FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[*DJxons* Get Right.]

Basic.

It was to basic. It had very little layers of sound. It was pratically only a beat, rather than a song. You need instruments like violins or pianos in here to spice up things a bit. Synths would help greatly as well. Just a beat, is kind of boring if you know what I mean.

[Metalman - Metal Dance]

Nice Track You've got here.

You had good build up, good instruments, and good vocals. The vocals were the freaking best. It almost sounded like you stole it from a real band! Lol. Well, I really enjoyed it. It was some sweet Rock. Keep it up with this band of yours!

I'm a fan of yours now, so as a fan, I have some FAN WORK to show you. It is a comedy, but you might enjoy it. The 4th episode you should see first though, the link is in the authors comments.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/119457

Good job so far on your songs!! This will probably get Top 5 of the week if it is an honest song made by yourself.

KEEP ON MAKING MORE!

TheMegas responds:

Hey, we are a real band! Thanks for the kind review. We've been around for a while, but I hadn't discovered the audio portal of Newgrounds until now :-)

Gonna go check out your link now.

[Inferno Na Terra]

uhh....

You just recorded this man, Cmon, you can do better than this! Try making the song on your own, though, I think you were just trying to be funny.

MuyAmigo responds:

oO

man i worked hard on that ,
what's the exact problem , the language ?
the riff order , the vocals ???

i was original , and followed my instincts man , what you suggest ?

[>_< It Came From Hell 1]

Uhh...

Well, I found it very dull... sorry about that. You need to change those instruments and make them less generic, like put in synths and things. It was OK, but not great. Keep it up!

[Green, Piano(NB Remastered)]

Great!

Cool. It was really chilling man. But, I found it not to be very original JUST BECAUSE, the style has been done, many times before. I really liked it, and voted 5, but I honestly don't think it deserves Top 5 or anything...

Jurian responds:

Why is this not original, give me songs that sound like it, it's just a piano solo with some stuff, how many people do piano solo's(on a keyboard(midi))?
Thanks for voting five

[B0UNC3 - Bleeding Heart]

LOL.

What is very ironic is that the flash's this is featured in are Hentais. And you just got dumped. =P Well, it was pretty cool, a little dull at times just because there wasn't any harmony pad in there... WHICH IT REALLY NEEDED! Well Bounc3, most of your songs are really good, so keep it up!

[Memories...]

Really?

I made a song once to because my freind died... lol. Well, good job, very simple choords, yet great sounding instruments. The Pad was a little dull, but it was cool. I liked how you included bass in the background. Nice.

Keep it up!

[B0UNC3 - Infinite love]

YEEEHHHHHHHAAAAAAAA!!!

It is time to party!!! Freaking awesome! Makes me want to get up and dance like crazy!! WOOHOO!!

[Man In the Smoking Mirror]

Crazy.

My right speaker was sounding pretty strange with that long synth you put in. The first synth to actually have a tune to it, was a little bit off tune. I think that was the idea you were going for, but it still didn't sound to good. Until the synth at 1:10 came in, I thought the song wasn't very good. Good job at that beat. The title fit the selection very well, and I am glad you changed the off tune synth after 1:40 to a different synth. Lol, my right speaker was possessed again a 2:10. The beat was random at 2:30. Still, I could tell a lot of effort was put forth in the song, good job, and if you ever need any ideas, or a laugh, listen to some of my songs. Thanks.

Keep it up.

WritersBlock responds:

The piano was a little detuned, so that might have thrown the bass off. Also, in the background there was a dissonant guitar playing, that would have added to the mess. It was purposeful though, the intro had the two saws with a rising pitch, I set it up for one to rise and fall a little faster sounding more out of tune at the peak. It was also panned far to the right so that would be cause for the posession, that's bass! I dunno how it'd sound on a subwoofer, though, might not be low enough... It came back a couple of times though, so that's what was happening at 2:10. 2:30, the bass was a little quiet for what I had wanted, so the chromatic melody didn't come through as much as to tell what it was. It's pretty kickass though.
But, yeah, when the main reece comes in, it settles down a lot and it's not as weird, but that weird drak ambient drum and bass was all I was going for, it's more of a technical piece than a melodic, consonant song.

Cheers for the review, I can see you put some effort into critical thinking.

[Playing with Hofmann]

Cool.

It was decent, and it sounded pretty good. I liked the synths you used, but I was expecting a hard beat or harmony to come in, but it never did. You can't just have little small synths here and there, you need big ones. THe one at 109 didn't cut it either. If you need any ideas, check out some of my songs. You can review if you want, but I only reviewed one of yours.