FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Facet;:.]

Cool.

I likd the distortion in the electric guitar. It went very well with the piano. You managed to change the beat and tune of the song without taking away the guitar. It was too plain though. You need to add synths, and harmony in here.

[Only The Dead C The End Of War]

Nice.

The breath that was talking in the song went very well with the beat. It sounded like a rap song at first. It was a little too plain though, with only beats and the ocasional breath. You should add some heavy leading violins and piano with this. YEt, it was very smooth, nice job.

viciousproductions responds:

yeah thanx man..well violins i got no sounds like that..but piano i dont kno where to add it lol...maybe u can help me out

[Beer! (Kinda metalized)]

Ow..

Sorry, but it was way off tune, and the vocals didn't go with the music at all. The heavy metal screaming wasn't very good either. You need to improve your timing and the instruments need to change. I see that you were trying to create a heavy metal song, but it is very easy to mess up these kind of songs.

Blackdoom13 responds:

Your a duche.
Thanks for the contrustive critisium.
Dick

[F*** Scientology]

Lol.

Sounded like my door bell was ringing when that bell came in. Well, this was pretty funny, especially the vocals. Not to bad, but it was a little fuzzy.

[*DJxons* Get Right.]

Basic.

It was to basic. It had very little layers of sound. It was pratically only a beat, rather than a song. You need instruments like violins or pianos in here to spice up things a bit. Synths would help greatly as well. Just a beat, is kind of boring if you know what I mean.

[Metalman - Metal Dance]

Nice Track You've got here.

You had good build up, good instruments, and good vocals. The vocals were the freaking best. It almost sounded like you stole it from a real band! Lol. Well, I really enjoyed it. It was some sweet Rock. Keep it up with this band of yours!

I'm a fan of yours now, so as a fan, I have some FAN WORK to show you. It is a comedy, but you might enjoy it. The 4th episode you should see first though, the link is in the authors comments.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/119457

Good job so far on your songs!! This will probably get Top 5 of the week if it is an honest song made by yourself.

KEEP ON MAKING MORE!

TheMegas responds:

Hey, we are a real band! Thanks for the kind review. We've been around for a while, but I hadn't discovered the audio portal of Newgrounds until now :-)

Gonna go check out your link now.

[Inferno Na Terra]

uhh....

You just recorded this man, Cmon, you can do better than this! Try making the song on your own, though, I think you were just trying to be funny.

MuyAmigo responds:

oO

man i worked hard on that ,
what's the exact problem , the language ?
the riff order , the vocals ???

i was original , and followed my instincts man , what you suggest ?

[>_< It Came From Hell 1]

Uhh...

Well, I found it very dull... sorry about that. You need to change those instruments and make them less generic, like put in synths and things. It was OK, but not great. Keep it up!

[Green, Piano(NB Remastered)]

Great!

Cool. It was really chilling man. But, I found it not to be very original JUST BECAUSE, the style has been done, many times before. I really liked it, and voted 5, but I honestly don't think it deserves Top 5 or anything...

Jurian responds:

Why is this not original, give me songs that sound like it, it's just a piano solo with some stuff, how many people do piano solo's(on a keyboard(midi))?
Thanks for voting five

[B0UNC3 - Bleeding Heart]

LOL.

What is very ironic is that the flash's this is featured in are Hentais. And you just got dumped. =P Well, it was pretty cool, a little dull at times just because there wasn't any harmony pad in there... WHICH IT REALLY NEEDED! Well Bounc3, most of your songs are really good, so keep it up!