FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Enter: Detroit]

Interesting.

It started off very strange. and it kept on like that. Sorry, but even this type of slow techno needs uplifting beats.

[Stars Outside Detroit]

Very VERY cool. =)

Ok, heres EXACTLY what I think of it... you needed to start that beat a little bit earlier. It was a little annoying and needed to start out faster. I am very glad you added new things at the right moment after that however. Each synth fit in very well together! If you listen closely... then the first tune that you put into the song, the duuuu duuu duuuu duu, is a little bit off from the actually song. You needed to take away that tune anyway by the time the song reached 2 minutes. You also needed to add some sort of heavy type piano or synth to make you want to dance. It is techno after all. Oh and make sure to not put to many layers of things together, because then it sounds very mashed up. I have the same taste in music that you do, but you need to bring out the way you create it better. Try listening to some of my music. You will probably get some ideas. Will, keep up the good work. I liked the overall beat.

Listen to my music!

FatKidWitAJetPak

HOLD EVERYTHING!!! When it hit 5:15 where that awesome drum beat came in... that was PERFECT. I enjoyed the way you added the flute afterwards along with the bubble noise. Great job on that part!!! it boosted it up from a 7 to an 8.

[.::Final-Battle::.]

Cool...

I enjoyed this one. It was, yet again, original. I love hearing originallity so I gave it a good score. Very catchy because everything fits together well. YOU NEED TO RESPOND TO YOUR REVIEWS THOUGH!!! If you don't, you won't get much regonition. contact me if you don't know how... it is very easy.

Trell13 responds:

Alrite, i will. thx for the advice.

[(WF1) Unsettled Memories]

Very Nice!!!

This is an extreme nine from me man... and I rarely give nines. I thought it was very cool. Especialy with the chimes. But, because it was a little rpetitive, it gets a solid 8. =D Well, great job however in the begginning. I enjoyed the tune! Keep it up and make sure to change things around a little bit more.

wyldfyre1 responds:

yeah, this is actually some of my earlier work i just forgot and thought i'd add more to and post it.. Sooo *lol* thats probably why its so repetitive.. i was horrid when i first started with repetitivty or what ever lol. Either way. Thanks for the review man! Much love homie!

[Wyldfyre Attempting an Original japanese anime theme]

But it isn't music...

look, it was funny and all, but a lot of people try REALLY hard here at the audio portal to make music. Please, just stick to the flash portal.

wyldfyre1 responds:

lol little did i EVER know man that it would of been on the top list.. I really didn't vote it there man. like i've said in past responds. I only put it up because people laughed at it pretty hard in the flash animation. you've heard my REAL songs and know this isn't how my music is. LOL Anyway thanks for the review (even if it is on this POS not a song that somehow got voted up to the number 3 spot)...

take it easy bro!

[Rock Like A Dude]

Huh!

This one was good to! But wait a minute... I sense this was not hand made... I still remember hearing this in the melody section... Be perfectly honest... Did you, or did you not make this yourself?

apple32 responds:

no i did not but my friends put together some of the melodies so half and 1 fourth

[Killa funk]

Oh my GOD.

Because I don't have the latest version of Garageband... I am not sure if this is a melody loop or not. And because I have no evidence that it is, I give you a 10. it was fantastic. But... If it is a melody... That is just a 0. I am not voting because I am not sure. Sorry. =P

apple32 responds:

TOLD YA!!!

[beet box]

Another preset loop...

It eas cool how you changed the volume... but that's it sorry. You only used pre-set loop(s) again... come on now! Use some originallity.

apple32 responds:

dosent matter how u do it its the end result

[Soft piano]

Ehh.. it was O.K.

But... it was only pre-set loops!!! I'm listening to your songs like you said "youd be surprised" I'm not yet but I really hope I am... I compose ALL my music with garageband. 6 or 7 have pre-set loops, but the others, I mixed the notes of the pre-set loops around by clicking that scissors looking button next to the eye.

apple32 responds:

who cares if there pre set i like it

[Sound in the Sky]

Another freaking awesome song by this band...

Cool, very smooth and chilled. It is really freaking me out of how similar your song are to mine! 0_0 Well, great job. I especially liked the guitar in the background. And the bass sounded good to. The drums aren't off in this one that I noticed... And if you have a singer... BE CAREFUL! The singer can ruin an entire song if you don't watch out. Can I ask you a favor though? As a proffesional opinion, could you review some of my songs and I will yours? Thanks, I appreciate it. =P good luck and keep doing this nice music.