X Reverb and Echo
I think the echo and reverb should actually be cut off in this. It ruins the mood for me. I think my main problem with this track is that it sounds to *fake* for me. I know that sounds like a harsh word, but it's something that is easily fixable. I feel that the tune is beautiful in composition, but you ruined it with fake sounding midi effects.
If I was sitting next to you and I heard this being played on a piano, it would possibly be tear jerking. It is very dark and dramatic, elaborating your feelings through vibrations and deep spine tingling chords. I feel this tells the story of love and loss. It makes me think im wondering aimlessly through time, trying to find a certain something that will finally cause me to realize what the answer is for everything. In the end, however, the story doesn't stop where the song does. It continues going on, and I listen to my mind for more.