lol
The beginning instrumental band instruments sounded really bad. I see you were trying to make it sound intense after that, but wvwerything was just kind of maggled together in a crap pil;e... XD It sounded pretty cool at times... but usually it didn't sound to good with all the generic instruments you used. For this type of song, you should only use synths and trace sounds.
Oh god... That was really crappy man.
You need to turn up the master volume by A LOT. I couldbarely hear a thing. The guitar sounded nice, but I could just hear a little bit of it. Please turn up the matser volume, or all your work will go to waste.
its high enough not to be too high
Cool tune.
It was a well done remix overall, but that is the best thing i can say because it wasn't original. What was original is the tracy techno beats you used in place of the original way the song would go like. I liked the beats that came in at 1:00 and then went off smoothly to the nice synth texture tune.
Really cool remix. Nice job!
Thank you very much
Instrumental and Generic.
That guitar that came in at 16 seconds was bitching man. It sounded great to teh generic background beat. Everytime there was a build up, I thought there was going to be something new, another beat, more instruments, ANYTHING. But, you were way to repetitive. It was nice.. but dull and boring. You need to add some synths and dancy styles to it.
Yeah I know, I told you it'd be repetitive, it's this song's nature from the beginning.
And I didn't want to go too far from the original concept.
Anyway thanks for your review!
Very weird instruments and synths.
The beginning instrument sounded very industrial. I loved it after 30 seconds and it kept gettting better. I was VERY surprised that the first synth went well with everything else. Very nice! you should have brought it back around 105, but instead you choose to put in a new instrument. Very good. Then when you brought it back at 130, it sounded great. But at 145, there were to many instruments going together to hear anything. The timing for instruments in this song is simliar to my song (::Creation And Its Purpose::)
This was a very nice tune altogether, but you should have adjusted it just a tad bit with choice of the number of sounds playing at once.
Great job!
Hehe, Thx for the feedback. Ya, I think sometimes i can get a little out of hand with the amount of instruments, but really the most I used was at 224 lol.
LOL
Good job, it sounded pretty cool. Mainly when the rock came in at around 18 seconds. It was kind of annoying because of the main bass line... but everything esle sounded Ok. Keep it up!
Well,
It is all to generic. It might sound good if the remainder of the song would be very trancy with a lot of synths and non-generic noises like you have in the loop, but the song wouldn't if not.
Ok. I just made this as a start to the song. So thanks for your help.
WTF?!
Dude! You used a loop that sounds like my song (::Run With Me::) But, the one you used was the one from Garageband.
I didn't understand it though... and I can see that you didn't take this very seriously.
I did, however, think it was funny when you said, "Tonight we discuss... NOTHING!!! ABSOLUTLEY NOTHING!!!!"
Lol. I have my own voice acting series, that I take seriously, called The Adventures of FattyMcpatty and LardyLarLar.
You can see it if you want... lol, you will laugh. XD
Cool.
If you tuen up the master volume for the background pad, this would sound AWESOME. I am not sure why people are voting so low on this though... Keep it up! Like the main beat overall.
Oh, hello there. I guess you want to know who I am. I mainly create ambient music and voice act here on NG. Occasionally youll see me produce some silly animation or game. If you want to chat or something, send me a spanky danky PM. *Sig by Magical-Zorse*
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