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Organized Chaos

Personally, Im all about the buildup. In this song you should have started out with that piano and lead up to the heavy mix. When it just starts out like that the song seems a bit cluttered and I dont know whats going on. Buildup has a great effect on the user and keeps them interested.

This seems to be a large experiment seeing how many sounds you can create in Reason, combining them together into a hot bowl of music. It would be great but a puzzle like game with many objects. I like how you slow it down at points and bring in some great bass. There were like 60 instruments in here. Dang you sure know how to work magic with synths. At 3:29 it got into a really crazy beat.

Your music is wayyy more complicated than mine haha. My songs have like... 6 instruments max. Yours have like 60. I might name a song "Dreamwalker" and it would just be a mellow pad mixed with other background elements and SFX, building up into a windy like atmosphere or something. You, on the other hand, combine a series of well made instruments into this. Great job on that. Props ~ <3

Funk To Another Level

I always have known that ZStreifel can make some pretty amazing bodacious eargasmic sexy sounds...I also have known that you can make some experimental awesome delicious music. When you combine all that together you get this. This is sweet, I enjoy the flow of enjoyable SFX and customized synths. The title really says it all. Its like a funkish song taken to another level with an unkown genre. I guess thats called Funkhausen.

Logic Studios is one hell of a program. I have always wanted to try it out along with Realism. I can tell it can make some really high quality synth if you know what the fuck your doing. And you two really know what the fuck you are doing. Great job, 5d and faved.

SymbolCymbal responds:

WOW ,, thank you for the sweet review man, we def spent alot of time on just customizing the synths . presets are lame!

Very Well Done

Meowth wakes up, stretching and curling his arms underneath the pixelated sun of his bedroom window. He hops inside his shower and begins to wash the nighttime grime from his body. Refreshed, he hops out of the shower, grabs a cup of coffee, and heads out his door. Welcoming the day in front of him, he cheerfully strolls across the sidewalk as children fly kits past the 8bit world. Dogs play in the park, cookouts are held, and bikers zoom down the road. The building up ahead stands tall on a beautiful grassy plain. He continues towards it.

Inside the white and grey waiting room of Poke Hospital sits the anxious townspeople who have various health problems that require attention. The helpful clinic has always provided help for the town and the people love it here. Meowth sits in his chair, reading a bright red magazine. Slowly, but surely, the waiting room grows smaller as people are called to the doctors office. Finally, meowths name is called and he hops out of his seat. Inside of the blue room, he jumps onto a bed and is hooked up to a series of tubes. The doctors cheerful smile turns to an expression not common in the town of Funville. He walks to Meowth and says, "You've got aids"

(((I could picture meowth bouncing up and down along with the birds and smiling trees and everything lol. Everything was in really bright colors and was really cheerful, and then just the most hilarious expression lands itself on his face at the end. This was really well done to the theme of aids xD)))

Unorganized

In the beginning, there is a bit of crackling in there, along with low quality drums and an off tune synth that really distracts me from the rest of the song. The tune after that doesnt sound as good as it would without the intro. I think you should put in a simple buildup intro that has no more that two instruments and at least one pad. Right now it seems a bit randomly placed.

After 0:40, I enjoyed the tune, but not the song itself. It seemed like you just randomly placed in bits and pieces without much thinking. It was played well, but not placed well. I understand this song was made in 2009 and I am sure you have improved since then, but always make sure to do the song piece by piece in order to maintain order. Sometimes chaos is great in music, but not like this. Try playing each instrument one at a time, put in a simple beat, then play around with your main lead and add some remixing of the background elements.

Geoplex responds:

The organization in general of this piece does leave a bit to be desired, and all in all definitely isn't my best work. However, it doesn't seem chaotic at all to me, really - so I'm not sure what you mean by that.
I appreciate the review, it isn't often I read such a thorough response.

Lol

Every now and then a voice acting skit will get top of the week. Either people will hate it or love it. Personally, I think everyone should love this. I lolololeddd. Good job man xD

omegared responds:

Coming from a guy who once flamed me for my work, from a guy I respect for his skill, from a guy who is pretty known around NG: a ten means a lot.

too bad you're not any of those^

;) jk <3 thanks dogg
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Very Interesting

That was an awesome experimental thing you did there. It takes talent to combine such noises. This would be great for SFX in a game. Its not pleasant to listen to, but I think its very experimental and well put together.

doctormario responds:

Thanks man. :)

Nature

Up ahead, seemingly out of nowhere, appeared a large, stone gate outlined with a green and grey texture carrying hundreds of strange symbols. It grew larger as I closed in on its form. Its surface was dull and weak, carrying trails of dust and age. I felt my hand against its cold surface, and shivered under its dead appearances. I craved to understand its meaning. I wanted more. I wanted knowledge. I pushed against the rock and it slid open just enough for me to walk through. I stared ahead, walking, breathing, thinking, and sweating. Sitting in front of my lifeless body was a forest, entangled with vines and darkness. There were no animals. There was only towering trees laced with dull, green plants that made a maze of uncertainty. The door sealed behind me, and I wondered into the forest of stone.

Grey bricks scattered themselves amongst the terrain, burrowing deep inside the trees and plants that morphed together the dream that stood before me. No wait, it was not a dream. It was real. It had to be real. I touched a black and white flower underneath my feet, and it turned into nothingness, disappearing from my grasps as if it was never there. I was dead. This was where I was meant to be for the rest of my life. The grey dusty world sang to me and welcomed me deeper within its realm. I reached out to touch its fingers, and it smiled. I climbed upwards, up the trees and onto the vines until I saw the dark sky above. Sitting upon the grey leaves, I watched the moon spin slowly in the sky. It watched me as I did it. It spoke to me, as everything else did. This was nature. This was death. Both were calling out to me in harmony. Both were singing to me. I understood. I understood that death was nature, and that nature was death.

Glass

The purple trail before me seemed to go on for miles, in a never ending structure of twists and turns that blinded my imagination. The path sparkled in the sun as clouds washed over them, dancing with its celestial body. I walked forwards, attracted by its beautiful stare. It spoke to me, called out my name, and lured me into its grasp. I looked below as I started walking into the unknown. There was nothing but snow. The earth was dead, covered in an brush stroke of white. The clouds sang as they did their work, and framed the landscape into an abyss of nothingness.

The exotic world around me called me once more, and I continued into the unknown. Throughout the purple trail, I felt alone. I felt as if nothing was real, as if I was inside of a paradoxical universe that's sole purpose was to bewilder me with immense tones of wonderment and astronomical figures, basking in an endless abyss that carried me without free will. I had nowhere to turn. I had nowhere to hide. Yet, I felt at piece. I felt safe. I was not scared. There was nothing to be afraid about. It's only nothingness.

I was now walking upside down, walking up and over the loops and twists of the trail. It seemed to have its gravitational pull, but I did not care. The dead earth distracted me. I walked further into it and smiled. I felt at piece. Is this what it is like to be dead, or is it a simple pit stop in between the worlds of death and life? I felt no pain. I felt no terror. I only felt the urge to push forward, to discover, and to engulf myself upon the purple glass in the land of snow and clouds.

Good God

Your voice is so hypnotizing. Its amazing really. You are professional right? Go get a record deal. Go sing for mainstream stuff. Get your voice heard! Look at that 4.91 score with 1,400 votes... I never thought I would ever see that on newgrounds. It counteracts all 0 bombers even. Thats incredible. Tomorrow it will get top of the week and the score is going to be bombarded, hopefully not though.

You are amazing. The lyrics are great as well. Really inspirational!

Thanks for this :)

Centipede

Inside these closed bars I sit upon the cold brick and think to myself about the world outside. The seemingly non-existent, single beam of light that flows through my prison warms my heart every time I feel its glow against my rusty hands. I listen to the stream of water trailing through the tunnels outside and close my eyes. I will probably never get out of here. My body will dig deep into this stone and stay here for who knows how long. I look into the eyes of the darkness and attempt to speak. "Hello," I ask. "Is anybody out there?" There is no answer. There will always be no answer. I am more alone than the stone and the darkness that surrounds me.

I begin to feel sad. What could I have done to prevent this? Is there anything I can do to get out? I feel so deep. Its just so strange ow the exotic whispers of the tunells call out to me, asking me to sleep, asking me to dream, asking me to let it all go and accept their arms. I look outside a crack and try to see. I look for minutes in desperation to find anything. Time doesnt exsist anymore, but I finally see the tiny shape of a centipede, resting against the rock. I smile and reach for it. The centipede begins to stand, and waves it body around. It crawls forwards and accepts my calling.

I laugh as it tickles my skin. Its damp red hue glows in the single ray of light from above. It wraps around my wrist, hugging me. I feel it trying to communicate with me, although I myself can not understand it. "Where do you live?" I ask it. It responds by waving its filers in the dead air of the room. "Oh..." I reply.

I curl up on the hard, jagged floor and kiss the centipede goodnight. It kisses me back, and I begin to feel the tunnels wrapping around me, as if they were a billion centipedes pulling me down into the earth. My head feels weak, and my body feels hot. The centipede crawls away as I reach for it one last time, and rake one last breath underneath the timid voices of the tunnels.

Oh, hello there. I guess you want to know who I am. I mainly create ambient music and voice act here on NG. Occasionally youll see me produce some silly animation or game. If you want to chat or something, send me a spanky danky PM. *Sig by Magical-Zorse*

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