FatKidWitAJetPak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[All Work 2008 & Before.]

THIS IS UNDERRATED

First of all, I would like to say that this ROCKS. all of the animation was truly superb and looked proffesional. I loved every little bit of it. *Especially the end lawl*

@@@@@@@@GREAT JOB@@@@@@@@@@

10/10

Jae responds:

MAN thanks! Im glad you liked it!

[Sketched - Therapy]

YER GAY

I love the way each of the voices have an actual CONVERSATION with eachother. It is hard to do that with multiple voices hah. I thought you should have made the ending a bit more.. oh I dont know... explosive. As in have the guy get so angry he just goes insane and jumps out of the window while clinging the doctor with him. The ending you choose was funny as well though. ;) Great graphics! Sometimes the hands looked kind of strange, but I cant draw hands either. xD

I cant wait till the next episode! *P.S. do you need me to voice act? probably not since you will probably have more than 3 people since you are letting the winner of the VA competition voice act for this thing.*

sirjeffofshort responds:

Thanks man. We actually did have a few other alternate endings, including one where he hunted down the therapist and beat the hell out of him while he was eating lunch but it dragged on too long... plus I am lazy. Haha.

I think my problem with hands comes from the fact that I spent a long time studying the artwork of spanish influenced comic artists such as Humberto Ramos, and they have always drawn huge hands and feet, then when I try to translate that to the traditional "3 finger" cartoon hands they just look pudgy and awkward... That's probably way too in depth an excuse but oh well.

The next one should be out the first week of next month, and then the month after that will be our first annual guest spot cartoon (I'll PM you with the details later.)

Thanks for the review.

[.flaswf]

HAHAH

I liked the ending... but I didnt understand it lol. It was just the random explosion that got me. xD

[TOFA Collection]

LOL THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!!

AHAHAH!!! I loved the voice acting for the nurse. When she screamed I almost fell out of my chair laughing. All of the ideas were great and the way you animated them all way superb and original.

YES.

[Why So Delicious?]

HEYYLOO

Haha hey its the guy you hate! ISNT THAT JUST GREAT!? Well anyway, this was some really nice voice acting. The only thing I saw was that it was bad quality. O_o But that is the mics problem. Funny stuff here man, great job. :D

P.S. if you ever need VOICE ACTING, THEN you can ask me! Cause I voice act now and people seem to like it. :3

[Super Mario Brothers ep 2]

W O W

This is the coolest mario flash I have ever seen... and I have seen them all man. The reason is because it shows the charecters actually DIENG instead of just falling over in anxiety or something... *Like in the game* SO when you bring the fan fantasy of blood and action into mario, you come out with a dream like flash that really shows the emphasis of mario fans dreams. I had a dream once everyone hated mario and ditched him so he walked forever in a black hall. Yah I know im a creep. T_T

So anyway, GREAT fan fiction and I hope you make mroe because I would PAY to buy these things in stores. You should turn the entire paper mario saga into a violent fan fiction of epic porportions lol. *MY favorite part was when the girl koopa is like OH HELLO and then a bomb comes out of nowhere and kills her. Because no one actually dies in the game, this makes your flash really attractive.

Your probably not going to read this review, but if you do PLEASE reply if you have the faintest idea of what im talking about so I know Im no some crazy kid who wants to see tragety in mario. Like Peach dieng or Bowser tearing someone in half.

[The Final Act]

0_0

now THIS is true animation! If this doesnt win an award ill cry!

[Sonic Shorts: Volume 5]

YESSSSSS

I LOVE THIS SERIES.

Great job on all the voice acting by the way!

[Realistic Gears of war]

:|.

I didnt get it really... you need to make the voice way better and clean up the animation by a lot.

Jereminion responds:

what dont you fucking understand?

[Tha Valentine Choc]

LAWL

I thought it was very nice! I thought you should have included him panting and huffing while running though. You should have also improved on the organization a little bit.. HOWEVER, the animation was just plain AWESOME.

I HATE YOU. Lol. :3

Calicard responds:

Yeah...

Thanks. I did do this in a short time span.

I love you too.

ACTUALLY! CONGRATULATIONS! YOU ARE THE FIRST TO SAY YOU HATE ME IN ANY REVIEW ON THIS FLASH! YOU WIN THE PRIZE!

It's in the dinosaur.