FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[My ears bleed]

Ok ok.

Your first submission... well here it goes. *ahem*

It was not really a song... but it was a kinky little ditty. I liked the sound of it, but it was a little annoying... I hope it goes through with you.

Keep this up.

IdentiC responds:

haha yeah i know what you mean.. the thing is, its really just random pressing chords to make a tune, cause tbh, i dont know how to play a synth >_<.. Thank you very much for the review!

[~Fall~ by Caleb]

Very nice.

All your songs sound very good. But, sadly, the music you make isn't as good as your singing. There is nothing wrong with this peice. ^___^, but in some of your others, the music is kind of repetitive and boring. It can still be soothing, but have complexity. This one has great instruments, great timing, and perfect harmony WITH good singing.

You and I should do a collab, it would be a hit!

Keep responding to all your reviews man, you will get noticed, trust me.

Cayler responds:

Responding just like this? lol Yeah, I'll keep responding. I really do enjoy reviews of my music and the chance to answer questions and talk about parts with the listeners. I'm always up for a collab, but sometimes I have less time for it then I need. But I always get it done in the end... I think. lol

[~Never The Same~ by Cayler]

Lyrics in every one.

All your songs contain lyrics, which is very rare. I can't sing worth a flip, but you sure can. Sure, at some points your voice may crack, but it sounds MUCH better than I would think it would sound. I didn't like some of the percussion you used in the song, but the singing was great.

Keep it up YYEEEEHAAA.

Cayler responds:

I really don't know why I even posted this one. I made it because I was playing around with some stuff on my pc and this is what came out. I have different version of this which is more official and doesn't have all the crazy percussion. The drums in the original are much more simple and there's also some electric guitar in it too. If you want to hear it, I have a music myspace page which is at myspace / kaybocorp

[FF6 - Decisive battle (Metal)]

My 666th Review....

SPAWN OF SATAN, RELEASED UPON THE DEAD. FOOLS WHO OPPOSE HIM.

O mighty Lord Satan,
God of this world,
God of my flesh,
God of my mind,
God of my innermost Will!

Every part of this world is within Your power.
You are within every part of this world.
Every part of me is within Your power.
You are within every part of me.

I am Yours, whether I serve You willingly or not,
for I am myself, whether I am true to myself or not.

Of my own free will, I now acknowledge Your power.
Of my own free will, I now present myself to You.

Before the almighty and ineffable God Satan/Lucifer and in the presence of all Demons of Hell, who are the True and the Original gods, I, (state your full name) renounce any and all past allegiances. I renounce the false Judeo/Christian god Jehova, I renounce his vile and worthless son Jesus Christ, I renounce his foul, odious, and rotten holy spirit.

I proclaim Satan Lucifer as my one and only God. I promise to recognize and honor him in all things, without reservation, desiring in return, his manifold assistance in the successful completion of my endeavors.

The Word of God declares that all the efforts, plans

and schemes of the enemy shall be brought to nothing.

Is it not written?

2 The kings of the earth set themselves,
And the rulers take counsel together,
Against the LORD and against His Anointed, saying,
3 "Let us break Their bonds in pieces
And cast away Their cords from us."
4 He who sits in the heavens shall laugh;
The LORD shall hold them in derision.
Psalms 2:2-4 (NKJV)

12 The wicked plots against the just,
And gnashes at him with his teeth.
13 The Lord laughs at him,
For He sees that his day is coming.
14 The wicked have drawn the sword
And have bent their bow,
To cast down the poor and needy,
To slay those who are of upright conduct.
15 Their sword shall enter their own heart,
And their bows shall be broken.
Psalms 37:12-15 (NKJV)

21 Have you not known?
Have you not heard?
Has it not been told you from the beginning?
Have you not understood from the foundations of the earth?
22 It is He [Jehovah] who sits above the circle of the earth,
And its inhabitants are like grasshoppers,
Who stretches out the heavens like a curtain,
And spreads them out like a tent to dwell in.
23 He brings the princes to nothing;
He makes the judges of the earth useless.
24 Scarcely shall they be planted,
Scarcely shall they be sown,
Scarcely shall their stock take root in the earth,
When He will also blow on them,
And they will wither,
And the whirlwind will take them away like stubble.
Isaiah 40:21-24 (NKJV)

25 But this is what the LORD says:
"Yes, captives will be taken from warriors,
and plunder retrieved from the fierce;
I will contend with those who contend with you,
and your children I will save.
26 I will make your oppressors eat their own flesh;
they will be drunk on their own blood, as with wine.
Then all mankind will know
that I, the LORD, am your Savior,
your Redeemer, the Mighty One of Jacob."
Isaiah 49:25-26 (NIV)

1 "The Spirit of the Lord GOD is upon Me,
Because the LORD has anointed Me
To preach good tidings to the poor;
He has sent Me to heal the brokenhearted,
To proclaim liberty to the captives,
And the opening of the prison to those who are bound;
2 To proclaim the acceptable year of the LORD,
And the day of vengeance of our God;
To comfort all who mourn,
3 To console those who mourn in Zion,
To give them beauty for ashes,
The oil of joy for mourning,
The garment of praise for the spirit of heaviness;
That they may be called trees of righteousness,
The plantin
g of the LORD, that He may be glorified."
Isaiah 61:1-3 (NKJV)

I say this as the number 666... this song was PERFECT for the number 666. Keep on making music.

XxCowMeatxX responds:

thanks for the positive reveiw bro! but i am not a worshiper of satan. i apretiate the thought though :p. stay brutal bro!

[|-| Feeld]

Pretty cool.

It ws a nice tune. I enjoyed the combination of guitars and synths. Kep it up.

Hadriani responds:

I will deffo keep it up ;-)

Thanks for the review!
Cheers

[|-| Come To Me]

Really nice pad in the background.

But it was a little bit to bittish sounding after 20 seconds... You should of had a more soothing sounding pad than that. Other wise, good job.

Hadriani responds:

bittish?
I think I know what you mean, but I still like it this way. Smooth but still daring

Tnx for the review!
Hadriani

[-=] SummerDream [=-]

Very cool.

I loved the synths you used in sync with the main bass line man! It was a very good song. It wasn't repetitive at asll, except for you looping some things, but that doesn't count. I liked the pad you used there at 50 seconds, and kept it going through the next beat.

Keep it up! AND I LOVE SUMMER :P

Arthur187 responds:

thank you :) i used some functions on fruity loops i never used before (i guess i still have to learn a lot) and as you see i got some nice effects

[Metal Gear Solid 2: IntroR3MiX]

LOL!!!@!

oK.. i WOULD REVIEW A LOT OF YOUR SONGS MAN, BUT ALL OF THEM ARE SO EASY TO REMIX! aND THEY AREN'T REMIXED THAT WELL EITHER. Oh sorry, caps lock was on. Well, I can't tell if these were even remixed, so I am not goign to revciew any more sorry... :P

BowserThedestructive responds:

its ok I said REMix Because I DONT KNoW what the ORIGNAL sounds like at ALL.
But yes Most of My songs i just Recreate I dont ACTUALLY Remix thats why most i Dont say I REMIXED it :I plus cartoon781 wanted it and he likes the mix i did..Recreation.:P

[Vikings Song]

OH NOES.

You started using Garageband when you made this song, I could tell. I liked thye way you used all the loops. I LOVED the way you used the alien sounds in each speaker. Right, then left, the right again. It was very cool, even for a first song.

Keep it u!

Xth responds:

Yes that was the 1st and last time i used appleloops. Ok i still use some of the drums. It's me on the guitars (rhythm+lead) though! And the HAH! Thanks man!

[Not Another Rock Song!]

Dear mercuful lord... NOT ANOTHER ROCK SONG!

Lol, I liked the smoothness in this song. You need some sort of kick in there though, because it became repetitive.

ANd now I know you use Garageband... Very nice. I couldn't figure out if you made it in there or not!!! That is hard to do!

Great job, keep it up. :P

Xth responds:

Oh my GODt! NOT ANOTHER ROCK SONG REVIEW!

I don't know why people hate gb. It's really simple if you have to record an actual guitar and it has some decent effects. I'm not using any of the built in samples. Only some drums (i'm a guitarist!) and in another submission (viking song) two of its loops. Thanks once more!