FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Feeling Trance!]

It had the beginning....

That many trance songs have as well. Which ones? Well, some by Kr1z to be exact. However, you added much to it. The bass was good and went well with the synth... but it wasnt very uplifting. It was more of a smooth dance trance song than anything else. Good for a nice listen. ; )

Dj-Rippa responds:

Thank you :) :)
Glad to hear you enjoyed it!
every time I see your name I picture a fat kid with a jet pack:P
guess it makes sense :P

[Alive`]

Woh.

It starts out so generic.. and then leads into the awesome synths and beats that people look for in trance songs. It was freaking sweet dude. The original synth made me want to get up and dance. The filters you used added a nice touch to the song as well. Good job for not being repetitive in this, cause I hate it when people use the same loop over and over and over... Well, great job!

[Fatality Shuttle-Air]

:D :D :D :D

PARTY WITH PANCAKES MAN! This song had a REAL nice beat to it! It was pure techno if you ask me. The filters were used real nicely as well. You still seem to have a habit of cutting off sounds though. You can't do that! You need to have the sounds faded off or replaced so they cut off unnoticeably. However, I think this is your best song yet! Nice oringal beat, with some great sounding synth tune.

st91 responds:

w00t lol i thought you only listened to one of my songs. but you commented on this!? i hardly remember making this! ttttttyyyyyyy

[When should we die?]

ACK PIANO.

The piano sounded off tune. The beginning pad sounded nice, but the piano completley ruined the feeling. Replace the piano with some sort of nice sounding synth pad. And continue the pad from the beginning.

st91 responds:

piano=purposly off tune. but i shall try something different next time.

[Pre-funk]

Kind of annoying

You probably dont want me to review this song, because it sounded ike it was more of an experiment than anything else. The vocals were hilarious lol. :S

8 for creativity. ^_^ WHERES MY FREAKING CAR?!

st91 responds:

yeeaaahhh i kind of guessed people think this is annoying but at least you liked the vocals. i got them from "dude wheres my car" if you havnt seen that...(i actually havnt seen it myself i just find these things everywhere lol.)

[Playing with Fire {revised}]

Distortion with taste.

YOu made the disortion sound very well with the beats you added. The title went very well with the song. It had an edgy feeling to it... LIKE FIRE OLOLOL.

Keep it up! Your songs are getting good! ; )

Try adding some pads in there for epicness.

st91 responds:

this was actually derived from my original "playing with fire" but i fixed it a little bit for the well deserving newgrounds users *wink wink* and i dont mean to burst your bubble or anything but there actually isnt any distortion.

[1029384756]

Its alright.

This had a nice and smooth beat to it, but it was REAL random. You just seemed to cut off the first beat entirely and start out with another one. EVen that one got cut off. There was to much silence in there as well. Just put the beats together more smoothly and you got yourself a nice song. ; )

st91 responds:

well you'd be surprised by how little an amount of time i have on my hands...if i could fix all my songs and stop them from sounding retarded then i would, but i cant. why? because i practically had zero time to make this in the first place.

[@ndrea - Candy Dance]

ITS A TRIBUT DUMBASSES.

Lol sorry about that X D Most of these reviewers dont realize that you were doing a tribute with mixed synths made by all these pro artists. They were not your synths DUH, but that is why it is a tribute. A very nice tribute indeed!!! Great job, and try mixing some awesome trance songs with your own original beats and synths in your next song. I would enjoy listening to what you can do if you can actually clone theses pros.

I noticed you put some Kr1z in there BTW. He is my favorite artist... and I uhh... ANNOY HIM A BIT. Well great job again, this song is pretty cool.

AndreaDigita responds:

Yes! The all famous Kr1z pads are great ^^

Thanks for defending me, those guys are being really nasty to me :(

They simply dont get the point of the song : \

['Rain' (Rmx) Trd Vs MikeBlade<]

8 Bit sounds?

Werre those 8 bit sounds used in the begiining? Nah.. nevermind. It was a col song at first, but all the dissorented sounds after that really messed up the feel to it. I see you were trying to create a dissorented sound and fell, so that you could bring in a really cool build up and finish with that large beat sound, but it just didnt fit in like you were trying to make it. You also brought in many random sounds, like out of nowhere, that didnt fit in with the song at all. If you combined all these noises together in better harmony, you could make one sweet awesome hip-hop song.

Good luck!

Treadz responds:

hey cheers man.

i've got alot better at mastering since i made this so theres a redo coming soon :P

thanks for yr feedback on my other song.