FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kybord Killr]

It was Ok.

That was way to short... but after all it was a loop. I think you mushed everything together. You need to make it slower and add different instruments.

226NeXuS responds:

Sure thing... I guess... I only have FL7 demo, so I'll have to start from scratch, but if I get the time I'll re-make it... I guess...

[-Goodbye-]

I don't know.

I don't have FL studio, so I don't know if you added very much to this pre-set or not. If you did, then it sounded very cool. Nice job.

uten responds:

well I wanted to use strings and all that but I think it sounds better like this I did add a reverb and only three channels

[TheBreeD - H20C0RE]

Well Shupdawoop and call me a retard...

This is the really cool man. I really enjoyed the fast beat and extra instruments you added to avoid repetition. Very nice job! I especially loved the song when it hit 39 seconds. It is hardcore. THe only thing I recommend, however, is making it longer and adding heavy harmony synths for a lead when you make it longer.

[Cripple Creek(WolfBlitz style)]

AHAHAH!!!

That made me laugh really hard. I know you were trying to be serious, but most people just don't appreciate Bluegrass. The sound of it just made me laugh! I suggest picking a different category.

WolfBlitz2 responds:

what as though?
Techno? House?
The thing is did you enjoy it?

[{D.J. Ace} Just Like Her]

RESPOND TO THIS REVIEW PLEASE!

ALright, I see you are beginning with Garageband, which is good. It is a great program to start out with. The background beat fit well with the piano. You did use pre-set loops, but it is Ok because you are just starting. What you should try doing now, is plugging the pre-set loops into different instruments for different sounds and effects. I am experienced with Garageband, and make all my songs using it. I will be happy to help you if you need any help. Mots importantly, however, you have GOT to respond to your reviews!!! So... Respond! And keep it up.

Ace75 responds:

Thanks. I would like to keep intouch with you if you really think you can help. P.M. me sometime!

[Gum Drop]

Made me jump.

The high sounding synths you used in this made me jump. Lower the tune of the synths, and this song would deserve an 9. To get a 10, simply add heavy violins around 50 seconds when that other beat starts. And another synthwhen 1 minute hits. Keep it up!

[Facet;:.]

Cool.

I likd the distortion in the electric guitar. It went very well with the piano. You managed to change the beat and tune of the song without taking away the guitar. It was too plain though. You need to add synths, and harmony in here.

[Only The Dead C The End Of War]

Nice.

The breath that was talking in the song went very well with the beat. It sounded like a rap song at first. It was a little too plain though, with only beats and the ocasional breath. You should add some heavy leading violins and piano with this. YEt, it was very smooth, nice job.

viciousproductions responds:

yeah thanx man..well violins i got no sounds like that..but piano i dont kno where to add it lol...maybe u can help me out

[Beer! (Kinda metalized)]

Ow..

Sorry, but it was way off tune, and the vocals didn't go with the music at all. The heavy metal screaming wasn't very good either. You need to improve your timing and the instruments need to change. I see that you were trying to create a heavy metal song, but it is very easy to mess up these kind of songs.

Blackdoom13 responds:

Your a duche.
Thanks for the contrustive critisium.
Dick

[F*** Scientology]

Lol.

Sounded like my door bell was ringing when that bell came in. Well, this was pretty funny, especially the vocals. Not to bad, but it was a little fuzzy.