FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[CUPCAKES!!!11]

OMFG!!!!!!!111111ONE

CUPCAKES?!!! I LOVE CUPCAKES!!!!!

loogiesquared responds:

okay, then.

[A-Team - The Computer Game]

olololol.

This was alright. Nice sound and everything. But, I didn;t like the 8-bit to it. :(

[Sonic 3 - cr0m Gadget (8bit)]

Ouch!

Again, you need a completley different choice of synths and instruments. Even though this was 8-bit, it sounded kind of strange. The 2nd instrument that came in was alright, but the first sounded awful, sorry to say.

I recommend trying with better sounding synths that everybody likes.

[MC Kids Trash Rock]

That was pretty cool.

I liked the first part of it... but then it sounded kind of strange. The main thing I recommend is a different choice of instruments in there. Everything was put together wrong. Plus, it was to repetitive. Before you add a hard core beat and synth, you need build up. Try again, and I am sure you will get an awesome score. :D

[Human/Machine -JOIN GWC-]

Lol.

I liked the original style you used. It wasn't even necesarilly music... it was just... groove. :) (Which is a good thing) But, I was expecting more, a more of a kick and a nuzz. Not just a short loop! Make one much longer man!

loogiesquared responds:

if anyone asks me my prominent genre, i'd say latre disco, so i guess i have accomplished with this song.

(makin' a remake!)

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[Autumn Walk]

Piano!

I didn't know you played the piano! Well then again, you are just a stranger lol. I liked it though. You needed some more variety in there. Like violins, some sort of orchrestra. This would be a good beginning to a song.

zoke2556 responds:

Thanks for the advice. I tried to make this one just a simple piano song, nothing too fancy.

[My Ghosts]

Nice choords and instruments!

I have never heard those instruments before, very nice. I liked the vocals as well. The background noises were a little bit to repetitive, but otherwise everything went together smoothly. Keep it up!

zoke2556 responds:

Thanks. I used a distorted guitar, a keyboard, bass, and drums.

[Salem]

YES.

Finally, something nice and soothing to listen to. I see where you were going withy the pad and beat.. but the combination didn't work out to well. YOu JUST need to remix these and this song would sound AWESOME. You really have a talent at playing the music, but not at putting it together. Get a freind to help you or something. Actually, depending on what program you are using, I could help you out with this song. It would still be yours, but I would love to help. Just contact me if you are interested.
Keep it up!

[Love Hurts]

It was pretty cool.

It wasn't original though... YOu need to make up your own stuff sometime. Keep it up.

Kezelevich responds:

Thanks for the review. This was my second sampled beat, I do originals 98% of the time, haha. But thanks a lot.

[DJ Comet-Crash Course]

VERY COOL.

DUDE, that edgy synth you used in there acually sounded good. It is hard to make edgyness sound good in a song. It always had something new to look forward to, which kept me listening. Keep this stuff up man, it sounds really cool.

My favorite part, is when all that edgyness stopped and lead off to really cool electric sounds.

This could get top of the week... but if you want it to, then try REALLY hard to get everyone you know to vote teh 5. The reason is because there are tons of 0 bombers out there. If it truly deserves top of the week, then people will vote no shorter than a 7. If so, that person is either retarded, or your song really doesn't deserve to be in the top of the week.

LOL, I just heard that HIKAKAJAGA noise in 3:00 or so. That was a nice touch. All in all, this song deserves something so KEEP THIS UP!