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LOL

I gotta ask, is that crowd real?

Kr1z responds:

Naah xD its actually a sample thats like 2 seconds long, repeated all the time, but filtered.
:D

*Sigh*

Alright, look: Almost all the FL songs sound alike, they just aren't very original anymore. Even so, they sound really cool and I see how you make them "original" Sadly, the tone you use obviously has been done before. I am not saying it is a bad thing or anything, you just should put some major pads in the background like stars in my song (::Run With Me::) With those stars and complex electronic energy, you could have some really great tunes. Keep it up though! This song is a major accomplishment to be heard in 4 entries! =)

Kr1z responds:

Dude this was like one of my first songs ever..
Im trying!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^^
Thx for the tips, ur right :)

Chaneg that main beat.

Don't change the way it is, just the tone of it. Like a different drum or something. It was a great trance song, just a litle to simple and I have heard it before. You have a talent, you just need to put forth much effort into combining your techniques. Great job though. 4/5 9/10 for the unoriginality. (Yeah I grade harsh sorry)

Kr1z responds:

ah well, im still learning alot :)
Thx for the tips!

Very Very cool.

Ok, one question. Did you make this usinf FL Studio? And if so, how? I mean, do you play the choords on the synthisizer? Well anyway, it was a really tight trance song but the beat got kind of messed up around 1:01. It was the coolest trance song I have ever heard, great job in that regard. The main techno beat ALMOST didn't go well with the beat so you should tweak that just a little bit to avoid messing up this great song. I might just use it for a game I have. 10/10 for the first (Normally it would be 9 for the tiny mistakes but it is your first which is excellent) 5/5.

Oh and if you have the time, could you review some of my songs? I am going to review some more of your to see what I can find in your music...

Kr1z responds:

Its made with FL Studio 7 :), without a keyboard. All done by software :)
Thx for the 10/10! Means alot coming from you hihi :D
I think the maintechno lead goes pretty well !

Ill check ur songs too :)

Kriz.

Oh my god...

Well, it was a lot like the previous version so you know it will be hated on by a lot of people. Plus, it was really WAY to short. Sorry, but I think this is one of your worst.

I think I get the build up...

I see now! You have to begin with a very simple tune, then add a very complex tune with the simple tune running in the background. Well, the only thing I saw that needed changing with this one was the way you put everything together. every now and then some things didn't go together. I give a 4. Very nice job though. =)

Simple.

It was a very god song, don't get me wrong. It is just that it was a little but to simple. You need some sort of heavy emotinal synth going in the back there. Good job overall!

x-Exodus-X responds:

By a heavy synth, do you mean a stronger bass? The one in this song sucked, i'm definitely working on that! thanks for the review!

Dang.

You know, honestly I wasn't expecting this. I read the book fromt eh cover though lol. This is really cool. I love this song! NICE! I rarely like music, but your stuff fits my taste perfectly/ Well done!

x-Exodus-X responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

It was different!

That was the most originl tune I have heard in a long time. Where did you get those vocals? I especially liked the upbeat techno synths in there. Very nice! You should continue this stuff man. =p

x-Exodus-X responds:

I downloaded the vocals of some website, just google Kate Lesing Neverland Vocals. Thanks a lot, I have a bunch of cool song I'm working on so I should be submitting something soon. Thanks for the review!

Wow.

Really now, shouldn't this song have a 4.80 or something besides a 3.80? What is wrong with people... Well, great job on this one. Really, it made me cry. =P

Oh, hello there. I guess you want to know who I am. I mainly create ambient music and voice act here on NG. Occasionally youll see me produce some silly animation or game. If you want to chat or something, send me a spanky danky PM. *Sig by Magical-Zorse*

Age 33, Male

Apple & Entrepreneur

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Little Rock, AR

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