FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Drink With Me]

LOL!!!

Very medivial. Ioved he voice acting. And the guitar in the background. If you like voice acting, you should be in my next episode of FattyMcpatty and LardyLarLar.

You can review them first if you want... I recommend seeing 4 and 5.

Thanks, and keep this up!

apzfreak responds:

Thanks man!

[Places]

Wait wait wait...

SO you put this on newgrounds, but you didn't make it? Or did you play the song along with the mans speech? If you played it with the speech, then this song freaking rocks!!! I loved the way you played it exactly with his words.

But, if you just stole this and put it on here, then it will be deleted because you aren't following the review guidlines.

LordZedd responds:

no need to worry about that friend, that is in fact my playing over the speech. Glad you liked it, hope you see that the speech is still pretty relevant.

[Nav - Terran (Mastered)]

Oh hello Nav.

I thought it was pretty cool. The first part of the song started out kind of slow and boring, but then it got better. You should of started the song out a little faster to get peoples attention. It was very original, and I liked the beat that came in. But, after 1:30, the song got way too generic. It was just a beat without any other instruments or synht besides some in the background that you can barely hear. Try to add some different instruments. Keep it up!

Nav responds:

K, the beginning just sets the scene with some ambience... I would think you could appreciate that, as an ambient artist.

Considering this music is designed for club play, starting fast would be a horrible move. The trick is that the dj plays the ambient intro over another track, so he can make a smooth transition.

After 1:30, there was a drum line and a reese... drum and bass. With drums, and bass. Minimal background, just drums... and bass. Try to imagine hearing this in a club setting. Drum and bass really isn't meant to be casually listened to, but it's supposed to carry energy.

Also, I think you need to turn your volume up a bit more... I'm sure that the background elements were noticeable, even if they were minimal.

Thanks for reviewing!

[Hooked On Classical]

no...

Look, combining pre-set loops from major songs doesn't make a song great. It was sort of original, but people aren't going to like it. Try playing a tune from a major film if you want to get regonition.

MusicMan01 responds:

So the only songs that are interesting are covers? I appreciate your critique of the song, but find it hard to believe a cover of a song from a major film is anything special. I prefer to tread on new ground rather than revisiting what has already been done.

[[MS] - Dusky Dawn]

Pretty funky.

I loved how the tempo slowed down to a nice groovy beat after it speed up. Would be freaking hard to dance to, but it was a good jazzy tune to listen to from my computer. I liked the combination of instruments you choose for each different beat. It wasn't repetitive at all, except the main beat. (Which is good) good title too. Some of the instruments were out of tune, but it went well with the groovyness. Liked 1:45 the best. I see you worked hard on this song, if only people could appreciate this more. Most hopefully will, except for those immature people who hate this sort of stuff. DAMN THEM TO HELL! Lol, keep up this awesome work! I hope this gets front paged.

MackerelSalad responds:

well, actually the whole track remains about the same tempo, and i would rather sit and relax to this, than dance to it. thanks for the compliments man! 1:45 is one of my favorite parts too. Yeah, I kinda worked really hard on this track. I mean, doing this shit all by yourself, from scratch is kinda hard yes. I'm glad you do appreciate it :)

[Day of the Tentacle Cover]

Oh boy...

I am giving you a 4 for being able to remake this song, but playing music from games that have already been made before, isn't very original. And the byte sounds are annoying to just listen to. If you want to remake the song, then add real instruments like guitars, pianos, and some synths here and there instead of that annoying byte sound. Hope it works out for you. Good job for making this though.

bitium-ribbon responds:

Thanks, I think...

But, um... I have to ask why you bothered putting that in a review of a "Video Game" song to begin with. There's a reason the category exists, and that's so fans like me can mix up songs like this (and the dozen or so others I've cooked up) in tribute. If I wanted to be original, I wouldn't make a "Video Game" song to begin with, now would I?

Thanks anyway.

EDIT: Sorry, to your other commentary. The instruments I use are tried and true. Most of the sounds you heard *were* guitar samples - in fact, that annoying byte sound you're referring to is one of them. Perhaps your speaker quality is giving you a problem distinguishing it. Piano wouldn't have worked well either. But I'll keep your suggestions in mind.

[Faster!]

Cool.

I liked it at first, but then the high pitch squeel synth came in. Simple choose a different synth in place of that one. It was a good tune, but that synth ruined everything. Also, you should change things a bit around 48 seconds.

Laikros responds:

Eeek, the high-pitchedness ruined the song ><
I'll get to work on a new one then D:

-Thank you :3

[Silly little song]

POO.

Heh... rigggghhhhttt.... It was pretty cool!

Look, you obviously stole this song. Please, don;t steal songs. If you are going to submit songs to the audio portal, read the review and guidlines first.

You claimed this as yours by posting it, and mentioning you making it in the authors comments.

Try harder, and compose a song of your own.

mgear responds:

Deleted my old response, came up with something better. Reeaaddy?

Nope. Not stolen, You have ears which may be deceiving you. Even then, if you still believe it is stolen, link me the other song?

[Rusted Robot Tragedy]

WAY to edgy;

Turn down the edgyness man, it hurt my ears! Do that, and the song would be pretty cool.

dejota responds:

fatkid, one solution remains on your end, and that would be to turn down the volume on your speakers. Second, just tell me where the "edgyness" knob is, and I'll be sure to crank it down for you, bud.

[_-={The Deads Witness}=-_]

Good as always!

Great job on submitting so many great songs man! This was pretty cool. I liked the YAH! vocals coming in at the right time. It was really epic music, would be great for a game. Actually.. it would be PERFECT for a game.

Great job! Keep up the good work.

MaestroRage responds:

It was in fact made for a game :D! I'm glad you felt it would be good for one. This specific one was made for the intro, which is why it also loops!

Thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it!