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It was a thingy alright.

It was pretty cool, but a little bit to High in tune. I thought the way you plugged in the pre-set loops was pretty cool. But then it all smashed together and I had to turn it off... Sorry man, I didn't like it. Nice effort, you just messed up in making the song.

RadioactiveRhino responds:

Ok, just for the record, I DID NOT USE ANY PRESET LOOPS WHATSOEVER. I USED PRESET INSTRUMENTS, YES, BUT ZERO LOOPS, PRESET OR CUSTOM MADE, WERE USED.
But yes, it is messed up :P

HUH?

Ok, all you did was use a pre-set song man. Seriously. Put effort into your songs. don't use these pre-set songs.

crazygermanguy responds:

A template is different from a preset "song". Mostly because a song has something called "notes" which are not in the template. The template just gives you a few instruments, and some basic settings. Admittedly, I did not put an incredible amount of effort into this song. However, music is not judged on the effort, but by sound. Otherwise, Nirvana's Smells Like Teen Spirit would have gone nowhere- it's great song, but if Cobain wrote his lyrics 5 minutes before I hardly call that a ridiculous amount of effort.

Cool.

You should try Garageband without loops now. Try playing smoe, or just simply move the notes around by clicking that scissors button.

I didn't like the way you put the loops together ion this one, because it seemed all jammed together. XD

LOL.

It was pretty good. i liked how you used the same loops, but with different instruments. Nice job.

kchrules responds:

Thanks FatKidWitAJetPak

Hey hey hey! GARAGEBAND!!!

I see you use Garageband, well, I would be happy to help you with it. I am experienced in Garageband, and make all my songs with the program. I see you are now just starting out with pre-set loops, but I ddi too lol. XD

Check out some of my songs, I will check out yours, and I will be glad to help you if you have any questions. Good luck!

I liked this though, it showed creativity.

kchrules responds:

Thanks I like your songs too.

Woh!

Dude, freaking awesome. The piano had a great tune to it. And then the background pad made me want to cry! (A good thing) Keep it up man, great harmony in this song.

7-Twisted-7 responds:

Glad you liked it, thanks a lot.

the sound wasn't in sync all the way.

Some of the song skipped a little. It would have been OK if you would fix that. But i am not that much of a Jhonny Cash man. Funny though.

trashcanman responds:

my computer is shit

WOW.

Lol, such a nerdy title. XP The vocals were pretty cool. This sounded EXACTLY like the song under sounds like.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/120322

Lol, just to give you an idea.

D-A-J responds:

erm... not really...

that track is more trance, this track is dance... HUGE difference =)

Nice.

It is amazing of how easy it is to create such songs with Fl Studio isn't it?

You ahd a good build up. You also choosed good synths. The main choord line after the build up, was too heavy. You need to make just a tad softer. Or you can make it deep, while still having the hardcore effect to it.

Nice, keep trying! This one was better techno I could make lol.

DavidKrachtLam responds:

The reason to why i use FL :) I didn't think the main synth after the build up was too heavy, more a bit too loud. Nonetheless, i let it stay as it was.

Oh, hello there. I guess you want to know who I am. I mainly create ambient music and voice act here on NG. Occasionally youll see me produce some silly animation or game. If you want to chat or something, send me a spanky danky PM. *Sig by Magical-Zorse*

Age 33, Male

Apple & Entrepreneur

Whats a... school?

Little Rock, AR

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