FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[B0UNC3 - Paradise on E]

Awesome.

It was very smooth and dancy. I loved the originality you use in all your stuff. This is a very impresive piece of work your using here. Sadly enough, only tennagers will appreciate a song made with computer programs. Unless of course you use this to make a future band. You could be a good composer someday.

Keep it up!

[CUPCAKES!!!11]

OMFG!!!!!!!111111ONE

CUPCAKES?!!! I LOVE CUPCAKES!!!!!

loogiesquared responds:

okay, then.

[A-Team - The Computer Game]

olololol.

This was alright. Nice sound and everything. But, I didn;t like the 8-bit to it. :(

[Sonic 3 - cr0m Gadget (8bit)]

Ouch!

Again, you need a completley different choice of synths and instruments. Even though this was 8-bit, it sounded kind of strange. The 2nd instrument that came in was alright, but the first sounded awful, sorry to say.

I recommend trying with better sounding synths that everybody likes.

[MC Kids Trash Rock]

That was pretty cool.

I liked the first part of it... but then it sounded kind of strange. The main thing I recommend is a different choice of instruments in there. Everything was put together wrong. Plus, it was to repetitive. Before you add a hard core beat and synth, you need build up. Try again, and I am sure you will get an awesome score. :D

[Human/Machine -JOIN GWC-]

Lol.

I liked the original style you used. It wasn't even necesarilly music... it was just... groove. :) (Which is a good thing) But, I was expecting more, a more of a kick and a nuzz. Not just a short loop! Make one much longer man!

loogiesquared responds:

if anyone asks me my prominent genre, i'd say latre disco, so i guess i have accomplished with this song.

(makin' a remake!)

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[Autumn Walk]

Piano!

I didn't know you played the piano! Well then again, you are just a stranger lol. I liked it though. You needed some more variety in there. Like violins, some sort of orchrestra. This would be a good beginning to a song.

zoke2556 responds:

Thanks for the advice. I tried to make this one just a simple piano song, nothing too fancy.

[My Ghosts]

Nice choords and instruments!

I have never heard those instruments before, very nice. I liked the vocals as well. The background noises were a little bit to repetitive, but otherwise everything went together smoothly. Keep it up!

zoke2556 responds:

Thanks. I used a distorted guitar, a keyboard, bass, and drums.

[Code Lyoko Theme (Edit)]

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOM

AWESOME, it was truly a masterpiece from the weirdest, yet best show on television. Keep it up!

syphonmax responds:

haha thanks I used to love that show ^_^

[Salem]

YES.

Finally, something nice and soothing to listen to. I see where you were going withy the pad and beat.. but the combination didn't work out to well. YOu JUST need to remix these and this song would sound AWESOME. You really have a talent at playing the music, but not at putting it together. Get a freind to help you or something. Actually, depending on what program you are using, I could help you out with this song. It would still be yours, but I would love to help. Just contact me if you are interested.
Keep it up!