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Ok, heres a few tip.

One, turn down the very begginning drum down just a tad bit. It was a very original track, and you choose the perfect title for this song. But, the main thing you need to do is add different types of synths and not just that one. You also did a good job in looping the track I noticed. Good job al in all.

Phiya responds:

thanx for the tips

FRAKING AWESOME.

That was fantastic, the piano combined with the synth and heavy industrial sounds. Very good.

DomesticTerrorist responds:

I appreciate it man, glad it turned out alright :D

That WAS weird.

I loved the slow... steady intro you used. And I liked it how you kept on adding beats and things. It needed some more synth to it you know? It got a little annoying. But it was pretty cool.

liasmen responds:

Thanks for the review. Bear in mind that this is one of the first songs I ever made and that I have submitted different versions.

Good!

It was perfect for a loop. I might use it!

liasmen responds:

Thank you so much for all of your reviews!

Better than me lol.

i only saw a few minor errors in the picth of your voice, everything else was GREAT! Well... I make music, but I don't sing. Check out some of my songs if you want lol.

grandman1023 responds:

thanx alot and yeah i just put out the whole song out so give that a listen

Fantastic.

I always enjoy hearing such a classical and beautiful song such as this one. You mixed the piano and violins together in perfect harmony with a nice, soothing detailed synth playing in the background. The echo you used bounced off the sound following it causing no white noise what so ever. You even failed to repeat yourself which is very hard to do when creating a piece such as this. Very well done. Bravo.

CrimzonWolf777 responds:

Yeah it is EXTREMELY hard not to repeat myself making melodies like this on any song I make. But yeah, this song was dedicated to one of my favorite composers that died and I put my heart into making this piece. Glad you enjoyed it! ^_^v

Interesting...

Sounded sort of Chinese if you feel my drift. Well, good choords here as well. I liked it!

8/10 because it was only a beat.

ShaggyWang responds:

Chinese!? well, that wasn't intended lol

The sunglasses Couldn't Protect me...

That song was great! very good job. You went with the choords perfectly in fitting the beat and synth. And making it echoey was even better. You should make it longer, however, and add some more things to it. But great job! Try listening to my songs and reviewing... if you want to. if you want ideas. Oh, I also liked the way you looped the song.

ShaggyWang responds:

It took me forever to find that "right sound" for that bass echo. I'm planning to update it, you know, to add more"Stuff" to it. However, finals (aka test) are approaching =( .

Also on a side note, I will make sure to take a look at your work but, be aware, votes will come sooner than reviews lol.........God dam test X.x

Very VERY cool.

This is a GREAT song and you should go to the political forums to talk about this. It fit the attack very well, besides there not being any different instruments. The only thing you need to do is NOT TO BE SO REPETITIVE! Well, try listening to some of my songs and review if you want.. that is, if you want ideas. Try some more man.

ExeL18 responds:

thanks bro, i just started with the whole producin thing. so im just doin loops right now to get used to it. but thanks for the review.

ExeL*

Hmm... interesting!

I loved your slow... nice.... beat and synths. You deserve much gratitude for this one! Keep it UP!!!! and try visiting the Audio Forums.

DomesticTerrorist responds:

Thanks I appreciate it! I probably should be on the forums more often as well.

Cheers!

Oh, hello there. I guess you want to know who I am. I mainly create ambient music and voice act here on NG. Occasionally youll see me produce some silly animation or game. If you want to chat or something, send me a spanky danky PM. *Sig by Magical-Zorse*

Age 33, Male

Apple & Entrepreneur

Whats a... school?

Little Rock, AR

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