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Ok.

All your songs have noise! People HATE noise!!! It did not sound at all great with all that edgyness and noise in the background! Turn it DOoowwwwwnnn... Try listening to my songs. They are all techno or ambient and i also have some funk and drum n bass. I'm not sure what you would like... but try reviewing some like I did yours. I try to help people man and you need help by turning down the edgyness and having mor eharmony and beat in your tunes.

DJ-Ultimize responds:

Alright i'll put this out right now... Edgy, what do you mean? I can't get rid of it if I don't know what you mean by edgy! And yes i know about the whole noise thing and people hating it, I can't until i get a new chord (which is causing it) and i don't know when i can get it. I will turn it down, but i don't see how that'll help. I'll als o review some of your stuff, though i'm only really into Metal and hard rock.

Oh I get it.

Look, I understand what your trying to do, but being symbolic doesn't mean it can't be a "song" It is far to edgy. You need to turn the electric guitar into something more calm yet angry... like a synthisizer or something. I am trying to make a song like this right now in fact...

DJ-Ultimize responds:

Yeah, i got it a bit fixed. I still need a new chord. I'll work on not making it as edgy.

Woh!

Very nice! I liked your theme! The only thing I reccomend is making it less edgy. That will make the song far more enjoyable.

DJ-Ultimize responds:

Describe to me "less edgy" first then i will try to make it better.

Very good for your first one!

Yes, I think you are getting the basic idea of "techno" Add some piano here and there, some harmony type stuff, and different beats. Oh and NEVER be repetitive. Not many like repetitive techno songs. If you want an example, try listening to some of my songs. I have plenty that would give you ideas like (::Groove On::) and (::Let Me Explain...::) Those are the main ones. Keep it up! AND MAKE SURE TO RESPOND TO YOUR REVIEWS!!! PEOPLE HATE IT WHEN ARTISTS DONT RESPOND! IF YOU DON'T KNOW HOW, CONTACT ME. Thanks.

skater007 responds:

Woah, f'real man, thanks.
I'll contact you if I'll need some support...

What software are you using for making music?

Very Nice,,,

It was a very nice chilling tune. I liked how you based it on Metriod Prime. It sounded like Metriod Prime too so you went through the song very well. It could of had more technoish sounds but it is Ambient. Good job.

Wow.

Very cool. Man, I love ALL your stuff! You have a talent for composing and should consider making a production. =)

snayk responds:

Thanks a lot!

I've been getting really nice compliments like this via the PM system and reviews like yours, and I've got to admit, it's starting to make me think I should try to make it.

That said, I'm not particularly fond of this song... I got a little sick of it after I made it :P

Holy crap...

That was the best beat I have heard in a LONG time. Very, very cool. I love this song. Oh and I raised your score 2 POINTS. Oh yeah.

snayk responds:

:D

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the high review score + vote!

Nice.

It was only slightly annoying at first, but it git bettter with the synths and beats you added along. It would be placed in the Techno Genre By the way which you should change.

Very Catchy!

Loved it. I only saw that you needed to add something BIG in there besides soft notes. You know what I mean? Even if it is Ambeint, this one had a beat, which means it needs a big lead instrument. Like a star synthesizer or something. But the beat makes this song amazing. Mainly the one that comes in around 1:40. Keep up your nice songs man, You sound a lot like me, but with a lot more talent. You think you could check out some of my songs like (::Across the Planet::) (::FLying Down To The Shadows::) and (::Flowing Through Space::) ? Thanks. I'll review some more of your songs.

snayk responds:

Thanks for the compliments. I'm glad you've taken an interest in my music. I dropped a review on one of your songs.

ALmost...

A bit better, but yet again, you needed beats. It was only a2 synthesizers that I saw and nothing else.

Oh, hello there. I guess you want to know who I am. I mainly create ambient music and voice act here on NG. Occasionally youll see me produce some silly animation or game. If you want to chat or something, send me a spanky danky PM. *Sig by Magical-Zorse*

Age 33, Male

Apple & Entrepreneur

Whats a... school?

Little Rock, AR

Joined on 7/28/07

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