FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic1 ending credits remaster]

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A couple of things.

1.) The fuzzy bot noises you use arent very attractive to the ears.
2.) Some of the sounds in the background sound off tune.
3.) The song at some parts doesnt seem like it fits at all with a remix of sonic and actually doesnt seem like a song at all.

HOWEVER, you seem to have the talent to at least mix some sort of tune.

fuzzum111 responds:

Thanks that makes me feel real good about myself ^^; Great job XD

[Blood Red Hurricane]

Interesting!

I couldn't picture this in a boss fight that much.. but I could, however, picture it in a chaotic level with volcanoes erupting in the background. It wasn't too epic because it just continued on one large constant stream instead of having a build up or anything. It was very pleasant to listen to though. I only recommend making the bass in the background a little less organic.

[Verizon Wireless: Meat & Dulcy]

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Lol... that was pretty odd. were they having sex or something? :|

The acting was pretty good since both charecters were the oppisite sex. Props for that. I recommend turning down that background noise because I can barely understand what they are saying. Plus, the story doesnt make any sense. All it is is people screaming or something.
Odd... really odd lol.

[Panic puppet final]

How to boost up your scores

USE DIFFERENT INSTRUMENTS

The generic and organic byte sounds you use sound way too annoying and not very pleasant to the ears. Replace every byte noise with real instruments such as pianos, guitars, drums, and you can use some sweet synths and pads if you want.

Try it. The melodies you come up with are pretty cool, you just use the wrong insturments.

[Kazmo - Euphoric [Full 80kbps]]

Wow...

I already know this is gonna be good... The intro really counts for keeping people interested in the song. Oh it building up... annnddd... oh god this is freaking sweet progressive music.

Kazmo responds:

Glad you like it!

:P

Funny how you already knew it was gonna be good. ;]

[Heaven's Storm (A->N)]

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Wow... this is pro. REAL PRO. every synth and beat is freaking sweet.

ApproachingNirvana responds:

Thanks for the review, man! We've put a whole lot of effort into everything; we're glad you thought it showed.

[WindyCity_TheAir]

OOOhhhh

The generic bite sounds you used were actually pretty freaking awesome! The wind sound was a nice touch as well. As a remix though, you should put in more sounds and different instruments like the tune in guitar form or piano form. ;)

Put in more drumS!

[VoiceActingContest1{Kilgore}]

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FINAL JUDGES AVERAGED SCORE

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Well, it seems like you really didnt try for this. It wasnt very good acting at all and the ending just wasnt original. There was only two characters and they both sounded the same. Try to include a longer story with more characters instead of just saying a random 30 second voice clip.

Thanks for entering though. ;) Better luck next time. *Lol whats up with the da dda dum dum da d daaa at the end?*

Dylawrence said:

Suggestions: needs more content, and the characters could seem more real... but the real problem was the story, it needs more depth!

Compliments: fucking awesome punch line!

Kilgore-Trout responds:

is that out of 100? whatever. i did actually try, this is just the first time i've ever done anything like this. the "da da dum" part was really the only spur of the moment stuff. i'd like to improve my voice acting and participate in any future contests.

thanks Dylawrence!

[No Homework]

PFFFTTT HAHAHAHAHA!!!

FINAL SCORES AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES

___65___

Now personally, this was one of my favorites. It was HILARIOUS. I give it a 99 for comedy. However, the voice acting wasnt really VOICE ACTING... it was more like a guy just making up a story like on a radio show or something. There was only 2 people in your story talking so I couldnt really tell if you had any talent in voicing multiple characters. So anyway, thanks a lot for entering. CAUSE THIS MADE MY DAY. It was so funny. xD

Dylawrence said:

Suggestions: maybe have the other characters in his story talk as well, it might've been more enjoyable to actually make it seem like it was happening, instead of a dude talking the whole time (even though it's already been done)

Compliments: For what it is, it's such a good rendition of a kid bullshitting his way out of trouble, and it has nice humor to it

ForNoReason responds:

LOL yeah, I did this real quick as soon as I heard about the competition. Next month ill try to rock some faces.

[VA competition.]

LOL!!!!

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES

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Wow... that... was... TERRIFIC. I laughed at everything in this. And lol are you mentioning me just so ill give you a high score? WELL IT WORKED YOU BASTARD. This acting was waaayyy unexpected. It was VERY good. You do a very well british womans voice! and the gay voice was just too funny. This was the most original one so far, thats for sure.

YES

Dylawrence said:

Suggestions: some of the sound effects sound a little out of place, and could be a little cleaner.
Compliments: I LOVE how you made fun of the same contest you're entering, and it's entertaining the entire 9ish minutes. You're definitely winning something I hope!

sirjeffofshort said:

(Personal note: as a writer this was my favorite entry, if this were a writing competition he would have had my top vote no problem haha, just felt the others had a better show of range and fit)

Stalagmite responds:

i am so pleased you enjoyed this LOL. i was really worried that it sucked the big one. i am really pleased that i got third place though. i was sure there where much better ones than this. but i am not complaining! the sound effects where done using a keyboard. because i had no programmes or anything. everything was done via the keyboard. and the sound effects where applied to the original instruments via reaper. and OMG lol, the gay voice? i didnt intentionally do any gay voices! hahaha!
if you mean the main character it is the voice of the kitty in my puppet show.

I certainly didnt mind making fun of the contest. it was all in good humour, and i felt it could relate to everyone juding and entering. i certainly plan on making all my entries as interesting as possible! and i will certainly try to improve my range and effects though. i appreciate everyones constructive criticisms, and evryones input. and thanks Fat kid! you rock. :D:D:D

3rd place! yayness! horay!