FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Height of 1000 Years]

HUH?

Ok, all you did was use a pre-set song man. Seriously. Put effort into your songs. don't use these pre-set songs.

crazygermanguy responds:

A template is different from a preset "song". Mostly because a song has something called "notes" which are not in the template. The template just gives you a few instruments, and some basic settings. Admittedly, I did not put an incredible amount of effort into this song. However, music is not judged on the effort, but by sound. Otherwise, Nirvana's Smells Like Teen Spirit would have gone nowhere- it's great song, but if Cobain wrote his lyrics 5 minutes before I hardly call that a ridiculous amount of effort.

[The 4 instruments loop]

LOL.

It was pretty good. i liked how you used the same loops, but with different instruments. Nice job.

kchrules responds:

Thanks FatKidWitAJetPak

[Desert Dance]

Hey hey hey! GARAGEBAND!!!

I see you use Garageband, well, I would be happy to help you with it. I am experienced in Garageband, and make all my songs with the program. I see you are now just starting out with pre-set loops, but I ddi too lol. XD

Check out some of my songs, I will check out yours, and I will be glad to help you if you have any questions. Good luck!

I liked this though, it showed creativity.

kchrules responds:

Thanks I like your songs too.

[Umbrella Remake]

Woh!

Dude, freaking awesome. The piano had a great tune to it. And then the background pad made me want to cry! (A good thing) Keep it up man, great harmony in this song.

7-Twisted-7 responds:

Glad you liked it, thanks a lot.

[Johnny cash was the man!]

the sound wasn't in sync all the way.

Some of the song skipped a little. It would have been OK if you would fix that. But i am not that much of a Jhonny Cash man. Funny though.

trashcanman responds:

my computer is shit

[World of Warcraft - 2 Dwarf's]

WOW.

Lol, such a nerdy title. XP The vocals were pretty cool. This sounded EXACTLY like the song under sounds like.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/120322

Lol, just to give you an idea.

D-A-J responds:

erm... not really...

that track is more trance, this track is dance... HUGE difference =)

[{DKL} Winds of Ice]

Nice.

It is amazing of how easy it is to create such songs with Fl Studio isn't it?

You ahd a good build up. You also choosed good synths. The main choord line after the build up, was too heavy. You need to make just a tad softer. Or you can make it deep, while still having the hardcore effect to it.

Nice, keep trying! This one was better techno I could make lol.

DavidKrachtLam responds:

The reason to why i use FL :) I didn't think the main synth after the build up was too heavy, more a bit too loud. Nonetheless, i let it stay as it was.

[Castle Piano - Nightheaven]

Good Pad.

The choice of Pad was excellent. You added other instruments with good timing too. It sounded heavenly at certain points. (Which is hard to do!) Keep this up man, your making some pretty cool songs. Normally, I would have the patience for listening to all of this song, but not that many other will. Lol, it really stinks when you make so much in a song, but most only listen to about half of it. If you ever have a song like this again, you should try splitting it into 2 songs.

Oh, and VERY NICE Piano.

Nightheaven responds:

Thanks brother!

[Kybord Killr]

It was Ok.

That was way to short... but after all it was a loop. I think you mushed everything together. You need to make it slower and add different instruments.

226NeXuS responds:

Sure thing... I guess... I only have FL7 demo, so I'll have to start from scratch, but if I get the time I'll re-make it... I guess...