FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dune]

HMM background music...

Never thought of it like that before! I'll review this song with that in mind... I could see this in a game where some guy is walking throughout some cave or something collecting diamonds. The game would have very nice graphics. NOt only does this song sound good as background music, it would alsosound ok for a good listen. Well I am giving it a solid 4.

[Pluto(extended)]

Nice name.

I liked the echoing synth pad you used. It was very simple and calming, i like that. But the background noises you choose werent all that great. They sounded ALRIGHT, bu kind of interupted the whole song because they went on for too long without and major build up.

[Mars--Avarice]

You dont remember me. :D

But I remember you! So I decided to write a review on one of your songs.. This is really a song that builds up from the beginning. But it is to slow of a build up. I liked the sounds and all, especially what became of the flute sounds. I think you should of toned the background down a bit near the end. It sounded like annoying white noise after a while. Oh well, live and learn right? :)

Sorry, I just didnt like this song. Simple as that.

[Gandalf's Dead Cover]

Had to turn the speakers up.

But still, a very nice song. You use a variety of simple yet heart warming pads that fill one up with emotion and wonder. I like the tunes you use in there as well! 13 ywar olds will fall head over heals for this sort of stuff (Cause they search for epic music like this from my experience)

You and I are very closely related when it comes to making ambience music. We NEED to have a collab together. What do you say?

Before you decide, try listening to some of my music like (::Towards The Sun::) =FINAL=. Make sure to click the one that says =FINAL=

Another tune that expresses my thoughts would be (::Windsnow::) V1. It is a new one, so you can find it on the front of my userpage.

Well I hope this makes you want to do a collab with me.

NOTE: You are new at this right? Well make sure to ignore all those who put you down because they only look at weither it is a hard piece to make or not. They dont care if it sounds good. This piece was 'easy' to make because it is just playing long notes over and over again. But what they dont have the mindset for is the complexity of the meaning of the song. The choords, the overwhelming echoes and background white noise. And even the surreal experience of it putting you to sleep. Those criticts dont have the imagination and maturity to even comprhend such things. So just ignore them.

Thanks! *I listened to this song probably 8 times while typing this review lol*

Semaphore responds:

rofl xD yeah I know what you mean

I don't care what other people say for bad things about my songs

I like my songs

I could hear them hours long ^^

otherwise I couldn't make them

if I make a song I have to feel a mood like sadness or happyness if not the song will be bad

even if I don't like this song because I could make the horns more expressive I'm proud of the result

I began for about 3 month to make music and I never learned to read notes or play an instrument yet

but the programs can let you try things like this and improve your abilities in composing

I will listen to your songs and give you a pm =)

cheers mate ^_^

[Superman's Dead (8bit funeral)]

LOL!!!!11oneelevenonehunded

A very nice 8-bit song. I am sure if this was played at your funeral, everyone would start laughing lol. :D

A nice beat and synth, but some of it was really annoying. Choose a different instrument.. and this would be a really catchy tune. Some of it was played off tune as well.

[:KA: MIXED UP]

NO! 0_P

Because none of it was actually played, i can't really give a decent review on this song.. and nither can anyone else. You gotta make your own material rather than getting bits and pieces from other songs. If you actually made a song like this, people would like you much more.

KorpzeAudio responds:

This is 100% made by me. (Besides all the effects and hats, I didn't make them, but I DID sequence the hats....)
This review offends me.. sorry. If you want to see the fuckin .flp file, I'll PROVE to you I made this.
Bass- BS Creamy Bass (Vanguard)
Hats- Packs -> Hip Hop
Begining Kicks- Packs->Hip Hop
Ending Kicks- (Vipzone)
Strings- FL Default Strings (String Ensemble)
Ending Melody- LD Max Fun (Vanguard)
Effects- FL Default Effects

Write a better review and I will write a better reply!

[Street light silence]

Nice.

You got a band going on. Very rare to see something like that on NG. People here can appreciate that sort of thing. The only thing I saw was that seomtimes the instruments werent in beat with eachother. You should record each thing seperatley, then put them on different layers and move them arounda bit in a audio editer program. Most of them are free.

[Dream of Water and Land]

OMg.

I was just making a song that sounds exactly like this... you lucky duck! Now if I post it people will think mine is stolen Dammit. >:(

Semaphore responds:

make your version maybe it will be better =)

I think this chords of the song already exist maybe not in one song but finally we let us inspirate from things we already know

I thought on gandalfs dead theme of lord of the rings a bit when I made it ^^

make your version of the song nobody will say it's stolen =)
to cover a song isn't forbidden

[The Last Virtue [COLLAB]]

Strange.

NOt my usual listen. It was very original in my opinion. The synthns were filtered out and matched the beat perfectly. Nice beat to.

LastEncore responds:

Thanks...

[theRATS]

Ehh.

Sorry but it built up way to slowly and hurt my ears with the awful progression sounds. The singing wasnt that great either. Sorry but this simply isnt a good song.

FFFCEM responds:

:(

:)