FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Silent Scorn (Megadeth Cover)]

Woh!

Very nice! I liked your theme! The only thing I reccomend is making it less edgy. That will make the song far more enjoyable.

DJ-Ultimize responds:

Describe to me "less edgy" first then i will try to make it better.

[The Living Techno]

Very good for your first one!

Yes, I think you are getting the basic idea of "techno" Add some piano here and there, some harmony type stuff, and different beats. Oh and NEVER be repetitive. Not many like repetitive techno songs. If you want an example, try listening to some of my songs. I have plenty that would give you ideas like (::Groove On::) and (::Let Me Explain...::) Those are the main ones. Keep it up! AND MAKE SURE TO RESPOND TO YOUR REVIEWS!!! PEOPLE HATE IT WHEN ARTISTS DONT RESPOND! IF YOU DON'T KNOW HOW, CONTACT ME. Thanks.

skater007 responds:

Woah, f'real man, thanks.
I'll contact you if I'll need some support...

What software are you using for making music?

[Metroid Prime Ambient Mix]

Very Nice,,,

It was a very nice chilling tune. I liked how you based it on Metriod Prime. It sounded like Metriod Prime too so you went through the song very well. It could of had more technoish sounds but it is Ambient. Good job.

[generic]

Wow.

Very cool. Man, I love ALL your stuff! You have a talent for composing and should consider making a production. =)

snayk responds:

Thanks a lot!

I've been getting really nice compliments like this via the PM system and reviews like yours, and I've got to admit, it's starting to make me think I should try to make it.

That said, I'm not particularly fond of this song... I got a little sick of it after I made it :P

[among the souls]

Holy crap...

That was the best beat I have heard in a LONG time. Very, very cool. I love this song. Oh and I raised your score 2 POINTS. Oh yeah.

snayk responds:

:D

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the high review score + vote!

[a rare color]

Nice.

It was only slightly annoying at first, but it git bettter with the synths and beats you added along. It would be placed in the Techno Genre By the way which you should change.

[delusions.]

Very Catchy!

Loved it. I only saw that you needed to add something BIG in there besides soft notes. You know what I mean? Even if it is Ambeint, this one had a beat, which means it needs a big lead instrument. Like a star synthesizer or something. But the beat makes this song amazing. Mainly the one that comes in around 1:40. Keep up your nice songs man, You sound a lot like me, but with a lot more talent. You think you could check out some of my songs like (::Across the Planet::) (::FLying Down To The Shadows::) and (::Flowing Through Space::) ? Thanks. I'll review some more of your songs.

snayk responds:

Thanks for the compliments. I'm glad you've taken an interest in my music. I dropped a review on one of your songs.

[Check the Map -Fixed-]

ALmost...

A bit better, but yet again, you needed beats. It was only a2 synthesizers that I saw and nothing else.

[The Dark Day]

Interesting.

It was very strange. I enjoyed the synths you used, but it needed a beat and some other instruments. Even for a song like this. It even got a little annoying because you didn't add a beat or more instruments. Sorry, but I don't know what you were trying to accomplish out of this one.

[SquareIT OFF]

Garageband?

I am just wondering... you use garageband?

Well... this song was VERY VERY good. I am not sure why it doesn't have that many votes... but you know it is on the top of the drum n bass list? This is what I was talking about when adding to your songs. Add things like THIS. Great job, and jkeep it up. like I said before, try listening to some of my songs please.

Massio89 responds:

I dont use garage band....as i said in my other submissions (im not sure about this one) i use a KORG EMX-1 Electribe groovebox with all the parts origionally created by me. I Write all my own songs and i create all my own loops and beats from scratch. Thanks so much for the feed back! Like your stuff but try to move awway from garage band loops bacause there is much more out there that you can do with electronic music beside move around loops! Its very fun to create electronic music live (like i do with my songs) so i would highly suggest an EMX-1 Electribe if you want to try somthing new!