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[Crazy Dave - NG Audio Contest]

__Voice Acting Competition Detailed Review__

Final Averaged Score From Judges - 96 O_O Woh.
*He gave the judged blowjobs apparently. I was NOT informed about this. >:(*

HAHAAHAH!! Ok this is the funniest one I have ever heard.. ever. I laughed REALLY loud.. I think I woke some people up in my house. The plot was just brilliant. Truly hilarious. I was impressed with the multiple array of voice you had going on there! LOL BATMAN. I can't express enough how funny this is.

The fact that you made all of those sound effects with your mouth was CRAZY. Your better than me at this! The only thing that I saw as a problem was the heart rate you made. You should have turned that down a little bit so I could hear the people talk clearer. everything else was FANTASTIC. Keep it up man!

Dylawrence said:

Acting: 32/35
Fit: 23/25
Originality: 14/15
Range: 15/15
Mix: 9/10

Total: 93/10

Great Impressions man! Such good mental images pop up in my head that it's like I watched a flash, instead of listened to an audio submission..

AND

-TingTonger- ***favorite for sirjeffofshort***

^%u2028This was one of the most impressive things I've ever heard... for reals

BigRed responds:

Thanks a lot man! The positivity is making me smile! Now, in regards to the heart rate, I'm planning on animating a video for this, and in that scene I imagined Crazy Dave acting as the heart machine making the beeping noises. So when it's a video that beep will be an integral part of a joke! :D

Thanks again for organizing the VA contest!

[Papa Johns Commercial Par]

__Voice Acting Competition Detailed Review__

Averaged Score From All Judges - 80

LMAO. That wolverine part was HILARIOUS. I see you tried to make a radio talk effect with your hands, but you kind of failed lol. If you want to make a radio effect without altering it, make a funnel with your hands and make your voice a tiny bit high pitched. It works every time.

The acting was good... but not great. You breathed too much at the end of each pause. In order to get rid of that breathing white noise, turn away from the mic very quickly, breath, and turn back in. You also didnt sound too much like you were the charecter. Each voice sounded different, but each one had that same crazyass feel to them. Just have some people sound more serious than others.

Oh and also, the explosion at the end matched the plot actually lol. Not very many have so far. xP Great job on this, you are a good voice actor.

Dylawrence said:

Acting: 28/35
Fit: 22/25
Originality: 10/15
Range: 14/15
Mix: 8/10

Total: 82/100

Holy shit that was good! I think I enjoyed this one the most, but parodies aren't too original, even though the execution was so badass!
It would've sounded a lot more "marketable" if you added some sound effects, and music. (Favorite part was the sound of the claws coming out, "SNIGIT! SNIGIT!")

ForNoReason responds:

Thanks for the advice and the compliments! Ill take all this and use it in the future.

[Gunopolis]

__Voice Acting Competition Detailed Review__

Average Score From All Judges - 92

Ok this was my favorite out of the entire bunch because it was fucking hysterical. Every joke was so original and I found myself laughing sooo hard at the end just because your charecters somehow build up to add suspense and make the anti-climatic ending hilarious. I expected a better explosion, but I think you did that on purpose for the reason mentioned in the last sentence.

Anyway, I was VERY impressed with how you managed to make each person sounded COMPLETELY DIFFERENT FROM EACHOTHER. The nerd, the big guy, the narrator, the evil guy, and the others. Just wow man. Just wow! I actually had chills down my spine waiting for what was going to happen near the end. I thought I was really there. I could see it in my mind very clearly because of the professional cinematic sounds you used.

No improvement here. You dont have a 100 simply because of very minor acting errors, but minor errors occur in almost every voice acting piece.

RESIDENT EVIL REFERENCE HAH. Poor performance indeed Chris...

Dylawrence said:

Acting: 33/35
Fit: 25/25
Originality: 11/15
Range: 15/15
Mix: 10/10

Total: 94/100

It was fun to hear so many different voices, even though the whole trailer approach to story telling has been done so many times, you still pulled it off to keep the listeners interested.

[Story time with Grandma]

__Voice Acting Competition Detailed Review__

Final Average Score From All The Judges - 77

The voices all sounded very clear and the mixing was good... but the acting was very dull and didnt show any enthusiasm at all. Each cry of emotion such as the scream near the end sounded completely fake while sounding monotone as well. You did an alright job with making different voices, but half the time I couldnt tell who was talking because the 80 year old woman sounded just like the young hot 30 year old. You should have also included a sort of soundtrack in the background like birds chirping, battle music playing, e.t.c. That would have spicened up things a bit. I mean... if your going to have a serious dramatic voice skit, you need dramatic cinematicts and dramatic acting. This was just too dry.

So the main thing you need to work on is acting! Everything sounds good and you seem to know how to record things correctly without having any white noise, but even so your acting is much more important than that. So try to improve on BEING the charectecter! THINK like an old woman, THINK like a little boy, and THINK like a homicidal maniac on the verge of destroying everyone he ever knew.

Dylawrence said:

Acting: 31/35
Fit: 23/25
Originality: 12/15
Range: 14/15
Mix: 6/10

Total: 86/100

It's always nice to hear one that's not totally dependent on comedy. The story seemed a little generic, but the way it was told saved it...
It's not often, but at times I could tell you were just acting, and I didn't really feel the story come to life, but it was a good listen nonetheless.

[Voice Acting Contest Entry]

__Voice Acting Competition Detailed Review__

Final Score Averaged From All Judges - 66

***Low score because you used another persons voice... DISQUALIFIED***

I just want you to know that we looked past the bad quality that this was in, and into the acting of your voice. You NEED to get a podcasting microphone man, because that acting was terrific. That announcer in the beginning? WOW!!! It sounded just like an old radio announcer! Oh wait a minute.. IT WAS. >:( Thats a huge no no man. A huge no no. Each voice fit each character very well and my personal favorite was the hippie hah. You do need to voice act for other people though, you have a great voice.

The thing that bothered me with this was the music. The loop would have been fine without the large synth that draws out your voice to where I couldnt hear it. I really liked the way you transitioned the audio from you working on thinking, to actually performing a propaganda thing. In other words, the idea of playing that guitar to suiting your propaganda announcement worked very well.

Another flaw was the plot. It didnt make much sense mainly because of the explosion. You should have made it.. well make more sense hah.

Acting: 28/35
Fit: 21/25
Originality: 13/15
Range: 13/15
Mix: 7/10
-5 points for using someone else's voice (if taken out, it would be under 4 min)
Total: 77/100

It's different from the others, and it has some good ideas... but also has some flaws.
The explosion doesn't really fit well with the story, the music was a little too loud, (and the biggie) YOU USED SOMEONE ELSE'S VOICE!!! Shame shame.

[The Terminators Bad Day (VA)]

__Voice Acting Competition Detailed Review__

Final Score Averaged From All Judges - 90

LOL. That was great! Your range was supreme and each charecter sounded hilarious, especially the old farts you put in this fine piece. i was surprised that you actually sounded like the terminator! Thats a difficult voice to pull off... really difficult. Plus the plot was great lol! Each conversation had me laughing with all of the wity comebacks each person had to offer. GAY RAPE? That was brilliant!

The only thing that seemed to put you down a couple of points was the acting. It was still very good because it suited the comical style of the audio, however it was a little bit too monotone. The terminator is supposed to sound like that, but the other charecters should of sounded a little bit higher and lower hen you acted them. Just try to increase the variety in your notes when speaking.

GOOD JOB BUDDY!

Stalagmite responds:

thanks dude! awesome to the max lol. i certainly do love the old farts having alot of experience with the ELDERLY! DUN DUN DAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
and thanks for that compliment! seriously... you dont know how greatful i am to hear that my arny was good. i got a knock once ivan did a better one. and lol on the script... yeah i tried to actually put arny in the situation. i am glad you enjoyed it! thanks fatkid :D:D:D and next step for me is to improve my acting then.. no problem. :D:D:D i will do my best :D:D:D

[{dj-N} Roflcopter]

Lol... xD

I love your roflcopter.. its huge.

[{dj-N} Skydivin']

WHAT THE

If I were you I would find a better place to put your music out.. you need to get a record deal and sell Cds. People would buy them. for CASH. I would.

So get off NG man! You deserve better than this tiny 284 listens! :'(

dj-Nate responds:

Wow, thanks man. Any sugesstions?

[{dj-N} WTTC [NG Cut]]

JESUS

You never cease to amaze me! Are you singing this? God I could playa ll of your songs at a real rave, which I am seriously thinking of doing at the next one I go to next week..

Wow.. just god wow.

dj-Nate responds:

Thank you! Tell em dj-Nate is always looking for some play time =D

[~EnV~Come Home]

dowloaded

Because it was so freaking awesome. I have no complaints! The vocals were great and the synths were great. Everything was great! Congrats on Top 5.