FatKidWitAJetPak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Horizon]

very Artsy.

It was really depressing... I LIKED IT! It wasn't very entertaining though. You got to expand your horizans on this movie a bit. Maybe add some more animation. It had a meaning though so you get an 8.

ZombieswithJetpacks responds:

thanks. Lol u spealt horizon wrong. No, seriously, but thanks for ur input. As far as adding more animation. I thouhgt I did a good job with that. 3d artwork and animation is very hard.

[electric eel]

Dedicated Review...

I am trying to do something like this so I mind a well write a very long review for this Flash. First of all I could see you hand drew the Strawberry thing in the pre-loader. How? I want to try to do that. :) And how did you get the sound to fit perfectly with the flash? Those are the only 2 questions I have.

Second, I enjoyed the nice splash effects you used with the blobs of ink. I am going to use that effect for my flash now if you don't mind. :) The music was catchy with it. Third, I loved the flashlight and converse shoe animation! Very nice indeed. You can draw in flash thats for sure. Fourth, I thought the way you made the background color change went very well with the song itself.

ANd now for the bad:

It was very original and all, but It isn't something I would see twice or show to my friends. You need to put some kind of flare in there to get people to want to watch it again. Use different effects like particle actionscripting. (This is where Flash created customized random particles and they move in all kinds of directions. Perfect for music videos.) It got kind of boring after a while because you used the same effects in different ways. (Different colored dot in other words) The only change I saw was the car animation in the beginning, the converse show, the flashlight, and then the end. You repeated the same effect of ink blobs in between each 200 frames or so.

Good luck with your next project!!!

8/10
5/5

Good job for front page.

ArcadeRobot responds:

the strawberry was drawn in photoshop just by using the brushes. I got the song to fit with the flash because on the timeline i set the song to stream, and then i could hearr it as i animated. thanks for the comments i'll take it all into consideration.

[Alien Hominid 2]

Amazing...

Hey I am the head of a major game company and wanted this game on our site. Interested? There will be a 10,000$ payment. I have emailed you further information.

NGxtra responds:

Awesome!

[Edible Castle #5]

uhh.

The graphics are real nice and the voice acting is pretty cool. But it simply isnt that funny.

EdibleCastle responds:

cant win em all

[Slash's Clock Day 1.66]

AHAHAH!!

Ok this was hilarious. HILARIOUS I TELL YOU!

SlashFirestorm responds:

RERUUUSHAAAAA

[Poor Bread]

LOL!!!!

THAT WAS FUCKING HILARIOUS!!!

TehAaron responds:

Thank-you.

[Mastermind 3]

HEY COOL

It is funny because I was watching all your flashs... and then I realized you had a new one so i clicked on it... IT IS STILL UNDER JUDGMENT! Front page prediction. :)

Great job! Hope to see you with more coming!

Also, I make music if you need some. XD

The-Swain responds:

The timing is essential :D

[SWC is back pt 4]

LOL

That was actually pretty funny. The graphics wern't have bad either. Good job!

Sparkwattclock responds:

Thanks fatkidwitajetpak!

[Superhuman: SDO Day #10]

OWNERZ!

It was a cut picture flipping back and forth WITH ARROWS!!! That is truly amazing and original! Keep it up!

mamaluigi responds:

Will do.

[Pretty Burdy!]

WHat the... only a 2.96 score?

I give you a 5 for the awesome graphics man. Keep it up.

NapalmGirl responds:

Hey thanx...It was almost at 3.00 a second ago...:( Well I guess someone hates me out there. Waaaah....