FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[Kriz] - Aerox]

*Sigh*

Alright, look: Almost all the FL songs sound alike, they just aren't very original anymore. Even so, they sound really cool and I see how you make them "original" Sadly, the tone you use obviously has been done before. I am not saying it is a bad thing or anything, you just should put some major pads in the background like stars in my song (::Run With Me::) With those stars and complex electronic energy, you could have some really great tunes. Keep it up though! This song is a major accomplishment to be heard in 4 entries! =)

Kr1z responds:

Dude this was like one of my first songs ever..
Im trying!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^^
Thx for the tips, ur right :)

[Kriz: The Beginning]

Chaneg that main beat.

Don't change the way it is, just the tone of it. Like a different drum or something. It was a great trance song, just a litle to simple and I have heard it before. You have a talent, you just need to put forth much effort into combining your techniques. Great job though. 4/5 9/10 for the unoriginality. (Yeah I grade harsh sorry)

Kr1z responds:

ah well, im still learning alot :)
Thx for the tips!

[´Kriz: Reaching For You]

Very Very cool.

Ok, one question. Did you make this usinf FL Studio? And if so, how? I mean, do you play the choords on the synthisizer? Well anyway, it was a really tight trance song but the beat got kind of messed up around 1:01. It was the coolest trance song I have ever heard, great job in that regard. The main techno beat ALMOST didn't go well with the beat so you should tweak that just a little bit to avoid messing up this great song. I might just use it for a game I have. 10/10 for the first (Normally it would be 9 for the tiny mistakes but it is your first which is excellent) 5/5.

Oh and if you have the time, could you review some of my songs? I am going to review some more of your to see what I can find in your music...

Kr1z responds:

Its made with FL Studio 7 :), without a keyboard. All done by software :)
Thx for the 10/10! Means alot coming from you hihi :D
I think the maintechno lead goes pretty well !

Ill check ur songs too :)

Kriz.

[Facing Defeat]

Simple.

It was a very god song, don't get me wrong. It is just that it was a little but to simple. You need some sort of heavy emotinal synth going in the back there. Good job overall!

x-Exodus-X responds:

By a heavy synth, do you mean a stronger bass? The one in this song sucked, i'm definitely working on that! thanks for the review!

[Destruction of a Dream]

Dang.

You know, honestly I wasn't expecting this. I read the book fromt eh cover though lol. This is really cool. I love this song! NICE! I rarely like music, but your stuff fits my taste perfectly/ Well done!

x-Exodus-X responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

[Neverland (remix)]

It was different!

That was the most originl tune I have heard in a long time. Where did you get those vocals? I especially liked the upbeat techno synths in there. Very nice! You should continue this stuff man. =p

x-Exodus-X responds:

I downloaded the vocals of some website, just google Kate Lesing Neverland Vocals. Thanks a lot, I have a bunch of cool song I'm working on so I should be submitting something soon. Thanks for the review!

[The Crap of Death]

AHAHAH!!

That was hilarious and It should be front paged. =D HILARIOUS. Like.

SonicFoxStrk responds:

i was just something really random me, my brother and my brothers friend made!!! i got really bored so they helped me make some noises too!!!

[Real-Verse Central .:Demo:.]

Cool.

I see you are beginning to create songs. You are using pre-set loops from the Garageband library, but that is usually a first step. It is what I did. The beat sounded OK, but it was to edgy, what you should do is put in that same beat, but put it into a layer of synth instead of beat. Keep it up.

SonicFoxStrk responds:

i know garage band inst that great but it all i have at the moment so i'm gonna try and work on it make it better, you'll see when i'm done ^^

[(FMC) -=Last Man on Earth=-]

OMG.

You use very similiar choords to a lot of songs I make lol. Well, it didn't sound all that great to me to be perfectly honest. The techno part was way to mixed up. when it got to about 1 minute or so, it started to get a little better. Maybe try the same choords, but different instruments. Keep it up!

FunkmasterCatking responds:

lol your right, just listened to some of yours. I see what you mean by mixed up though

thanks for the review!

[The Awesome Ending]

garageband ehh?

You know, you could get some great ideas from me because I create ALL my songs using Garageband. Some have loops, while other don't. Well, this was pretty good for a loops song. Seriously though, you could gain benifit from listening to my music. Keep it up.

Here is the link http://www.newgrounds.com/account/aud io/edit

kchrules responds:

Thanks, I've heard your songs and their good.