD.

I gave a 5 as soon as I turned this on!! Man, I love all your songs, there so awesome!! This one was Hip instead of Technoush though. Whatever that means |=P

[A Simple Manipulation]

Awesome!

That beat was better than I expected! You really put it together well with everything else, good job!! Especially the drums and synth. HEY RESPOND TO YOUR REVIEWS MAN!!!! IF YOU DON'T KNOW HOW, JUST CONTACT ME!

xBrainchild responds:

I haven't checked reviews for my older songs in a long time, thanks so much for the input though. I really liked the dub beat in this song, I'm glad it caught some other ears too =D