FatKidWitAJetPak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fruit N' Veg Attack 2]

I AM THE TOMATO SUN

Nice transition effects. I loved the killer voices, blood tomato sun rofl. It seemed really demonic, you should make a full length cartoon where these bananas go out and rape, pillage, murder gruesomely, and beaten. Then have the tomato sun rise other fruits such as green acid pears. It would be a real quirky movie.

Nice job, keep it up.

Lord-Desolator responds:

Cheers, I would like to do a full length someday. Though maybe not quite 30 minutes otherwise it would suffer from repetition. I might do an extended version, though I need to come up with more material. You might see another scene about murderous bananas with a sex drive turned up to 11 but I'm not sure when. I appreciate the suggestions and will keep them in mind, so thanks. Like I said to another guy, I'll probably continue to deliver the goods in small pieces, one at a time. :)

[My Newgrounds Sketchbook]

THAT WAS EPIC

This is one of the most brilliant flashes I have ever seen. You sir made my day. BEST TROLL EVER.

EKublai responds:

Cool! Watch out for my entry to the voice-acting contest i'm cooking up something good.

[Avatar - Hot Na'vi Sex]

LOL

I was thinking the exact same thing while watching that movie. I was like HEY WAIT A MINUTE, THATS NOT THE WAY IT WORKS FFF. I figured they would do something with their hair I dunno. Lol, soup drinker.

[School 13 - TongueTied]

It was alright.

It didnt really fill me with the emotions intended. It was a silly story and it has been done many times in the past. It was kind of weird anyway since they were two complete strangers.. Also, it was far too short and not very enjoyable.

I always love your work, but this time... not so much. This could have been an excellent animation if you were to only make it longer and more detailed in plot. I think it is extremely overrated and only deserving of a 4.10 personally, but then again not everyone thinks like me.

It did have great graphics as usual.

[Lemonade]

This..

Is the greatest animation ive seen in a while. Thank you.

[Snowmen]

Another great submission from young artists!

As usual, I love your styles. The long arms, the facial expressions, the hilarious gimmicks, much like that of SimonG. The plus side on this was that it had not only great art but great plot! The ending was so cute haha. The snowmen idea was pretty hilarious, snowmen robbers lol. Thanks for making a christmas submission, it was really fun to watch.

MarcyVF responds:

thanks. yeah, we spend a lot of time with simon so I guess we influence each other.

you're young too.

[Harry The Harlequin Baby]

Ohohohoh orgasmic!

This art style is absolute EYE CANDY. You somehow managed to make this have a plot, even though it was one huge acid trip. How in the world... you guys are amazing. This isnt the dark side this is pure artistic talent in one huge festival of color and activity. I loved the 1dt person perspective you gave the baby when he crawled out of the womb. I loved the sounds that gave everything such a creepy atmosphere. I loved the facial expressions of each chracter and the gruesome saw blade cutting through the guys head.

God, how do you come up with this? Really cool man.

Catoblefaux responds:

TWILIGHT GRANNY WANTS EDWARD

[floo]

How the...

Movies like this really bewilder me. How did you include those live action effect, real candle light, strange glowing aura, e.t.c., inside this flash movie? Did you use Aftereffects? I really should learn some more of those programs but I hate the fact that they take up a crapload of memory inside your harddrive.

This movie was wonderful, the animation was superb, and the ending was like WOH. I loved the explosion that really sent a chill down my spine. The ending was too adrupt, however, I think you should have continued it for about 15 more seconds or so, showing the caption "And thus, Christmas was born" or something. It would really give the film a poetic feel.

Everything besides the plot was fantastic. You cant really have plot inside an experimental film though, can you? Thats a mistake many experimental films make, they lack plot. This is really nice and i hope to see more from you!

jagondudo responds:

thanks man yea i used aftereffects to blend a lot of the effects. i drew and animated all the parts i could in flash and for the heavier effects i superimposed them on each other in aftereffects. the program can handle more of that than flash can without lag. bringing it back into flash was the killer tho as you can see with how it was compressed :(

thanks tho!

[Late Christmas Secret]

Man your a great artist

I have always enjoyed your style, from the long arms, to the hilarious facial expressions and attention to lines and colors. I loovvee the colorful atmosphere you give everything. This flash made me all warm and fuzzy inside and gave me the feeling of Christmas hehe. There are a few things you can work on, however, and it would really improve your fan box and scoring if you go about it correctly.

PLOT. That's right, plot. One of the simplest, yet one of the most effective aspects of a flash cartoon. This cartoon had some plot, but jumped around randomly and made me a little bit confused. For example, what was that thing doing in his garage? Why did he randomly put on a santa hat? E.t.c. To make it better, try and implement an effective intro, body, and conclusion. Give the characte a motive or something. Perhaps he could have hated christmas because he waited for santa to come down the chimney as a kid, but santa never came. So now he sits as an adult working at his boring job. Then have him wake up kind of depressed and go to the garage to look at a small sled and a christmas hat. And he can just go around giving kids presents and return home happy again, enjoying the spirit of giving. There are a lot of things you could do to make the plot better.

Plot 6/10
Art 10/10
Sound 10/10

TOTAL 9/10

Great job Sam, I hope to see more from you. And hey lol you used some of the same songs from Charlie and Santas Secret! :D

SimonG responds:

:D Thanks dude!
I'm aware of that plots, and making a well set up movie really isn't my thing. But I will try as hard as I can to improve!