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Nice echo filters.

I loved the way you dragged on the BEEP BEEP part into the song. it brought in a completley different beat than in the beginning of the song. I give you props for that. ; )

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I listened to this with my friends. We all agree that it is a perfect song with no real changes needed. Because you are such a proffesional artist, i can not really give anty good advice. So take this nice juicy ten from me and let get on with our lives. :)

Wow.

Man the begginning was WAY original than I was expecting... in fact the entire song was way more original that I expected. everything was real crazy.. yet it flew together nicely. Proof that therwe is such thing as organized chaos.

Oh yeah uhuh.

An automatic 10 for the awesome singing. it takes effort and talent to sing like that. Who is singing? You? Your girlfriend? Lol, well nice whoever did it. A 9 for the music because it was just to short.. but it did go very well with the singing. keep it up!

It was alright.

Kind of repetitive if you know what I mean. I liked the main beat and all, but it just wasnt something that I could dance to. good for a nice, smooth listen... but not good to dance to or listen to again. My favorite part was at 1:49.

The good thing is...

The lryics. Actually, I kind of liked the lryics in this one the best. It had an opinion in it. However, you cursed WAY to much. The cursing made it sound terrible. You can still curse, but dont over do it! Nice one though! I could groove to this. LOL.. the laughing part was pretty funny. Were you trying to say how messed up the minds of the street is?.. while you were also saying the goverment was messed up... Hmm.. interesting. AND YES GEORGE BUSH IS A TERRIBLE PERSON. :S

Nammie responds:

thanks for the one good review ass

The best you have so far.

It had a nice follow up and then lead into a great solo. However, you still need to make more drums and put them in there. Violins and synths would work nice as well. The singing at 1:11 was awful by the way. You need to cut that out.

Nammie responds:

yah whut are u like an eminem lover or sumptin cus its all clown love where im from

You sure like rap.

You need to cut out a lot of the cursing and add soem better beats in these songs man.

Nammie responds:

It's joking around fool We were fuckin with the sounds.

Did you make this?

Because it sounds like you didnt make this in your authors comments lol. Well, it was a nice rap song. The cursing was a bit much, and the beat was kind of annoying... BUT THAT IS THE DEFINITION OF A NICE RAP SONG ANYWAY LOL... Sorry it wasnt that good. You need to add more than one regular constant beat. The lryics were creative though so I give you points for that.

Nammie responds:

Well I like the beat BITCH! Especially the snare! Yes we made it but it's olllld!

Oh, hello there. I guess you want to know who I am. I mainly create ambient music and voice act here on NG. Occasionally youll see me produce some silly animation or game. If you want to chat or something, send me a spanky danky PM. *Sig by Magical-Zorse*

Age 33, Male

Apple & Entrepreneur

Whats a... school?

Little Rock, AR

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