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[Karco - Apology (Trance Remix)]

beat beat beat...

Well, it wasn't very original or anything. It had a good, solid beat, but wasn't very interesting. Though, the electric piano there did spice up things a bit. You should of added some sort of harmony and different combinations of heavy synths at around 1:08. It was addicting enough to keep on listening though. But, every time it would build up with those cymbals, I thought there was going to be something else, but there wasn't. You should make more changes than just that piano at 2:00 and the end of the beat near the middle. I am sure I would understand the main idea of the song if I were to listen to the original Apology. It was certainly different! I liked the style mainly, great job. Hey, would you do me a favor and check out my series I am making in the audio portal?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/117672

Thank. =) You might like it, but if you do, i strongly recommend seeing the rest of them in order. There are 4 currently. Enjoy!

And keep making music. =P

Karco responds:

I'll actually agree with you there - first off, it was a remix, and then I recycled samples, rhythms, composition... the reason was, at the time, I wanted to get the song done - anything was fine as long as I was satisfied with it. It didn't have to sound good to the artists picking out every little detail... like I usually do, actually. :P

Hmm, I like the heavy synth idea! :D I'm going to play with the project file right now, and see what I can get done. I might even reupload it, depending on what I get. You never know. ;)

EDIT: Gave it a try, didn't come up with much - it doesn't fit. :\ There is a way to get it, I think, that would be perfect for this song, but I don't think I know how... XD

At least it was addicting to you, and not boring! ;) Hmm - if, by "build up," you mean the reverse sample - I wasn't trying to build anything up, it was just another effect.

As for changing things... this is a remix, and like I said in the last response, this is a remix of older composition, most of which is awful. I just salvaged the best of it, which turned into a pretty decent song. :P

As for the original Apology, it's on my page, though extremely old and honestly not something I'd recommend listening to - I made it after less than a month of making music. Enough said, right? XD

Glad you liked the style, and the song overall! :D I'll definitely give your stuff a look, thanks for the review and high ratings. I'll definitely keep making music! >:)

[[{*ReVeRsE_HeLL*}]]

Hey, another.

It was very strange, and hurt my ears a little. I honestly didn't even think it was music...
For music, you can't just have a whole bunch of mixed up things like this. It didn't even have a beat. You have to add harmony man.

Try listening to songs like mine, or someone elses to get an idea of how the way music is made. Good luck.

JesterCo responds:

its not music, it was an expiriment i made a long long time ago!
i know its pretty wierd, and its not ment to be goodm
but thanks for the review!

and i will make sure to listen to songs like urs!:)

[Discott]

Nice man... nice.

It was awesome. Freaking mixed up and everything! WOOT!

>=U

THOUGH I RECOMMEND SOMETHING.

You shouldn't make that main choord line stop so suddenly in the beginning.

Oh, you know Fatty 4 is out?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/117672

loogiesquared responds:

^.^ Fatty 4!

I blended Rock+Disco!
i did it!
i like pancakes!

[[{*AiRpLaNe*}]]

I loved the bouncing effects.

It was a nice sounding song. The bouncing effects you used were freaking sweet. The drums, however, didn't go so well with the piece. Well, good luck on your fut-----

WOH. The crazy indian chanting there at the end made me want to continue this review. =D Well, it was kind of random, so it didn't go to well with it either. Try choosing certain things to go well with your music. If you need any help, just contact me.

And if you want, you can help me by reviewing/voting on a voice acting thing I made LOL.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/117672

Thanks, keep up the music.

JesterCo responds:

lol! i know it doesnt go well, certainly the end, its just i love making random stuff, and at that end was one of them, i still need experience tho with my music making, cuz im still pretty young and got a whole future head of me, so thanks!

[Busted]

Sweet.

It sounded pretty cool at first, but then it got really strange. Not my fav or yours, but it is OK, we make mistakes sometimes. I recommend using a good beat, and lessining the disortion.

LenardNotLenny responds:

Its not suposed to be good. It was sort of a test of what my busted microphone. No beat intended.

[Why the Night p8]

Your Welcome lol

For converting this for you.

Well, I realized I haven't even reviewed these LOL. Well then, I have got to say that your voice is fantastic man. You need to enter some singing competition. Maybe someday you will be able to enter American idle, but I can't even begin to judge that. Your next step is learning to play the songs and singing. =)

LenardNotLenny responds:

I'm never entering American Idol... Never. Pop crap sucks. Thanks a lot for reviewing though, and I actually figured out how to export em on my own. Through iTunes. Nice 10...

[Zelda Metalized]

SHIT!

The first metal song I have ever liked. FANTASTIC JOB!!!

Though, because it was not an original tune, I am giving you a 9, because once you learn to play it, it is very easy. Keep it up though! You could make some great stuff man.

Crankis responds:

Fair enough.

[[Bubbafett] Pokey Obsidian]

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I liked the soothness and chinese style you got here. Very nice instrumental. Where do you come up with your titles anyway? lol. Keep it up.

Bubbafett responds:

Thanks. I really enjoyed making this one.
As for the titles...

[the CONTRA]

Strange, but nice guitar.

It sounded pretty cool actually, I wasn't expecting it either. Nice job on this one! =)

BTW what program do you use?

Bubbafett responds:

Thanks again, and thanks for listening to reviewing some of my other songs. I had the most fun making this song. Stayed up till like 4:00 a.m. on the first day I was working on it. I remember it like it was yesterday haha. This song was inspired by the music in the Contra video game series (especially the PS2 ones). I use FL Studio 7.

[Clash on the Aurora]

Basic, yet complex.

When you made the beat do two fast beats at the end of the loop, it didn't sound that good. If you were to take thqt off, and stop adding so many things, then it would sound good. But I did not like the way you put everything together, except at 1:00 when the cool synth came on and a cooler beat started.

Bubbafett responds:

Couldn't help but laugh when I saw that you listened to this song. I liked adding a lot of things with this one, partly because I couldn't figure out what to transition it into. Man, this was back in May of last year. Thanks for reviewing n' stuff...