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OH NOES.

You started using Garageband when you made this song, I could tell. I liked thye way you used all the loops. I LOVED the way you used the alien sounds in each speaker. Right, then left, the right again. It was very cool, even for a first song.

Keep it u!

Xth responds:

Yes that was the 1st and last time i used appleloops. Ok i still use some of the drums. It's me on the guitars (rhythm+lead) though! And the HAH! Thanks man!

Dear mercuful lord... NOT ANOTHER ROCK SONG!

Lol, I liked the smoothness in this song. You need some sort of kick in there though, because it became repetitive.

ANd now I know you use Garageband... Very nice. I couldn't figure out if you made it in there or not!!! That is hard to do!

Great job, keep it up. :P

Xth responds:

Oh my GODt! NOT ANOTHER ROCK SONG REVIEW!

I don't know why people hate gb. It's really simple if you have to record an actual guitar and it has some decent effects. I'm not using any of the built in samples. Only some drums (i'm a guitarist!) and in another submission (viking song) two of its loops. Thanks once more!

Garageband?

The very first part sounded like it was used in Garageband. Great job for the high score! I liked the tune itself, along with everything else. BUT!!!, you need to turn up the master volume a bit. That would make this song an extremly good song. You have complexity in your songs, which is a rareity here at Newgrounds. Keep up your nice string essemble. :)

Xth responds:

No it's all me. I'm doing my guitar recording/editing in gb because is simple. I write my midi parts (drums,strings etc) note by note on Cakewalk Express (which is terribly old, but I'm used to it). Thanks for reviewing!

Nice orchestra.

I liked the combination of strings and drums. I still haven't been able to figure out how to create an "epic" style of a song. The only thing I recommend is boosting up that volume a bit!!!

Xth responds:

Thanks. Yes, all my submissions have the volume issue. When I'm editing I wear headphones and maybe this is the cause. :-) Next time... Thanks again!

Well I don't know...

I liked the tune, but the big heavy beat was kind of fuzzy in my speakers. The switch from low to high frequencies was kind of annoying and should have been left off at most parts. It was also a bit repetitive. Also, why does this belong in the goth section lol? Shouldn't it go into the industriaa section or somethi9ng? Well, it is to late to change it because it is featured in two games. Good job, keep it up.

Dj-Fanta5t1c responds:

its darker techno, and goth gets no popularity. i wanted to just put soemthing in there that rocks hard and get some more people looking into that type of music.

TURN THAT MAIN BEAT DOWN!

Everything sounded great, except for the main beat. It was way to loud. All you need to do is turn it down man!

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thanks, ill work on it

Good but boring.

It had some good potential with the instruments, but it needed a little kick here and there. I loved the soothing ambient tune and electric deep pads, but I was hoping for some sort of intense NON-DEEP pad and beats. You need to plug in a synth here and there. Good job though!

Don't start it out with those scarching noises.

Was some of those lines from Macbeth? Lol, I liked the nuclear talk. it well with the tune. The beat was composed very well along with the synths and bass together in sync. However, near 1:25, you needed a heavy synth and beat that goes with the tempo. I see you started that out later, but you needed it to start out sooner in order to grab peoples attentions and stop listening to the song.

Keep it up though man, I loved the beat.

Lol, nice.

I was wondering why it was called that.. and then I knew. I see where you were going with this, and it soudned godat first. But, the vocals didn't go well with the beat all that well. You need to have the vocals go well with the beat in order for this song to get best of the week.

Keep it up, and I hope you finish this piece.

heather-lanham responds:

^_^ Thanks! I'll keep working on it.

I agree with the user below me.

Is what I would say if I were a complete moron. I liked it, it was very original, and had some nice guitar sounds in it. Good job.

zoke2556 responds:

Thanks! Glau u liked it.

Oh, hello there. I guess you want to know who I am. I mainly create ambient music and voice act here on NG. Occasionally youll see me produce some silly animation or game. If you want to chat or something, send me a spanky danky PM. *Sig by Magical-Zorse*

Age 33, Male

Apple & Entrepreneur

Whats a... school?

Little Rock, AR

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