FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Fall from Happiness]

Who the hell is Shenmue? lol.

Well, whoever he is, I am sure that you created the song just as well. I liked the tune! I can see that you have a talent with the piano. =)

Cosmos8942 responds:

I do have talent with the piano. Though the talent that created the basic tune for this song was not mine. Just you wait though! Ten or so weeks from now if I have the room in my dorm or apartment (whatever >.>) I will buying a piano and then we will see how good I am still after more than two years of no more than looking at one.

-AJ-

[After It All Ended]

Interesting... but!!!

You seemed to be a little off tune in this one. With the piano only. The strings were good, and you had a good idea off what to do, but I can tell that you rushed this one.

Cosmos8942 responds:

One of my earliest audio. I sorta rushed this...but at the time I really didn't have the patience, nor the ability to really sit down and make something. Now I do...and you can see/hear that in my work. Though I have a feeling that all I need to do is get away for a little while and I will be better...

We will see though...six to eight weeks from now anyhow.

-AJ-

[A Dreamer's Fantasy]

Fantasy!

All I can say for this one is that is would be GREAT (And I mean like frosted flakes great) for a Zelda® Game! Great job. =)

Cosmos8942 responds:

Pfft...Zelda kicks my *bleep* (XD). I have nothing on Zelda ><. Anyhow! Thanks for this, the 10/10 which is nice to look at, and of course the review which is much more fun to read.

:D,
-AJ-

[A Dream of the Skies Above]

Sounds very cool.

The piano choords, and the violin were PERFECT TOGETHER!!! I love this one!! It can make you cry! Man, perfect title yet again! I could picture a man dreaming in the skies... great job!!!!! Add to favs.

Cosmos8942 responds:

Over-ethusiasim XD (was that spelled right? =.=). I also enjoy this one, and I have to wonder why it is enjoyed so much O.O *blinks*. Well anyhow, thanks again for another review (your sixth?) and yet another 10/10 (starting to wonder if you even notice you are giving me 10s XD.

-AJ-

Cya and cya =D

[-Self Sacrifice-]

Very VERY good, great title to.

You are a good title creator no doubt about it. I could exactly picture a self sacrafice in this one. It was a little sad to. and.,.,. UHOH!!! at 53 seconds you messed up in playing the tune!! OH NO!! THE UNIVERSE IS COLLAPSING ON ITSELF!! Ahaha, I am sure that nobody would even notice that. Very good, I like the deep feeling of this song and am dding it to my favorites, as well as you to my favorite artists.

Cosmos8942 responds:

I enjoy this song for the one fact that it gets stuck in a person's head once they hear it.

Yes I know I messed up slightly around that area but I just didn't care...I was tired and a bit annoyed so I said "Screw it", submitted and went to bed. Anyhow...you make it sound like I don't make mistakes :O. On the contrary I make so many I want to toss some of these songs in the air and shoot them...but thats just me XD.

Thanks for the review...though I have to say, I am not sure that I deserve a 10/10 on so many of my songs o.o...thanks though! :].

-AJ-

[-Kirby - SR-]

I am sure you know this by now BUT

You need to avoid creating "slight" remixes of songs. This will make your fans annoyed! It was very good that you managed to compose it though, so I will give you that. Make sure to add on at least several different instruments and 1 minute to the song.

Cosmos8942 responds:

Oh I do know this...I created this when I was in my slump. I was just trying to break out of it and well...you can see where that led me XD T.T. Anyhow...I have been back and forth on whether or not I should delete this one and redo it.

When I get back...perhaps I will ^^.
-AJ-

[-FFVII - Cry of the Planet-]

Cry Of the Planet...

i loved the name. It was a very dark tune, best for inside a temple, or going through a point n click game where you are trapped inside a house. It brings me back to the old NES games.. Oh, and I enjoyed the little add ons and take offs you did here and there to prevent repeat from occuring. I am giving you a 9 because It made me feel a little edgy, waiting for it to end. If it were to be put in a video game, you would need to have many more instruments. Great job still! =D (oh wait I'm sorry I meant) :D

Cosmos8942 responds:

Hmm...this one is nice...but it really doesn't deviate too much from that original until the drums kick in. Even then its not that good. The drums add a nice touch but they also tend to drown out the other instruments a little...which is something I would prefer to not do.

Once again though...I find that your taste for the placement of this song to be at best...odd XD. So once again do I say that I have no idea whether or not it would work. In all I made this song just because I could...and btw...this is from Final Fantasy VII.

Thanks ^^,
-AJ-

[-Credits [DK]-]

Woh!!!

That was fantastic! This was a very, original song that could be used in a video game where you are in the mountains, fighting... Or where you are flying through the clouds on a dragon. But best of all, it would fit just simply running through a grassy plain and jumping. Great job and keep it up!!! =P

Cosmos8942 responds:

Original? Not this one...not quite. This is actually, if I remember correctly, part of the Donkey Kong Country soundtrack for the original game. I just sorta...spiced it up ;].

I will say this though, you sure have interesting taste when it comes down to where you would put this song if you made a flash XD. Who knows though...it could work o.o.

Thanks :D,
-AJ-

Another review from you o.O.

[-Chaos-WiP]

Sweet.

Do you play all your instruments by yourself? or do you use a program? Well, good job on tis one. I especially liked the piano in it. =) Oh, and it is a 9 for simplicity. (Just because it could have some more strings inthere and/ot be longer)

Cosmos8942 responds:

Decent sure....but this song is not as good as you make it seem. The below reviews I agree with. This song is good at best but it is not great.

Thanks again for the review...though this time I disagree with with you a little.

-AJ-

Oh and btw I do use a program (or programS)...only instrument I can't really sit down and play is the piano. =\

[Fleeting Times]

Very interesting!

I loved the combination of instruments you used. You choose the perfect synth and piano instruments for this one! Ok... I am trying to see something that needs changing... Oh that's good! In 37 you went into the combination of violins. Very Nice. I am also noticing that you are not repeating yourself... besides the guitar, but that is the main chorus so it doesn't really count. Ok, heres what I think you (and I) should do here. I should add a synth in there from one of my Ambient songs. But first things first, this is a very good song, and I will be very glad to participate in adding on to it. 10/10 5/5. Contact me on your response to me adding a synth. (Like the ones from (::Rebirth Of Stars::) would be the best I think...)

Cosmos8942 responds:

Mmm first off this song does repeat in upon itself a bit...but in a good way. You would add in a synth from one of your songs? That is actually flattery in of itself, your synths are quite well thought out and demonstrated in your work. Its a pity I can't do that with pads ><...yet :D. Hmm...I wonder if I still have the original for this one...? I will have to look for it though don't count on it ><.

Thanks though! Once again!! O.O
-AJ-