FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Acid Paradox - Discipline]

Woh

Saw your reply in the emo thread, went to your userpage just because. I saw you made music, I clicked this song. Pretty cool song man. Gets your spirits up. However, I hate that generic filter for the voice. It would be so much better with just the original recording with maybe a bit of reverb and echo.

Also, try putting in more layers of instruments. Put in pads, bass, and different synths. This song seems far to plain with just these few layers. Keep it up though, you seem to be really good at this.

Acid-Paradox responds:

yeah a lot of people had told me that they don't like that voice filter, but for some reason i love it, maybe on my next songs i will not use that filter , so i will tell you when it's ready.

Awesome

[_/Electronica\_]

Original!

It is very rare to find an original song now a days in the electronica genre on newgrounds. This was very nice. You put in some 8 bit I noticed along with a nice piano, fantastic bass, awesome synths, and a gtreat original tune that made this song spectacular. Thanks! Downloading now.

Make more original stuff like this, your really good at it.

ShootingStar responds:

Wow :) Dude thanks for the very kind words :D
This is why I make music, for those people who just love it like you :D
And leave amazing reviews :P
Thanks for the awesome review!!!

ShootingStar

[HW - Symmetry and Beyond]

Oh my god

Ok wow. That incredible beat coming in at 1:00 sounds just well... incredible. It flows so sooo smoothly with this song i nearly cried ahah wow. The bass is awesome as well, i can distinctly hear it along with that background pad that truly makes this an ambience. If I just close my eyes I can see a huge story going along with this. Something having to do with a man walking through the forest ever so slowly until he reaches the edge of a cliff. It spirals downwards as vines and trees go with it. He looks up into the sky, shielding his eyes from the suns rays. He takes a step back and lets the wind ewmbrace his body.

Falling faster and faster he come to the bottom of the cliff and falls into a seemingly endless hole. Eyes glow in the darkness and watch his body float downwards. He seems not to be falling anymore, it is all black yet he can still be seen and caverns glow all around him. Blue mushrooms, glowing blue lights float all around him. His body just grazes the ground beneath him, but it is not the bottom. He is on a large flat rock. Little creatures that resemble centipedes and small bunnies crawl around and sniff his body.

He scratches his head and starts walking down the small slope of the rock. The creatures follow him curiously, sniffing at his feet and giving blank cute stares to the world around him. He walks and walks until he approaches a door. As he walks through he awakes from his deep sleep, inside his bed at his house. This, is because the song ends.

Thats a huge ass paragraph. i feel to chillaxed to bother spacing it.. ah hell sure I will just for you though. You bastard. ;)

[HW-PJ- Bright and Early]

Would make a great flash.

I could see this turn into one of those awesome professional flashes where it shows a guy waking up living in his crappy apartment and getting ready for his crappy job. He sees some kids playing out the window in an old chipped basketball court. He descends his concrete stairs to his old run down car and drives a few blocks to the laundry mat where his main job is. People walk in and out all day, poor, beat up, depressed, and dirty. The day is over and the guy returns home and lights his cigarette while leaning on the brick wall of an alley way. He looks up to the sky and imagins what it would be like to get out of here.

Chillaxing as always. Some of these earlier songs of yours are better than your current ones! :o

[HW - Lonely Nights (Vocals)]

Underrated much?

Need a blunt need to confront. Timothy needs to stick as your vocal guy, he is really nice at it. There are a few errors in his voice, but this song was made like 2 years ago. Ironically, this is one hell of a song! One of your best! :)

I love the receptiveness of it all, it goes along very well with the kickin lyrics. Extremley creative and oldskool. Nice job. Loving it!!!

[HW - Logic]

Too organic.

The drums really sound to organic and distract me from the overall chill of the song. I would recommend making them less organic and more pleasant to the ears. Try choosing different drums and different electronic styles by messing around with reverb and echo settings. That should help decrease the unpleasant organicness of your future dnb songs. :)

[{Dj-L} Essence of Creativity]

Nice job,

11 months of practacing got you this, thats nice work. It had a nice vary of sounds and synths with some cool background pads and beats. I loved how you mastered the sounds of the background noises to be slightly heard underneath all of the commotion with the main synths and beats. I also loved how you slowly turned them up to where you could hear everything perfectley and then went into a less complex combination of sounds so that it wouldnt be to loud anbd chaotic.

Nice job messing around with effects and plugins by the way. 2:50 ftw.

Meonly70 responds:

Hey man, it took a lot of work to do all that, especially since I didn't really have the knowledge now. I got tips and help from a lot of other awesome artists :)

I'm glad you liked it all. Thanks for the comment too :)

[{dj-N} Multi-Mel]

Awwww my god.

That background synth that you cna JUST slightly hear makes this one of the coolest ng songs in exsistance. I love the variety in it! I dont know what to expect next, and everything that comes up sounds incredible. This is just fantastic man. WHY ARENT U GETTING PAID FOR THIS?!

Damn ill just send u cash ahahaha, as long as you keep making more of these!!! D:

[{dj-N} The End of Time]

Shit!

I listen to a lot of trance, and yours is by far in the top. That pausing in between each beat is kick ass. It isnt to hardcore at first, even though there are so many things going on. then it builds up to sound preety cool!

This was a very nice mix. You are really great at this you know that?

[DJ Babokon - Double Helix]

Master much?

This is a good tune, but all of the sounds are piled together in a crappy chaotic hole. You need to tone it down on most of the heavy synths and make sure there is no white noise in the background. The edgyness of everything is not very enjoyable to listen to. If I were you I would simply go into the song and edit each synth manually until it sounds jusssttt right.

DJ-Babokon responds:

The problem is you can't easily edit instruments in z3ta+