FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lejin - YeahYeah(KeyboardBang)]

LOL!!!

Driving down the road in my ice-cream truck...

Running over kids and saying FUCK!

Get out of the car to see what i'ver done...

Realized what has happened so I start to run.

Crossing the border to El Mexico

Feelin kind a down so I get myself a ho

Then I go to the bar right across the street

to buy a few martinnes for this guy nammed pete.

So, what do you think?

Great rap, made me CRACK UP.

Lejin responds:

FIRE!!! your a NATURAL!!!! LOL

[(WF1) Fleeting Daybreak]

DAMN.

God WIld fire, you have every freaking song on the front page!! LOL!

Keep it up man! So, how do they get there?

wyldfyre1 responds:

lol i don't know man, magic i guess! As far as every song.. nahh not every song haha..=) Thanks for the review man!

[{(Crystalline)}]

COOL.

It was very ambient and soothing. Just like I make my songs, until the trance like beat came in with differemt music and synth lol. I liked it, it was very crystal like. I also like the groovy synth that came ion around 1:00

Cutting-Christ responds:

Thanks. ^_^

[_:Feeling:_]

I feel like throwing up...

No really, but not because of your song. XD I like it, it has a simplistic beat with changes here and there. Keep it up! I think you should add some heavy beats.

nBIZ responds:

thanks i guess...? hope you feel better!

[Dreaming of You <(^^,)>]

Cool!

I loved this beat man, made me want to get up and start dancing! If only I wasn't so fat... *SNIFF*

I loved the simplistic synths you used to create such an awesome background for this song. Fantastic Job man, keep up this aweosme work!!!

Sp1r1T responds:

:P will do

[Drink With Me]

LOL!!!

Very medivial. Ioved he voice acting. And the guitar in the background. If you like voice acting, you should be in my next episode of FattyMcpatty and LardyLarLar.

You can review them first if you want... I recommend seeing 4 and 5.

Thanks, and keep this up!

apzfreak responds:

Thanks man!

[Places]

Wait wait wait...

SO you put this on newgrounds, but you didn't make it? Or did you play the song along with the mans speech? If you played it with the speech, then this song freaking rocks!!! I loved the way you played it exactly with his words.

But, if you just stole this and put it on here, then it will be deleted because you aren't following the review guidlines.

LordZedd responds:

no need to worry about that friend, that is in fact my playing over the speech. Glad you liked it, hope you see that the speech is still pretty relevant.

[Nav - Terran (Mastered)]

Oh hello Nav.

I thought it was pretty cool. The first part of the song started out kind of slow and boring, but then it got better. You should of started the song out a little faster to get peoples attention. It was very original, and I liked the beat that came in. But, after 1:30, the song got way too generic. It was just a beat without any other instruments or synht besides some in the background that you can barely hear. Try to add some different instruments. Keep it up!

Nav responds:

K, the beginning just sets the scene with some ambience... I would think you could appreciate that, as an ambient artist.

Considering this music is designed for club play, starting fast would be a horrible move. The trick is that the dj plays the ambient intro over another track, so he can make a smooth transition.

After 1:30, there was a drum line and a reese... drum and bass. With drums, and bass. Minimal background, just drums... and bass. Try to imagine hearing this in a club setting. Drum and bass really isn't meant to be casually listened to, but it's supposed to carry energy.

Also, I think you need to turn your volume up a bit more... I'm sure that the background elements were noticeable, even if they were minimal.

Thanks for reviewing!

[Hooked On Classical]

no...

Look, combining pre-set loops from major songs doesn't make a song great. It was sort of original, but people aren't going to like it. Try playing a tune from a major film if you want to get regonition.

MusicMan01 responds:

So the only songs that are interesting are covers? I appreciate your critique of the song, but find it hard to believe a cover of a song from a major film is anything special. I prefer to tread on new ground rather than revisiting what has already been done.