FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[When should we die?]

ACK PIANO.

The piano sounded off tune. The beginning pad sounded nice, but the piano completley ruined the feeling. Replace the piano with some sort of nice sounding synth pad. And continue the pad from the beginning.

st91 responds:

piano=purposly off tune. but i shall try something different next time.

[Pre-funk]

Kind of annoying

You probably dont want me to review this song, because it sounded ike it was more of an experiment than anything else. The vocals were hilarious lol. :S

8 for creativity. ^_^ WHERES MY FREAKING CAR?!

st91 responds:

yeeaaahhh i kind of guessed people think this is annoying but at least you liked the vocals. i got them from "dude wheres my car" if you havnt seen that...(i actually havnt seen it myself i just find these things everywhere lol.)

[Playing with Fire {revised}]

Distortion with taste.

YOu made the disortion sound very well with the beats you added. The title went very well with the song. It had an edgy feeling to it... LIKE FIRE OLOLOL.

Keep it up! Your songs are getting good! ; )

Try adding some pads in there for epicness.

st91 responds:

this was actually derived from my original "playing with fire" but i fixed it a little bit for the well deserving newgrounds users *wink wink* and i dont mean to burst your bubble or anything but there actually isnt any distortion.

[1029384756]

Its alright.

This had a nice and smooth beat to it, but it was REAL random. You just seemed to cut off the first beat entirely and start out with another one. EVen that one got cut off. There was to much silence in there as well. Just put the beats together more smoothly and you got yourself a nice song. ; )

st91 responds:

well you'd be surprised by how little an amount of time i have on my hands...if i could fix all my songs and stop them from sounding retarded then i would, but i cant. why? because i practically had zero time to make this in the first place.

[@ndrea - Candy Dance]

ITS A TRIBUT DUMBASSES.

Lol sorry about that X D Most of these reviewers dont realize that you were doing a tribute with mixed synths made by all these pro artists. They were not your synths DUH, but that is why it is a tribute. A very nice tribute indeed!!! Great job, and try mixing some awesome trance songs with your own original beats and synths in your next song. I would enjoy listening to what you can do if you can actually clone theses pros.

I noticed you put some Kr1z in there BTW. He is my favorite artist... and I uhh... ANNOY HIM A BIT. Well great job again, this song is pretty cool.

AndreaDigita responds:

Yes! The all famous Kr1z pads are great ^^

Thanks for defending me, those guys are being really nasty to me :(

They simply dont get the point of the song : \

['Rain' (Rmx) Trd Vs MikeBlade<]

8 Bit sounds?

Werre those 8 bit sounds used in the begiining? Nah.. nevermind. It was a col song at first, but all the dissorented sounds after that really messed up the feel to it. I see you were trying to create a dissorented sound and fell, so that you could bring in a really cool build up and finish with that large beat sound, but it just didnt fit in like you were trying to make it. You also brought in many random sounds, like out of nowhere, that didnt fit in with the song at all. If you combined all these noises together in better harmony, you could make one sweet awesome hip-hop song.

Good luck!

Treadz responds:

hey cheers man.

i've got alot better at mastering since i made this so theres a redo coming soon :P

thanks for yr feedback on my other song.

[Gold Rollin' [Instrumental]]

HERES YOUR 5

It was very nice and smooth to listen to. It was true hip-hop. I loved the way you brought in the beginning beats, and continued them with great percussion sounds. It was so... relaxing. I could just sit down and groove at the same time to this beat. Nice one on making an instrumental to this song. ; )

Keep it up!

Treadz responds:

cheers man. its George Winston: Alone (Piano Solo) ;)

[DnB Flang]

The begginning beat it cool.

It was way to dissorented for one, but the beats were real nice. Just cut down the dissortion by a lot.

st91 responds:

yeah thats sort of what i was aiming for because most of my beats are too raw and clean so i wanted to amplify the drums a little so they sounded glitched. anyways thx for the review ps: pancakes is 1 of my fav games.

[Crossing the Threshold]

LOL

The fuzzyness made the song kind of annoying. It wa to dissorented. You need to make the fuzyness more clearer if you want a rave song. Nice beats though.

Michael425 responds:

yeah, this one was not fully mastered. Thanks for the review though.

[Final Summer]

=o =o =O 0_0

Hey this is better! It has a nice, solid beat with fresh sounds that echo in the background. I could use this for the credits... :D

MAYBE MAYBE?!!?!

Michael425 responds:

that would be sick man.