FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[´Kriz: Reaching For You]

Very Very cool.

Ok, one question. Did you make this usinf FL Studio? And if so, how? I mean, do you play the choords on the synthisizer? Well anyway, it was a really tight trance song but the beat got kind of messed up around 1:01. It was the coolest trance song I have ever heard, great job in that regard. The main techno beat ALMOST didn't go well with the beat so you should tweak that just a little bit to avoid messing up this great song. I might just use it for a game I have. 10/10 for the first (Normally it would be 9 for the tiny mistakes but it is your first which is excellent) 5/5.

Oh and if you have the time, could you review some of my songs? I am going to review some more of your to see what I can find in your music...

Kr1z responds:

Its made with FL Studio 7 :), without a keyboard. All done by software :)
Thx for the 10/10! Means alot coming from you hihi :D
I think the maintechno lead goes pretty well !

Ill check ur songs too :)

Kriz.

[Facing Defeat]

Simple.

It was a very god song, don't get me wrong. It is just that it was a little but to simple. You need some sort of heavy emotinal synth going in the back there. Good job overall!

x-Exodus-X responds:

By a heavy synth, do you mean a stronger bass? The one in this song sucked, i'm definitely working on that! thanks for the review!

[Destruction of a Dream]

Dang.

You know, honestly I wasn't expecting this. I read the book fromt eh cover though lol. This is really cool. I love this song! NICE! I rarely like music, but your stuff fits my taste perfectly/ Well done!

x-Exodus-X responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

[Neverland (remix)]

It was different!

That was the most originl tune I have heard in a long time. Where did you get those vocals? I especially liked the upbeat techno synths in there. Very nice! You should continue this stuff man. =p

x-Exodus-X responds:

I downloaded the vocals of some website, just google Kate Lesing Neverland Vocals. Thanks a lot, I have a bunch of cool song I'm working on so I should be submitting something soon. Thanks for the review!

[The Crap of Death]

AHAHAH!!

That was hilarious and It should be front paged. =D HILARIOUS. Like.

SonicFoxStrk responds:

i was just something really random me, my brother and my brothers friend made!!! i got really bored so they helped me make some noises too!!!

[Real-Verse Central .:Demo:.]

Cool.

I see you are beginning to create songs. You are using pre-set loops from the Garageband library, but that is usually a first step. It is what I did. The beat sounded OK, but it was to edgy, what you should do is put in that same beat, but put it into a layer of synth instead of beat. Keep it up.

SonicFoxStrk responds:

i know garage band inst that great but it all i have at the moment so i'm gonna try and work on it make it better, you'll see when i'm done ^^

[(FMC) -=Last Man on Earth=-]

OMG.

You use very similiar choords to a lot of songs I make lol. Well, it didn't sound all that great to me to be perfectly honest. The techno part was way to mixed up. when it got to about 1 minute or so, it started to get a little better. Maybe try the same choords, but different instruments. Keep it up!

FunkmasterCatking responds:

lol your right, just listened to some of yours. I see what you mean by mixed up though

thanks for the review!

[The Awesome Ending]

garageband ehh?

You know, you could get some great ideas from me because I create ALL my songs using Garageband. Some have loops, while other don't. Well, this was pretty good for a loops song. Seriously though, you could gain benifit from listening to my music. Keep it up.

Here is the link http://www.newgrounds.com/account/aud io/edit

kchrules responds:

Thanks, I've heard your songs and their good.

[Project Night - Scorpio]

Techno!!!

Very nice. I likhe tunes you used in this one. The instruments were nice as well. Great job and keep up the good work.

Draqo responds:

Thanks. :)

[Sand Castles]

WOHOHH!!

Man, that was the very first professional work I have heard on Newgrounds in a really long time. Great job man! You also had that rareity of singing very well to the song. The lyrics were great to. I loved the way you pertained to childhood experiences and put it into a classical rather than a rap or heavy metal. It seemed liked you played the instruments on your own? Or did you use a program? Well, any way it is the coolest song I have heard in a very long time. Very nice, and you need to start a job with this talent. (If you don't already have one) But I do see one very thing you can improove upon. YOU NEED TO RESPOND TO YOUR REVIEWS. PEOPLE CARE ABOUT THAT. If you don't respond to your reviews, no matter how many you have, then you will seem like a jerk who doesn't care about his or her fand. Please, do that for the sake of your fans such as me. Great job and I hope to see more. =)

MilkMan-Dan responds:

People seem to be up and down about my singing... I personally am in the center... I know it needs mega improvement... but am content to share with my voice as is in the mean time.

I think this song hits home a little better as a pop/classical simply because I doubt very few people look back on their childhoods with a heavy metal attitude... we all miss it from time to time... it's a very haunting emotion.

I did use a program... which took the notes I played on my piano... and converted them to different instruments. So technically I did play all the instruments... but I used a piano to do it. Make sense?... if not PM me and I'll explain further.

I do not have a job with this... and I highly doubt I will ever get one... thats just the way the world works I'm afraid.

As for responding to reviews... Man do you have any idea how many reviews a guy can get. I mean... I came home today and I had like 20 more reviews than yesterday. 10 on this song alone. It's very hard with a busy schedule to respond to every review, expecially when some of them have 100+ reviews. I think the last time I counted all of them it was something like 1300 total. But still I try my best, and everyone should know that if they want to speak with me... simply PM me or add me to msn and I'll do my best to take some time to talk.

Thanks for your lengthy review and reminding me of what is important to the people who love my music.

Sincerely,
MMD