FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Man In the Smoking Mirror]

Crazy.

My right speaker was sounding pretty strange with that long synth you put in. The first synth to actually have a tune to it, was a little bit off tune. I think that was the idea you were going for, but it still didn't sound to good. Until the synth at 1:10 came in, I thought the song wasn't very good. Good job at that beat. The title fit the selection very well, and I am glad you changed the off tune synth after 1:40 to a different synth. Lol, my right speaker was possessed again a 2:10. The beat was random at 2:30. Still, I could tell a lot of effort was put forth in the song, good job, and if you ever need any ideas, or a laugh, listen to some of my songs. Thanks.

Keep it up.

WritersBlock responds:

The piano was a little detuned, so that might have thrown the bass off. Also, in the background there was a dissonant guitar playing, that would have added to the mess. It was purposeful though, the intro had the two saws with a rising pitch, I set it up for one to rise and fall a little faster sounding more out of tune at the peak. It was also panned far to the right so that would be cause for the posession, that's bass! I dunno how it'd sound on a subwoofer, though, might not be low enough... It came back a couple of times though, so that's what was happening at 2:10. 2:30, the bass was a little quiet for what I had wanted, so the chromatic melody didn't come through as much as to tell what it was. It's pretty kickass though.
But, yeah, when the main reece comes in, it settles down a lot and it's not as weird, but that weird drak ambient drum and bass was all I was going for, it's more of a technical piece than a melodic, consonant song.

Cheers for the review, I can see you put some effort into critical thinking.

[Playing with Hofmann]

Cool.

It was decent, and it sounded pretty good. I liked the synths you used, but I was expecting a hard beat or harmony to come in, but it never did. You can't just have little small synths here and there, you need big ones. THe one at 109 didn't cut it either. If you need any ideas, check out some of my songs. You can review if you want, but I only reviewed one of yours.

[Quantum Laboratory]

Very Raw.

Personally, raw isn't my style, but it was very original. Especially the synth coming in a 31 seconds. Keep up the work man.

Suspended-3rd-Chord responds:

hmm...I'm confused what you mean by raw? Thanks for the review man! And I appreciate that you didnt let your personal tastes influence your score :)

[HighVolume]

Sweet!

No really, this was awesome. I mloved the beat in every way. Kepp it up man!

Dj-Rippa responds:

Thanx man:D:D glad u liked it

[Resident EvilCode VernicaXTmix]

Sweet!

You completley destroyed the horror atmosphere you know, LOL. Still, it was a pretty cool, solid tune.

[Sun Globe]

Dude sweet!

You have the same ideas that I do. This was awesome man. I loved the bright pad you used to begin the song. And then continued it with techno beats and sounds. You should listen to some of my music, I think you would like it.

[In The Club]

Sweet.

Nice and smooth, especially the singing. Nice work. I liked how you changed the flowing, to rapping. Lol. DIdn't expect a real rap song. Knew it was when I heard the word N****rs. Made me laugh.. =)

Keep it up! And check out some of mine, though it is Ambient and not rap, so you would probably like The Adventures of FattyMcpatty and LardyLarLar more.

CaliberTheButcher responds:

lol yeah ima have to check some of em out

[[Kriz] ~ Hardline]

WOh! Now this is different.

Same tempo, but that deosn't really matter with how original this one is... The CMON was great lol, made me want to GET DOWN ON TEH DANCE FLOOR! Rocking out to the bass line was sweet. It reminded me of space sort of... you should call it Meteor Hardline or somehing. Great job! oh hey... around 1:30, was that a sample beat? Because you use it in some of your other songs.

Kr1z responds:

a .. sample beat?
err no i make everything myself.. :)
Thx for the nice review!

Kriz.

[[Kriz] - Fluctuations]

THere we go.

This is what I was looking for, nice piano, and build up synth. The clapping went well with the drum track as well. And then you switched the piano over to synth again... LOL GOD DAMMIT. Oh, but that synth around 1:02 that came in was awesome. It sounded like it was from a video game. YOu know, I might end up creating a game with a lot of your songs in it, and call it Kr1z Audio: The Game. Yeah... maybe... lol. Well, I like your style, and I hope some noobish idvice might help you. XD

Kr1z responds:

wow "Kr1z audio: the game" would honestly be .. great!!!! :D
Im glad u like my songs ^^
Thx for the reviews dewd! :D

[[Kriz] - Delightness]

THis is what I mean.

I really enjoy the songs man, and I mean A LOT, but many of your songs have the same main beat and synths. The synths change around and everything, but this sounds much like your previous song on the weekly top 5 this week. You should try making a different tempo and beat. Include some violins or something, maybe some generic instruments. Fantastic job though of even being able to produce this kind of stuff. Keep up the good work. And if you ever need ideas, then listen to some of my nooby songs! lol. Or, if you want a laugh, then listen to my series The Adventures Of FattyMcpatty And LardyLarLar.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/117672

Hope you like it.

P.S. I am inclusing about 3 of your songs in this rave my freinds and I are having at my city arena. Yeah! Gonna dance to that....

Kr1z responds:

Thx for the tips ^^
Ur kinda right :D
Thx for including my songs in teh rave!! :D aweszome ^^
Bye ^^