FatKidWitAJetPak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Luigi's Confession]

FRONT PAGE THIS

Great ideas and great concept. Over 9000 lol... everyone seems to use that thing. UGH. I bet lots of Luigi fans are gonna come kicking down you door though.

hrechkaness responds:

lol i sure hope they don't come kicking down my door :O im a true luigi fan as well im on their side >:( lol. thx for the review!

[4 Swords Misadventures 6]

That was bad...

:::The Good:::

Ok so I can see you spent a lot of time on this animation and made it pretty well without any errors.

Nice Cut-scene of transforming to Shiek. NICE JOB OSUKA.

Ok voice for the king

Drunk Link. Hilarity ensues.

:::THE BAD:::

Most of the voice acting was not all that great. It sounded to dull and fake. Not much emphasis was put on it at all. They sounded like they were just reading a script without putting any emotion into it. Try acting like your actually there instead of just reading some words on a computer screen.

BORING PLOT!!! Jesus it dragged on for WAY too long. I was thinking of turning it off many times. It needs more action and drama rather than just boring talking about stuff that no one cares about.

Err... Sparta, Over 9000, AND other terrible overly done refrences? The only one I liked was the over 9000 one.. then it just got rodoculous.

YOU DONT HAVE TO SAY THINGS LIKE: "That was too predictable" That doesn't do ANYTHING for the movie except make it worse! Its way too corny and is already thought by the viewer anyway.

THAT WAS TOO LONG. Narrow each episode into mini episodes with better plot and stoeyline. Your movie doesnt have to be like 8 minutes long.

Personally I think this is way over rated... The only reason it was front paged was because it was long and seemed like you guys worked hard on it.

Good luck for your future projects and dont let my criticism get you down.

[I Found A Dollar!]

YES

Finally a 14 year old kid gest front paged!!! WOOOOOHOOOO!!! Keep up your ideas!

[tWHYlight]

nice Voice Acting!!!

The voice acting was very well done! I hope to keep doing that and one day work for a group like you. ;)

[It's Cold Inside]

WOOT

That was pretty cool! Everything was hand drawn and it all went very smoothly together. One thing though: You shouldnt of stated clearly that she was raped, it was already assumed.

[There She Is!! final step]

RESPOND PLEASE IF YOU READ THIS

Hello, I am a fan whom you have never heard of and will most likely never will. I would like to say that your animations are truly amazing. It took you a very long time and you probably put in a WHOLE LOt OF EFFORT. The graphics were very well done thanks to your wonderful choice of color scheme, and the charecters each had their own symbolic meaning and, in a lesser sence, a different attitude towards what was going on throughout the movie.

What I mean is that the way you developed each character was perfect. I knew you would have the dark characters such as the fuzzy rabbits come in to save the day near the end, simply because they symbolized realization. *They realized what the right thing to do was and helped the cat catch up to his love life.* They also realize that people should just get along and help each-other solve problems. Correct me if I am wrong on any of this please!

So the next thing I would like to mention is the wonderful 3D animation you made. In the past, I have played many Room Escape Games made in Japan with this awesome type of animation using whites, blacks, and grays. This really brought the whole movie to life and gave it a different style than any other movie out there. It made it look... well.. real! *Of course there arent bunnies and cats making out and buying fish and carrots for each-other... but the buildings and objects looked very real.

Finally, I would like to thank you on putting forth the effort to create such a nice short film with many archetypal situations. *Symbolic stuff* It was really well done and people who dont like this dont understand it and/or dont realize how hard it is to make something like this with a storyline that warms peoples hearts.

Great job. this will be used as an example in many other schools to teach people the right way to make a movie.

YOU NEED TO ENTER THIS IN EVERY COMPETITION YOU COME ACROSS SO YOU CAN GET THE MONEY YOU DESERVE!

I need to learn japanese and move to japan so I can meet you. *you do live in Japan right? Lol*

Thank you so much for reading this and respond if you get the chance to!!!

[BiteyCastle Christmas]

It wasnt all that great...

Good animation... but the plot sucked. You needed to make it longer. A good short if nothing else. I like your other animations better. ;)

Good luck.

[scr00g mcduc]

ROFL

You are God. Whats more to say? Congratulations on Front page.

[The Piper's Waltz]

Too short.

The flash had a nice concept with fantastic animation.. but jesus it was only 30 seconds long!

[Love Song]

WOW!

The drawing was very nice! I never knew santa could sing like that either! A great addition to the Christmas collection on my opinion.

P.S. try adding some reindeer next time. ;)