FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

['Rain' (Rmx) Trd Vs MikeBlade<]

8 Bit sounds?

Werre those 8 bit sounds used in the begiining? Nah.. nevermind. It was a col song at first, but all the dissorented sounds after that really messed up the feel to it. I see you were trying to create a dissorented sound and fell, so that you could bring in a really cool build up and finish with that large beat sound, but it just didnt fit in like you were trying to make it. You also brought in many random sounds, like out of nowhere, that didnt fit in with the song at all. If you combined all these noises together in better harmony, you could make one sweet awesome hip-hop song.

Good luck!

Treadz responds:

hey cheers man.

i've got alot better at mastering since i made this so theres a redo coming soon :P

thanks for yr feedback on my other song.

[Gold Rollin' [Instrumental]]

HERES YOUR 5

It was very nice and smooth to listen to. It was true hip-hop. I loved the way you brought in the beginning beats, and continued them with great percussion sounds. It was so... relaxing. I could just sit down and groove at the same time to this beat. Nice one on making an instrumental to this song. ; )

Keep it up!

Treadz responds:

cheers man. its George Winston: Alone (Piano Solo) ;)

[Crossing the Threshold]

LOL

The fuzzyness made the song kind of annoying. It wa to dissorented. You need to make the fuzyness more clearer if you want a rave song. Nice beats though.

Michael425 responds:

yeah, this one was not fully mastered. Thanks for the review though.

[Final Summer]

=o =o =O 0_0

Hey this is better! It has a nice, solid beat with fresh sounds that echo in the background. I could use this for the credits... :D

MAYBE MAYBE?!!?!

Michael425 responds:

that would be sick man.

[Sticky Icky]

The good thing is...

The lryics. Actually, I kind of liked the lryics in this one the best. It had an opinion in it. However, you cursed WAY to much. The cursing made it sound terrible. You can still curse, but dont over do it! Nice one though! I could groove to this. LOL.. the laughing part was pretty funny. Were you trying to say how messed up the minds of the street is?.. while you were also saying the goverment was messed up... Hmm.. interesting. AND YES GEORGE BUSH IS A TERRIBLE PERSON. :S

Nammie responds:

thanks for the one good review ass

[-Ruff Times-]

The best you have so far.

It had a nice follow up and then lead into a great solo. However, you still need to make more drums and put them in there. Violins and synths would work nice as well. The singing at 1:11 was awful by the way. You need to cut that out.

Nammie responds:

yah whut are u like an eminem lover or sumptin cus its all clown love where im from

[SKM]

You sure like rap.

You need to cut out a lot of the cursing and add soem better beats in these songs man.

Nammie responds:

It's joking around fool We were fuckin with the sounds.

[2012]

Did you make this?

Because it sounds like you didnt make this in your authors comments lol. Well, it was a nice rap song. The cursing was a bit much, and the beat was kind of annoying... BUT THAT IS THE DEFINITION OF A NICE RAP SONG ANYWAY LOL... Sorry it wasnt that good. You need to add more than one regular constant beat. The lryics were creative though so I give you points for that.

Nammie responds:

Well I like the beat BITCH! Especially the snare! Yes we made it but it's olllld!

[Star_Crossed (unfinished full)]

PROFESSIONAL.

Truly professional. Everything was filtered out PERFECTLY. No criticism here. KEEP THIS RAVE STUFF UP!!!!

Desyre responds:

Wow... thanks!