Chaneg that main beat.
Don't change the way it is, just the tone of it. Like a different drum or something. It was a great trance song, just a litle to simple and I have heard it before. You have a talent, you just need to put forth much effort into combining your techniques. Great job though. 4/5 9/10 for the unoriginality. (Yeah I grade harsh sorry)
ah well, im still learning alot :)
Thx for the tips!
Very Very cool.
Ok, one question. Did you make this usinf FL Studio? And if so, how? I mean, do you play the choords on the synthisizer? Well anyway, it was a really tight trance song but the beat got kind of messed up around 1:01. It was the coolest trance song I have ever heard, great job in that regard. The main techno beat ALMOST didn't go well with the beat so you should tweak that just a little bit to avoid messing up this great song. I might just use it for a game I have. 10/10 for the first (Normally it would be 9 for the tiny mistakes but it is your first which is excellent) 5/5.
Oh and if you have the time, could you review some of my songs? I am going to review some more of your to see what I can find in your music...
Its made with FL Studio 7 :), without a keyboard. All done by software :)
Thx for the 10/10! Means alot coming from you hihi :D
I think the maintechno lead goes pretty well !
Ill check ur songs too :)
Kriz.
Oh my god...
Well, it was a lot like the previous version so you know it will be hated on by a lot of people. Plus, it was really WAY to short. Sorry, but I think this is one of your worst.
I think I get the build up...
I see now! You have to begin with a very simple tune, then add a very complex tune with the simple tune running in the background. Well, the only thing I saw that needed changing with this one was the way you put everything together. every now and then some things didn't go together. I give a 4. Very nice job though. =)
Simple.
It was a very god song, don't get me wrong. It is just that it was a little but to simple. You need some sort of heavy emotinal synth going in the back there. Good job overall!
By a heavy synth, do you mean a stronger bass? The one in this song sucked, i'm definitely working on that! thanks for the review!
Dang.
You know, honestly I wasn't expecting this. I read the book fromt eh cover though lol. This is really cool. I love this song! NICE! I rarely like music, but your stuff fits my taste perfectly/ Well done!
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
It was different!
That was the most originl tune I have heard in a long time. Where did you get those vocals? I especially liked the upbeat techno synths in there. Very nice! You should continue this stuff man. =p
I downloaded the vocals of some website, just google Kate Lesing Neverland Vocals. Thanks a lot, I have a bunch of cool song I'm working on so I should be submitting something soon. Thanks for the review!
Wow.
Really now, shouldn't this song have a 4.80 or something besides a 3.80? What is wrong with people... Well, great job on this one. Really, it made me cry. =P
AHAHAH!!
That was hilarious and It should be front paged. =D HILARIOUS. Like.
i was just something really random me, my brother and my brothers friend made!!! i got really bored so they helped me make some noises too!!!
Cool.
I see you are beginning to create songs. You are using pre-set loops from the Garageband library, but that is usually a first step. It is what I did. The beat sounded OK, but it was to edgy, what you should do is put in that same beat, but put it into a layer of synth instead of beat. Keep it up.
i know garage band inst that great but it all i have at the moment so i'm gonna try and work on it make it better, you'll see when i'm done ^^
Oh, hello there. I guess you want to know who I am. I mainly create ambient music and voice act here on NG. Occasionally youll see me produce some silly animation or game. If you want to chat or something, send me a spanky danky PM. *Sig by Magical-Zorse*
Age 33, Male
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Kriz: The Beginning 