FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Beaten to Death]

Sounds like Nightmare on Elm Street.

Sounds like the opening from Nightmare on Eklm street. It was really cool. It had a nice build up to it, along with a very nice sounding synth pad. I expected a huge climax though near 55 seconds instead of a change in tune. Because of this, it sounded a little bit dull. The song only had a pluck synth and a repeating beat. You need to add more than just a changing loop. Sure, you inserted some Ambient pads in the background near the middle... but that made it still boring.

In other words, add some nice climaxs with strings and powerful emotional synths. =P

Keli1989 responds:

Yeah i tried that but i felt it lost it's rawness, ill try some more to see how it comes out.
Thanks for reviewing :D

[Corneria [I.A.Cover]]

Cool.

It sounded pretty awesome man! It made me want to get on my feet and start dancing. Very professional. I loved the original plucking noises and beats. WEverything changed at the perfect pace. The sound at 50 seconds that didn't come in again was unexpected. And yet, ti went well with the song somehow. Especially the random piano after that. Then I realized you changed the tune of the main synth by a little bit.

5/5 10/10

Great job, keep it up!!!

InfinityAmbience responds:

Thanks very much man XD! I'll be sure to check out some of your stuff as well, I'm glad you liked !

[Morning (Guitar Recorded)]

Nice "Whammy Effects"

It was a very pleasant song. I loved the build of that bass. There were some timing mistakes here and there from different layers of sounds. And then everything jumbled together... not in harmony. When that happens, the song is ruined. Go back to the drawing board for this one, and come back by cutting out some things.

Good luck.

Gian responds:

Thank you :) Im actually happy with your review, Because you liked the bass build, and the fact that you consider this out of time. is for me, an opinion, cause the disorder and confusing sounds is what I most look for in my recordings, If you close your eyes you can have the feeling, the drama, the confusion, thats it.

[Madoff]

It is alright.

The string plucking in the main line needs to be TURNED WAY DOWN MAN. It hurts your ears. Everything else sounded great. Just please, turn down that volume for the plucking. If you do, and then re-submit this song, you will get a much better score because the tune sounds pretty cool.

[Diagram (House Mix)]

Oh GOD!!!

Ok look... the tune was good and all... but the instrument made my ears bleed man...

PLEASE... change the instrument into something pleasant sounding...

Kaburorne responds:

What was wrong with it?

[UnderGrounded]

WTF

How the hell did you get this in Paper Mario World one?!?!

LOL, GREAT JOB!!!

[Starry Streets]

Nice.

All you need to do is plug ina ll of these in one nice good timing tune.

[Search for the Telephone Quest]

LOL

Hey! This one was pretty good. You inserted the telephone lins with good taste in with the melody. Even though everything was pre-set, it sounded good overall. I liked it, good job with this.

[Elevatroid Music]

It sounded pretty bad..

It was ALMOST in tune, but you played the guitar out of timing with the main beat.

[The Factory Final Level]

Weird.

It was O.K. But you need to turn up the master volume a little bit.