FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Starry Streets]

Nice.

All you need to do is plug ina ll of these in one nice good timing tune.

[Search for the Telephone Quest]

LOL

Hey! This one was pretty good. You inserted the telephone lins with good taste in with the melody. Even though everything was pre-set, it sounded good overall. I liked it, good job with this.

[Elevatroid Music]

It sounded pretty bad..

It was ALMOST in tune, but you played the guitar out of timing with the main beat.

[The Factory Final Level]

Weird.

It was O.K. But you need to turn up the master volume a little bit.

[Randomness BGM]

lol

I thought it was pretty funny the way you inserted the loops in here. You selected proper loops for most of the song in this one.

Just apply that skill and use it on future songs.

You and I need to do a collab man, and we can both post it.

[Megaman Zero Destroy Train]

Cool.

i see you played some choords in this one. Some of them were a little off timing, and got repetitive. It didn't sound to good after30 seconds. I thought there was going to be more... but it was just a single loops you made.

Keep it up man, I know you can make something cooler.

kchrules responds:

Thats Basically all there is in the actual game music.

[Desert dance v 2.0]

Hmm.

It sounded very desertish that is for sure... but you selected the wrong loops to plug in here and there. They didn't sound good when put together. It sounded OK, but this song doesn't deserve any more than a solid 3. It is good at some points, but you simply didn't create the song very well.

You need to go back to the drawing board for this one. When making your songs, make sure it sounds good instead of OK. It needs to sound good to other people as well.

The main reason it didn't sound so good was because of the drums you choose and loops. Just experiment some more and I am sure you will do just fine.

Remember, the best example I can give you of Garageband loops is my song

(::Creation And Its Purpose::)

You can find it easily because it is one of the first songs i ever made.

I hope that helps you. You are just starting out, and could very well be a cool artist.

Cheers!
(I liked the very beginning)

[Pico Theme Remix]

LOL

Very nice man.

cHunter responds:

Thanks! Glad someone else liked it! :D

[Art Of Madness Pt1]

JESUS!

Ow my ears... sorry man, but that just was way too high pitched with to much master volume to listen to.

MrWAD2 responds:

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