FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[{D.J. Ace} Just Like Her]

RESPOND TO THIS REVIEW PLEASE!

ALright, I see you are beginning with Garageband, which is good. It is a great program to start out with. The background beat fit well with the piano. You did use pre-set loops, but it is Ok because you are just starting. What you should try doing now, is plugging the pre-set loops into different instruments for different sounds and effects. I am experienced with Garageband, and make all my songs using it. I will be happy to help you if you need any help. Mots importantly, however, you have GOT to respond to your reviews!!! So... Respond! And keep it up.

Ace75 responds:

Thanks. I would like to keep intouch with you if you really think you can help. P.M. me sometime!

[Only The Dead C The End Of War]

Nice.

The breath that was talking in the song went very well with the beat. It sounded like a rap song at first. It was a little too plain though, with only beats and the ocasional breath. You should add some heavy leading violins and piano with this. YEt, it was very smooth, nice job.

viciousproductions responds:

yeah thanx man..well violins i got no sounds like that..but piano i dont kno where to add it lol...maybe u can help me out

[Beer! (Kinda metalized)]

Ow..

Sorry, but it was way off tune, and the vocals didn't go with the music at all. The heavy metal screaming wasn't very good either. You need to improve your timing and the instruments need to change. I see that you were trying to create a heavy metal song, but it is very easy to mess up these kind of songs.

Blackdoom13 responds:

Your a duche.
Thanks for the contrustive critisium.
Dick

[Metalman - Metal Dance]

Nice Track You've got here.

You had good build up, good instruments, and good vocals. The vocals were the freaking best. It almost sounded like you stole it from a real band! Lol. Well, I really enjoyed it. It was some sweet Rock. Keep it up with this band of yours!

I'm a fan of yours now, so as a fan, I have some FAN WORK to show you. It is a comedy, but you might enjoy it. The 4th episode you should see first though, the link is in the authors comments.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/119457

Good job so far on your songs!! This will probably get Top 5 of the week if it is an honest song made by yourself.

KEEP ON MAKING MORE!

TheMegas responds:

Hey, we are a real band! Thanks for the kind review. We've been around for a while, but I hadn't discovered the audio portal of Newgrounds until now :-)

Gonna go check out your link now.

[Inferno Na Terra]

uhh....

You just recorded this man, Cmon, you can do better than this! Try making the song on your own, though, I think you were just trying to be funny.

MuyAmigo responds:

oO

man i worked hard on that ,
what's the exact problem , the language ?
the riff order , the vocals ???

i was original , and followed my instincts man , what you suggest ?

[Green, Piano(NB Remastered)]

Great!

Cool. It was really chilling man. But, I found it not to be very original JUST BECAUSE, the style has been done, many times before. I really liked it, and voted 5, but I honestly don't think it deserves Top 5 or anything...

Jurian responds:

Why is this not original, give me songs that sound like it, it's just a piano solo with some stuff, how many people do piano solo's(on a keyboard(midi))?
Thanks for voting five

[Man In the Smoking Mirror]

Crazy.

My right speaker was sounding pretty strange with that long synth you put in. The first synth to actually have a tune to it, was a little bit off tune. I think that was the idea you were going for, but it still didn't sound to good. Until the synth at 1:10 came in, I thought the song wasn't very good. Good job at that beat. The title fit the selection very well, and I am glad you changed the off tune synth after 1:40 to a different synth. Lol, my right speaker was possessed again a 2:10. The beat was random at 2:30. Still, I could tell a lot of effort was put forth in the song, good job, and if you ever need any ideas, or a laugh, listen to some of my songs. Thanks.

Keep it up.

WritersBlock responds:

The piano was a little detuned, so that might have thrown the bass off. Also, in the background there was a dissonant guitar playing, that would have added to the mess. It was purposeful though, the intro had the two saws with a rising pitch, I set it up for one to rise and fall a little faster sounding more out of tune at the peak. It was also panned far to the right so that would be cause for the posession, that's bass! I dunno how it'd sound on a subwoofer, though, might not be low enough... It came back a couple of times though, so that's what was happening at 2:10. 2:30, the bass was a little quiet for what I had wanted, so the chromatic melody didn't come through as much as to tell what it was. It's pretty kickass though.
But, yeah, when the main reece comes in, it settles down a lot and it's not as weird, but that weird drak ambient drum and bass was all I was going for, it's more of a technical piece than a melodic, consonant song.

Cheers for the review, I can see you put some effort into critical thinking.

[Quantum Laboratory]

Very Raw.

Personally, raw isn't my style, but it was very original. Especially the synth coming in a 31 seconds. Keep up the work man.

Suspended-3rd-Chord responds:

hmm...I'm confused what you mean by raw? Thanks for the review man! And I appreciate that you didnt let your personal tastes influence your score :)

[HighVolume]

Sweet!

No really, this was awesome. I mloved the beat in every way. Kepp it up man!

Dj-Rippa responds:

Thanx man:D:D glad u liked it

[In The Club]

Sweet.

Nice and smooth, especially the singing. Nice work. I liked how you changed the flowing, to rapping. Lol. DIdn't expect a real rap song. Knew it was when I heard the word N****rs. Made me laugh.. =)

Keep it up! And check out some of mine, though it is Ambient and not rap, so you would probably like The Adventures of FattyMcpatty and LardyLarLar more.

CaliberTheButcher responds:

lol yeah ima have to check some of em out