It was alright.
Kind of repetitive if you know what I mean. I liked the main beat and all, but it just wasnt something that I could dance to. good for a nice, smooth listen... but not good to dance to or listen to again. My favorite part was at 1:49.
The good thing is...
The lryics. Actually, I kind of liked the lryics in this one the best. It had an opinion in it. However, you cursed WAY to much. The cursing made it sound terrible. You can still curse, but dont over do it! Nice one though! I could groove to this. LOL.. the laughing part was pretty funny. Were you trying to say how messed up the minds of the street is?.. while you were also saying the goverment was messed up... Hmm.. interesting. AND YES GEORGE BUSH IS A TERRIBLE PERSON. :S
thanks for the one good review ass
The best you have so far.
It had a nice follow up and then lead into a great solo. However, you still need to make more drums and put them in there. Violins and synths would work nice as well. The singing at 1:11 was awful by the way. You need to cut that out.
yah whut are u like an eminem lover or sumptin cus its all clown love where im from
You sure like rap.
You need to cut out a lot of the cursing and add soem better beats in these songs man.
It's joking around fool We were fuckin with the sounds.
Did you make this?
Because it sounds like you didnt make this in your authors comments lol. Well, it was a nice rap song. The cursing was a bit much, and the beat was kind of annoying... BUT THAT IS THE DEFINITION OF A NICE RAP SONG ANYWAY LOL... Sorry it wasnt that good. You need to add more than one regular constant beat. The lryics were creative though so I give you points for that.
Well I like the beat BITCH! Especially the snare! Yes we made it but it's olllld!
Perfect start out.
I loved the way you started out the song. It even lead into a nice Pad and beat with even a synth. The wavy sounding pad was a nice touch.
PROFESSIONAL.
Truly professional. Everything was filtered out PERFECTLY. No criticism here. KEEP THIS RAVE STUFF UP!!!!
Wow... thanks!
Great piano recording.
Is it just me.. or did you record some soothing pads in the background? Yep. YOU DID. Nice. Pads always go great with piano recordings. It had some fuzzyness in there, but everything else sounded great! Keep it up. The beat was too loud as well, turn it down just a bit.
thank you. im going to remix maybe later
TECHNO
Not that many people like techno anymore. I would stay with your swesome dance tracks. ; )
Oh, hello there. I guess you want to know who I am. I mainly create ambient music and voice act here on NG. Occasionally youll see me produce some silly animation or game. If you want to chat or something, send me a spanky danky PM. *Sig by Magical-Zorse*
Age 32, Male
Apple & Entrepreneur
Whats a... school?
Little Rock, AR
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