FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Randomness BGM]

lol

I thought it was pretty funny the way you inserted the loops in here. You selected proper loops for most of the song in this one.

Just apply that skill and use it on future songs.

You and I need to do a collab man, and we can both post it.

[Megaman Zero Destroy Train]

Cool.

i see you played some choords in this one. Some of them were a little off timing, and got repetitive. It didn't sound to good after30 seconds. I thought there was going to be more... but it was just a single loops you made.

Keep it up man, I know you can make something cooler.

kchrules responds:

Thats Basically all there is in the actual game music.

[Desert dance v 2.0]

Hmm.

It sounded very desertish that is for sure... but you selected the wrong loops to plug in here and there. They didn't sound good when put together. It sounded OK, but this song doesn't deserve any more than a solid 3. It is good at some points, but you simply didn't create the song very well.

You need to go back to the drawing board for this one. When making your songs, make sure it sounds good instead of OK. It needs to sound good to other people as well.

The main reason it didn't sound so good was because of the drums you choose and loops. Just experiment some more and I am sure you will do just fine.

Remember, the best example I can give you of Garageband loops is my song

(::Creation And Its Purpose::)

You can find it easily because it is one of the first songs i ever made.

I hope that helps you. You are just starting out, and could very well be a cool artist.

Cheers!
(I liked the very beginning)

[Pico Theme Remix]

LOL

Very nice man.

cHunter responds:

Thanks! Glad someone else liked it! :D

[Art Of Madness Pt1]

JESUS!

Ow my ears... sorry man, but that just was way too high pitched with to much master volume to listen to.

MrWAD2 responds:

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Newer Version Posted Feb-25-2008 ,
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[Celestial Skies]

Pretty cool!!!

I loved the classical style with harps and strings combinations. Something you could really dream to.

It was very nice and swift to the ears.

That major string background you used near 100 was amazing. It went perfectly with the harp. Not all was perfect however... it got fuzzy at 135 or so, and I had to turn it down. Try to correct that, and this would be a 10 song.

Great job!

Suspended-3rd-Chord responds:

hmm....like there was some clipping? strange, i put a limiter on it, and there was none. it might just be a hardware vs hardware problem. anyways, i'm glad you like this, thanks for the review fatkid!

[Jenova Electric (FF VII)]

Hey man.

The master volume was way too low! You need to turn it up by a lot so people will enjoy the song better.

Nermio responds:

If the volume had been my only problem with someones music but I'd like it overall I'd maybe at least give it an 8 for good music and put the volume problem in a paranthesis.

Really I don't demand high votes, but such a minor problem wouldn't seem enough to rack down on it as much as you do, especially not when you do not mention any other problems.

Alright, I will raise the volume, but so could anyone with an audio software have done.

Anyway, it's not that I'm mad or anything, so thanks for your review!

[===RunningOut2===]

lol

The beginning instrumental band instruments sounded really bad. I see you were trying to make it sound intense after that, but wvwerything was just kind of maggled together in a crap pil;e... XD It sounded pretty cool at times... but usually it didn't sound to good with all the generic instruments you used. For this type of song, you should only use synths and trace sounds.

[pet's ghost]

Oh god... That was really crappy man.

You need to turn up the master volume by A LOT. I couldbarely hear a thing. The guitar sounded nice, but I could just hear a little bit of it. Please turn up the matser volume, or all your work will go to waste.

LfunkeyA responds:

its high enough not to be too high