FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Castle Piano - Nightheaven]

Good Pad.

The choice of Pad was excellent. You added other instruments with good timing too. It sounded heavenly at certain points. (Which is hard to do!) Keep this up man, your making some pretty cool songs. Normally, I would have the patience for listening to all of this song, but not that many other will. Lol, it really stinks when you make so much in a song, but most only listen to about half of it. If you ever have a song like this again, you should try splitting it into 2 songs.

Oh, and VERY NICE Piano.

Nightheaven responds:

Thanks brother!

[Kybord Killr]

It was Ok.

That was way to short... but after all it was a loop. I think you mushed everything together. You need to make it slower and add different instruments.

226NeXuS responds:

Sure thing... I guess... I only have FL7 demo, so I'll have to start from scratch, but if I get the time I'll re-make it... I guess...

[-Goodbye-]

I don't know.

I don't have FL studio, so I don't know if you added very much to this pre-set or not. If you did, then it sounded very cool. Nice job.

uten responds:

well I wanted to use strings and all that but I think it sounds better like this I did add a reverb and only three channels

[Cripple Creek(WolfBlitz style)]

AHAHAH!!!

That made me laugh really hard. I know you were trying to be serious, but most people just don't appreciate Bluegrass. The sound of it just made me laugh! I suggest picking a different category.

WolfBlitz2 responds:

what as though?
Techno? House?
The thing is did you enjoy it?

[Only The Dead C The End Of War]

Nice.

The breath that was talking in the song went very well with the beat. It sounded like a rap song at first. It was a little too plain though, with only beats and the ocasional breath. You should add some heavy leading violins and piano with this. YEt, it was very smooth, nice job.

viciousproductions responds:

yeah thanx man..well violins i got no sounds like that..but piano i dont kno where to add it lol...maybe u can help me out

[Beer! (Kinda metalized)]

Ow..

Sorry, but it was way off tune, and the vocals didn't go with the music at all. The heavy metal screaming wasn't very good either. You need to improve your timing and the instruments need to change. I see that you were trying to create a heavy metal song, but it is very easy to mess up these kind of songs.

Blackdoom13 responds:

Your a duche.
Thanks for the contrustive critisium.
Dick

[Metalman - Metal Dance]

Nice Track You've got here.

You had good build up, good instruments, and good vocals. The vocals were the freaking best. It almost sounded like you stole it from a real band! Lol. Well, I really enjoyed it. It was some sweet Rock. Keep it up with this band of yours!

I'm a fan of yours now, so as a fan, I have some FAN WORK to show you. It is a comedy, but you might enjoy it. The 4th episode you should see first though, the link is in the authors comments.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/119457

Good job so far on your songs!! This will probably get Top 5 of the week if it is an honest song made by yourself.

KEEP ON MAKING MORE!

TheMegas responds:

Hey, we are a real band! Thanks for the kind review. We've been around for a while, but I hadn't discovered the audio portal of Newgrounds until now :-)

Gonna go check out your link now.

[Inferno Na Terra]

uhh....

You just recorded this man, Cmon, you can do better than this! Try making the song on your own, though, I think you were just trying to be funny.

MuyAmigo responds:

oO

man i worked hard on that ,
what's the exact problem , the language ?
the riff order , the vocals ???

i was original , and followed my instincts man , what you suggest ?

[Green, Piano(NB Remastered)]

Great!

Cool. It was really chilling man. But, I found it not to be very original JUST BECAUSE, the style has been done, many times before. I really liked it, and voted 5, but I honestly don't think it deserves Top 5 or anything...

Jurian responds:

Why is this not original, give me songs that sound like it, it's just a piano solo with some stuff, how many people do piano solo's(on a keyboard(midi))?
Thanks for voting five