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I love the vocals in your song!

Where DO you get them?! I loved this tune as well. It deserves a much higher score. The beats and synths you put in were at exact timing and tuning together. I am not sure what program you use, but you got it made bro.

DomesticTerrorist responds:

Haha thanks mate! good ol' FL studio ;)

While Doing A Research Paper? Lol

Very very cool! One of the few Rock type music I hear that is good. Especially you made it when you did a research paper! I loved the vocals you put in there from Astro-Boy. (At least I think that's where you got it from...) Well, very awesome but I am giving it a strict 9 for it being repetitive in the background by JUST a little bit. Great job and keep it up. =P

DomesticTerrorist responds:

Haha thanks man, I'm actually writing my term paper for my English class right now but I get bored and take breaks. This was the result :D

I appreciate the review! cheers!

Ok, one thing to change I see.

All your songs sound a lot alike. You need to have different ideas besides this same basic beat and synth pads. Change it around a little, see what you come up with... AN RESPOND TO ALL YOUR REVIEWS!!!

Shinrog responds:

Synths...maybe,but i think you got some problems with your hearing-cant find alot in common between all of my songs. maybe i just cant hear it? o.O

Very cool!

You getting good at this!!! keep it up and you will make a really cool song. =P Try sticking to this theme... oh and BTW this is trance.

Shinrog responds:

Couldn't decide which genere it was,so i put it as Dance...thought its the closest.

Woo!

Your best yet! I loved that tune that you used... and the synths you used with it. Just a little bit repetitive... that is the only error In saw! Great job for your efforts. My songs are just like yours you know... SERIOUSLY REVIEW SOME OF THEM!! =p

Shinrog responds:

Thx lol,even though I can't understand why people like this one more than my others lol.

Very cool!

Good job, it sounded great. The only thing I recomend to changing this song into something great is putting in some violins or synth pads. But everything else you did very good on. My songs are basically like this one but all are different from eachother. If tyou want ideas, just have a look at some of my songs if you want. Thanks man, glad to help.

Shinrog responds:

Thx for the review,no thx for the tips. It's nothing personal,it's just that I dont have any background in music,I never had any lessons related to music so listening to your music won't help me much ^^
what can I say,I'm an ammature xD

Ok.

All your songs have noise! People HATE noise!!! It did not sound at all great with all that edgyness and noise in the background! Turn it DOoowwwwwnnn... Try listening to my songs. They are all techno or ambient and i also have some funk and drum n bass. I'm not sure what you would like... but try reviewing some like I did yours. I try to help people man and you need help by turning down the edgyness and having mor eharmony and beat in your tunes.

DJ-Ultimize responds:

Alright i'll put this out right now... Edgy, what do you mean? I can't get rid of it if I don't know what you mean by edgy! And yes i know about the whole noise thing and people hating it, I can't until i get a new chord (which is causing it) and i don't know when i can get it. I will turn it down, but i don't see how that'll help. I'll als o review some of your stuff, though i'm only really into Metal and hard rock.

Oh I get it.

Look, I understand what your trying to do, but being symbolic doesn't mean it can't be a "song" It is far to edgy. You need to turn the electric guitar into something more calm yet angry... like a synthisizer or something. I am trying to make a song like this right now in fact...

DJ-Ultimize responds:

Yeah, i got it a bit fixed. I still need a new chord. I'll work on not making it as edgy.

Woh!

Very nice! I liked your theme! The only thing I reccomend is making it less edgy. That will make the song far more enjoyable.

DJ-Ultimize responds:

Describe to me "less edgy" first then i will try to make it better.

Very good for your first one!

Yes, I think you are getting the basic idea of "techno" Add some piano here and there, some harmony type stuff, and different beats. Oh and NEVER be repetitive. Not many like repetitive techno songs. If you want an example, try listening to some of my songs. I have plenty that would give you ideas like (::Groove On::) and (::Let Me Explain...::) Those are the main ones. Keep it up! AND MAKE SURE TO RESPOND TO YOUR REVIEWS!!! PEOPLE HATE IT WHEN ARTISTS DONT RESPOND! IF YOU DON'T KNOW HOW, CONTACT ME. Thanks.

skater007 responds:

Woah, f'real man, thanks.
I'll contact you if I'll need some support...

What software are you using for making music?

Oh, hello there. I guess you want to know who I am. I mainly create ambient music and voice act here on NG. Occasionally youll see me produce some silly animation or game. If you want to chat or something, send me a spanky danky PM. *Sig by Magical-Zorse*

Age 32, Male

Apple & Entrepreneur

Whats a... school?

Little Rock, AR

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