FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chaotic Angel]

Ok, heres a few tip.

One, turn down the very begginning drum down just a tad bit. It was a very original track, and you choose the perfect title for this song. But, the main thing you need to do is add different types of synths and not just that one. You also did a good job in looping the track I noticed. Good job al in all.

Phiya responds:

thanx for the tips

[Bosque De Hielo]

Very strange!!!

It was the weirdest beat I have ever heard! (That's good) Well, you want this song remixed right? I don't think that is possible because it is so original and remixed already. Well.. I liked almost everything about it except that it was such a strange beat... that the song itself didn't sound very good. Keep trying is all I have to say, try listening to other peoples music like mine... HINT. lol, seriously, you have got to kepp it up man and I am sure you will do good. This song would be good in a circus video of some sorts.

[R3LAX]

Very Metreiod Primish

It was very smooth. More Hip hopish than soothing though...It needed a faster build up mainly because it was sounding repetitive. Try not to repeatyour loops. It was Ok, but you need to go about a different way of making your songs. Try Listening to my song (::Rebirth Of Stars::) If you need any ideas. Good luck.

[HFB! Finished and Remastered]

FRAKING AWESOME.

That was fantastic, the piano combined with the synth and heavy industrial sounds. Very good.

DomesticTerrorist responds:

I appreciate it man, glad it turned out alright :D

[Clear Cut]

That WAS weird.

I loved the slow... steady intro you used. And I liked it how you kept on adding beats and things. It needed some more synth to it you know? It got a little annoying. But it was pretty cool.

liasmen responds:

Thanks for the review. Bear in mind that this is one of the first songs I ever made and that I have submitted different versions.

[Bossa Loop 1]

Good!

It was perfect for a loop. I might use it!

liasmen responds:

Thank you so much for all of your reviews!

[Bipolar Loop]

Interesting...

It got really good when it hit 20 seconds. I liked it, even though it isn't my usual style.

[(-(-(Relax)-)-)]

Interesting.

I liked the synths and drums you used, but there was some noise in the background that added white noise. All together though, it was a very cool tune. Great job and keep up the good work. I make things like this to you know... If you want, could you write a review for (::Sleep::) BUT PLEASE LISTEN TO ALL OF IT!! I think you will love it. =) Well, I am going to review some more of your music, you seem to get the main picture.

[(((Tainted love)))Vocals))))]

Better than me lol.

i only saw a few minor errors in the picth of your voice, everything else was GREAT! Well... I make music, but I don't sing. Check out some of my songs if you want lol.

grandman1023 responds:

thanx alot and yeah i just put out the whole song out so give that a listen

[diss you d]

AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! ^___^

That was HILARIOUS! Ahaha... Epic.