FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[Kriz] ~ Hardline]

WOh! Now this is different.

Same tempo, but that deosn't really matter with how original this one is... The CMON was great lol, made me want to GET DOWN ON TEH DANCE FLOOR! Rocking out to the bass line was sweet. It reminded me of space sort of... you should call it Meteor Hardline or somehing. Great job! oh hey... around 1:30, was that a sample beat? Because you use it in some of your other songs.

Kr1z responds:

a .. sample beat?
err no i make everything myself.. :)
Thx for the nice review!

Kriz.

[[Kriz] - Fluctuations]

THere we go.

This is what I was looking for, nice piano, and build up synth. The clapping went well with the drum track as well. And then you switched the piano over to synth again... LOL GOD DAMMIT. Oh, but that synth around 1:02 that came in was awesome. It sounded like it was from a video game. YOu know, I might end up creating a game with a lot of your songs in it, and call it Kr1z Audio: The Game. Yeah... maybe... lol. Well, I like your style, and I hope some noobish idvice might help you. XD

Kr1z responds:

wow "Kr1z audio: the game" would honestly be .. great!!!! :D
Im glad u like my songs ^^
Thx for the reviews dewd! :D

[[Kriz] - Delightness]

THis is what I mean.

I really enjoy the songs man, and I mean A LOT, but many of your songs have the same main beat and synths. The synths change around and everything, but this sounds much like your previous song on the weekly top 5 this week. You should try making a different tempo and beat. Include some violins or something, maybe some generic instruments. Fantastic job though of even being able to produce this kind of stuff. Keep up the good work. And if you ever need ideas, then listen to some of my nooby songs! lol. Or, if you want a laugh, then listen to my series The Adventures Of FattyMcpatty And LardyLarLar.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/117672

Hope you like it.

P.S. I am inclusing about 3 of your songs in this rave my freinds and I are having at my city arena. Yeah! Gonna dance to that....

Kr1z responds:

Thx for the tips ^^
Ur kinda right :D
Thx for including my songs in teh rave!! :D aweszome ^^
Bye ^^

[[Kriz] - Sparkling]

SWEET.

I liked it a lot, that simple. I am going to go dance on the street now until somebody yells at me. AWESOME!

Kr1z responds:

lmao! awesome ^^
Thx :D

[´Kriz: Forever]

Hello DJ Nate.

Lol, it wasn't very original... I just didn't like the fact that it sounded so much like every other trance song. But, it was something I could type to really really fast lol. Good job, and keep sounding like DJ-NATE.

Kr1z responds:

Dude this aint sounding like 'all other trance songs' :P
Everyone else just fakes me :(

Lol
Ah well thx for the review. Bye ^^

[In Pursuit of Justice]

LOL.

Sorry, but this has been done before. Though, the melody was original. THe idea wasn't though. I still enjoyed it though! Especially the violins you had in there. DO you play these on a keyboard? Great job. Oh and, it stopped at the perfect time.

cycerin responds:

Ha, did I ever boast that mixing breakbeat and strings is an original feat? I program my staccato violin arrangements, but I usually conceptualize them while playing a keyboard.

Thanks for the review and the score.

[Vain Star]

Nice beat!

Sweet, I loved how you used that drum set and combination of irony synths. This is pretty cool. It just was missing some kind of main harmony line around 1:25 that should of been there. You could just do some ambience, and I would have nothing to complain about. =P

cycerin responds:

What if it IS somewhat ambient? :D

[[K]- Neon]

Question.

HOw do you make those synths? Just wondering if you can give me a link showing some pics and things for the program you are using. (FL Studio no doubt)

*Ahem* I enjoyed the synth, it is always nice to hear a different synth, one at a time. Good job man.

Korpze responds:

^_^ thx, i used morphine, go to fruityloops.com, under plugins, then morphine, im sure you would find it there.
[Edit:]
oh and yes i am using FL Studio (of course)

[Karco - Apology (Trance Remix)]

beat beat beat...

Well, it wasn't very original or anything. It had a good, solid beat, but wasn't very interesting. Though, the electric piano there did spice up things a bit. You should of added some sort of harmony and different combinations of heavy synths at around 1:08. It was addicting enough to keep on listening though. But, every time it would build up with those cymbals, I thought there was going to be something else, but there wasn't. You should make more changes than just that piano at 2:00 and the end of the beat near the middle. I am sure I would understand the main idea of the song if I were to listen to the original Apology. It was certainly different! I liked the style mainly, great job. Hey, would you do me a favor and check out my series I am making in the audio portal?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/117672

Thank. =) You might like it, but if you do, i strongly recommend seeing the rest of them in order. There are 4 currently. Enjoy!

And keep making music. =P

Karco responds:

I'll actually agree with you there - first off, it was a remix, and then I recycled samples, rhythms, composition... the reason was, at the time, I wanted to get the song done - anything was fine as long as I was satisfied with it. It didn't have to sound good to the artists picking out every little detail... like I usually do, actually. :P

Hmm, I like the heavy synth idea! :D I'm going to play with the project file right now, and see what I can get done. I might even reupload it, depending on what I get. You never know. ;)

EDIT: Gave it a try, didn't come up with much - it doesn't fit. :\ There is a way to get it, I think, that would be perfect for this song, but I don't think I know how... XD

At least it was addicting to you, and not boring! ;) Hmm - if, by "build up," you mean the reverse sample - I wasn't trying to build anything up, it was just another effect.

As for changing things... this is a remix, and like I said in the last response, this is a remix of older composition, most of which is awful. I just salvaged the best of it, which turned into a pretty decent song. :P

As for the original Apology, it's on my page, though extremely old and honestly not something I'd recommend listening to - I made it after less than a month of making music. Enough said, right? XD

Glad you liked the style, and the song overall! :D I'll definitely give your stuff a look, thanks for the review and high ratings. I'll definitely keep making music! >:)

[[{*ReVeRsE_HeLL*}]]

Hey, another.

It was very strange, and hurt my ears a little. I honestly didn't even think it was music...
For music, you can't just have a whole bunch of mixed up things like this. It didn't even have a beat. You have to add harmony man.

Try listening to songs like mine, or someone elses to get an idea of how the way music is made. Good luck.

JesterCo responds:

its not music, it was an expiriment i made a long long time ago!
i know its pretty wierd, and its not ment to be goodm
but thanks for the review!

and i will make sure to listen to songs like urs!:)