FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Carf - The Funeral (classic)]

uplifting really.

Because this song is more uplifting with high spirits than sad, it doesnt fit well in the Mac 08 contest. Also, it sounds a lot like the other entries. Stil though, you did and Ok job with this. You inserted the drum sounds in sometimes the wrong places.. and some of the sounds didnt fit very well together... but other than that, it was a nice listen.

Carf responds:

Well eerw thank you for the comment.

Just a little feedback to your words.
Uplifting is the very last vibe this song should give ya, its my own inspiration for a funeral that happens in one of the stories that I am writting. The drums are just a bit offbeat to give it an ambient vibe, for me there are no rules within making music, cause if there where rules, then where is the originality/creativity? I dont care/mind if the song *sounds like* others in the list, for me participating is more value then winning, mostly because I admire the fact that I am able to make so many kinds of different music. Ofcourse there are MUCH better and more skilled people out there, but music that I create, is just for myself at the first place, if other people like it to, its only a little stroke on my creative ego, cause then I know that I did a good job ;).

Keep up the creativity.

[Everyone Cries]

UHH.

Sorry to say.. no offense or anything but the voice actin made me laugh a bit. If you are going to make a song like thise, you got to have a real child crying or something. It has to be sort of erry. This just sounded.. well corny.

[less human]

Eck!

You are trying to reveal your talent.. but you just composed this terribly dude. The vocals sounded awful and some of the guitar playing was off tune.

takethatsubspace responds:

i don't hear the out of tune guitar, maybe a flubbed note somewhere, but i tend to stay in tune when i record.

[vapor/pressure relations]

NOt very sad but a good song.

The song isnt sad at all so it doesnt fit very well in the Mac 08 contest. I liked the vocals though and the instruments sounded great. Keep it up! :)

takethatsubspace responds:

thanks fat kid.

[Mac8 - Emerging From Solitude]

How did you record this?

Just wondering. Oh and I dont think this will win the Mac 08 contest because every other song sounds a lot like this. I have repeated myself through each review I have written on this contest so dont worry lol.. I am not a judge either.

As for the song, it sounded wonderful as all piano songs with violins should sound. Good job. :)

SinJim responds:

I used Logic Mainstage to perform the track wit my midi keyboard and I used Wiretap Studio to record the sound back in. I like the sound of it and it being live gives it that "extra" feeling. I do agree with you because there's a lot of entries that sound like this. I do believe that there's a lot of really good entries. It's all in good fun and hopefully we can make a collection or podcast with a bunch of the songs, that'd be fun.

Thanks for the good review, and good luck to you in the contest!

~SinJim

[[DG] -Fallen Hero-]

Hmm.

It had a very mediveal tone to it. The harps and epic sounds made it seem like you were going on a journey on a mountain or something. A good entry into the contest, but because 80% of them sound a lot like this... It might not win. The one to win will probably have vocals in them... and will be very original.

Great song overall though.

DzGuy responds:

Like I said, this is my first classical song so of course it's not that good lol. Thanks for the review!

[Falling Into You]

Not soothing at all.

This song had WAYYYY MORE techno and trance beats that a soothing song can have. The Mac 08 July contest is to see who has the sadest song.. not the best. I liked the song, but it wasnt sad at all lol.

DaGrahamCraka responds:

you know sad doesnt mean soothing. dont be stupid. fucking piece of shit.

[{I Still Love You} 2]

COOL.

This was an excellent song with a nice beat and nice piano rhythm. This was very uplifting rather than sad though. It simply doesn't fit the Mac 08 July category. i mean.. lol, you included a heavy synth bass near the end with percussion and took the piano off completely. :D

Not a good song for the Mac 08 contest... since it doesnt fit the category.. BUT A FANTASTIC SONG OVERALL!!! Great job and keep up the nice work with your DJ skills.

I'm impresed. |:) This is something I would hear on a trance radio station. YOU MUST OF STOLEN THIS LOL. WOOTBBQ!!!

dj-skeetskeet-69 responds:

thx 4 rvw =)

[Calling Out (MAC8 - July)]

ACK!

Woh man... start all over with this song. For one, the choice of instruments were very bad... Even the notes were off tune. Sorry dude.. you just need to delete this song entirely and start all over. We all make mistakes.. even the big ones.

kjhf responds:

"Even the notes are offtune" I was kinda aiming for this, with dissonance in mind. It's meant to be a hard hitting sorrowful piece, not a piece that you go - "Well, that was nice."

[Dreams (Piano version)]

0_0

Holy cow. YOU HAVE ANOTHER ENTRY!? You ARE going to get 100$ my friend in the Mac 08 July contest. Mainly because it is ORIGINAL!!!!!!

*When I say ARE, I do not decide this opk.. heh if i did, i would give it to you.*

Naitzmic responds:

lol, thanks.
I really appreciate it.