FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DPulse - We Like Crocodiles]

Well this was unexpected!

I was thinking this was going to be some generic song made by a 14 year old that wasnt very good at all... instead i heard a very enjoying song with a great build up synth that had me addicted from the start. Then you added in a build up beat, which was a very professional thing to do. You even added onto the synth as the beat came in. THEN added another build up beat that ended with a nice KICK. And then with a sort of solo synth with a soothing pad in the background.

The only thing I would recommend doing is adding more synths to make things interesting. Try making some more of your own synths like you did in the background near the 2 minute marker.

If you wanted to make this an actual rave song, you should have continued it with one of your own home made synths except with its pitch going in and out. Like a huge solo with different beats and.. well its hard to explain.

Listen to AH.FM in Itunes radio under the elctronic station if you want to hear what im talking about.

Cheers, and good luck! :) *your better than me at making music BTW, using garageband with pre-set loops inst very talented. :/*

DigitalPulse responds:

Wow, a long review! I was trying to stay away from generic, and I guess I did :). The song was a little bland at some parts, I must agree with you. I need to develop more on some sections of the song. I'll be sure to check out that station ;)

AND DON'T FORGET THIS IS A COLLAB, CHECK OUT KALAPSIA :)

Thanks for the review,

Digital Pulse

[C is for Cookie]

I Love You.

C is indeed for Cookie and C is for cool song.

Great job. xD

[Experimental Beatbox]

xD xD xD

That was good! I loved the layering you did. Now make a 4 minute feature long beatboxing extravaganza! :D D: :D D:

[Sodomy]

Uhh

well if it wasnt for the... lryics this song would be fantastic. Insulting the listener like that just isnt called for. I would recommend choosing different lyrics.

SodomyKingz responds:

We're sorry you didn't like it! Add us to your favourite artist list, and favourite this song!

[For NewGrounds (Famous No]

Enjoyable!

_Bad_

The singing wasnt very good in my opinion. There were a lot of off notes and too high pitches.

it is to short and ends adruptly

_Good_

Nice, soothing soundtrack.

Great selection of instruments

Good for a nice listen, with better singing.

So anyway, just improve on your singing skills. :)

Druids-Warcry responds:

*Cough* ... "Sang by ingenius" ...

im ah glad you like the beat though

[Vectorman Port level]

vectorman?

Ive never heard of that lol. Well anyway...

GOOD

- The tune is pretty awesome, but you didnt come up with it. :P
- Nice sounds
- Good job on the complicated drum work and synth work

BAD

-Not original
- Repetitive
- Not very eargasmic, if you know what I mean.

So anyway man, you should make YOUR OWN tune and play that using less generic sounds! once you do that, people will vote better on your song since it is more original.

[GreenGrove act 2]

Hey There! :D

Well no time long see huh? So you made a remix of this ever so popular song I see. It sounds pretty nice! I would recommend making it a little bit more remixed though. You can do this by making it a sort of rave dance song rather that a fun byte song. Make it original and people will love it.

fuzzum111 responds:

Thanks man, I'm still learning how to properly remix, rather than just reinstrament, and add layers. It's by far not very easy but I'm catching on.

[>>LOZ: The Lullaby of Time<<]

Is this the final version?

I remember you made another one before and I loved it... but I can not tell what the difference between this one and that one is. :3

VGSongbird responds:

????

I'm pretty sure this is the only one I did of this song.... my Sister did one!! Maybe you're thinking of hers... Darklink2000??? ringing any bells....??

Oh and thanks for the 10 ^_^

[For Those...]

How did you record this?

I must know. I wrote a piano song and i am dying to play it. This is a masterpiece by the way and went perfect with the game.

Xeptic responds:

1. Plug keyboard into computer with USB cable.
2. Fire up audio recording program (in my case Garageband).
3. Play.
4. Edit a little here and there.

[Sungazer (OM)]

Detailed Review

I have been listening to some really nice Tiesto In Search Of Sunrise albulms lately, and I could actually see this being on there. The heavy drums in the begginning are a bit TOO high, but they drown out to being at just the right level after the intro.

The pad should have been turned up to a high level with that bass turned up as well. This would make it completley EPIC. Not everyone listens to these with headphones turned on high bass yah know. ;) Have you ever heard of the song Pink Elephants by LAX? He made a 1:50 long intro that sounded AMAZING. ANd it was just pads with a bass that slowly gains filter... just the coolest thing I have ever heard and you could make an even cooler one if you woud simply turn up the Bass and Pad in this pad part. I actually think you should make this the BEGINNING of the song, but that would be for another one you make.

2:43 is anticlimatic. You should continue the background pad slowwlllyyy filtering it until the part where the drums come in and leave it at that level. This would make it climatic! ORGASMIC! CLIIMAAXXXX!! :D So in other words take off those small interludes where it seems as something is going to happen but it continues that pad.

Everything looks very good. I love the song, and think you are a fantastic artist. If you want some inspiration grab your nicest pair of headphones and get In Search of Sunrise Volume 5 and listen to the first song on the second disk. I am criticizing you because I want you to improve until you are as great as Tiesto heh!

GOOD LUCK! <3

Kr1z responds:

-Tiesto wins :$

-The drums dont drown out actually, theyr at the same volume level for the whole track.
I havent heard the pink elephant song yet, will check!

-Yeh that could be the beginning, but I choose to start with a drum intro :)

-Anticlimax needs some work yarr

-Thx for the critcism!! I really appreciate the tips.

Thx for the review, bye!