FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[just wanted]

Nice beat!

I see you have a real talent with beats. You should try Trance. The only thing I noticed is the lack of organization skills.

snayk responds:

Thanks.

I used to make more dance-oriented music, but I'm not really crazy about trance.

I wish you had elaborated on my 'lack of organization skills.' I don't just throw shit together when I'm making music; there's a reason and a logic behind everything.

[my plastic face]

LOL.

The beat was very nice and it would be 400% nicer if you used different instruments. Way to industrial!

snayk responds:

Well.

[Lost - Mjattie]

Nice piano song. very sad.

Dang, I was hoping the competition wasnt going to be so dang tough. Oh well, at least i have a chance. The combination of pianos and violins werent very original, but it did sound sad. Everything was great! BUT YOU NEED to make it more original!

mjattie responds:

well it is just a great combination... And the melody is origional so.... I just hope I win :P Well, who doesn't?

[SR - I Do Say Make Think]

Kind of weird if you ask me.

Not very sad either. Just a lot of buzz noises. I see where you were going.. but I think you need to resubmit if you want a chance to win.

SineRider responds:

Hm. I don't understand exactly what you mean, by buzzing? I thought it was a really nice pad.

Mind elaborating on what you think I should fix so I can upload a new version? You think it might sound better with wider instrument selection? Or maybe quieter? I don't know.

Thanks for the input.

[.:~| V3: Maeror MAC8 July |~:.]

Nice instruments.

Ok organization. I think it should of had better tune choice. Still, a decent song.

Draqo responds:

Thanks for the review. :D

[Kriz - The BBQ loop!]

Hey!

I was making BBQ while listening! ROFL! Gave my meat some extra spice.

Oh and sorry about the haters who are voting 0's on your songs. Loosseerrrsss.

Kr1z responds:

0's dont matter when u'v got BBQ !!!!!!!!

[Journey through Dreams]

Nice industrial music.

I liked the wahing sounds a lot. They went well with the background synth and beat plus bass. Then the synth got a little louder and more noticeable. Synths are hard to come by in industrialized music these days.My favorite part is 1:25. YOu should of included some big lead up right there. Like in 1:50.

Very nice song! Great job! The first industrial music I have liked.

Bob-Music responds:

Thanks, I've experimented with a few leads there but I can't find anything that fits just right.

[Burning Temptation]

Very nice piano sounds.

I loved all the filters you used man! Sounded incredible. I also heard some cheering in there lol. The beat went perfectly with everything and followed to a nice tune and synth organization. Great job!

Kr1z responds:

thanks dude :D

[!! Sky Dive !!]

Pretty cool.

A nice simple techno song. A good listen, but not a great listen just improve on your synth choices.

srzsmack responds:

Thanks for the review!!! yeah with two artists working on one song it seems we both use different synths. ill talk to bactaboy about that so we dont get this wierd change.