Fantastic Art, Awful Plot
ART 11/10
The art was extremely impressive. Every character had lots of high end detail and animation. The backgrounds were great and were enjoyable to look at. I loled at all of the hidden messages like STOP READING THIS haha. The glow effects you used were really nice and didnt lag the video but by just a little bit to where it was barely noticable. The animation design and art is the high of this movie, however the lows are much less impressive.
SOUND 3/10
Good god man you need to mix the sound a bit better for this. There was tons of screeching and popping and buzzing going on in my speakers. To make sure it mwasnt my speakers I switched to headphones. Same thing happened. You need to get better voice actors and turn down the music whenever someone is talking. ESPECIALLY for the girls. The wife of the guy that scream was very painful to the ears. I could barley understand anything she said because every time she talked my speakers popped. The only good voices were romeo and the white guy with weird powers. This mixing problem is very easy to resolve as well. All you need to do is...
1.) GET BETTER VOICE ACTORS! Or at least voice actors with better quality mics.
2.) Mix all the voices together and make sure it sounds good, easy to listen to and good to the ears.
3.) Export it at least at 60KBS, thas a good quality and wont take up that much file size.
PLOT 7/10
The plot was fairly nice but made me go WTF. I didnt udnerstand what the hell was up with the guy having magic powers and the obsessions of the girl with needles... lol. I just recommend making it flow together a bit smoother. It was cool with the whole anarchy concept but it didnt flow to well. Make it understandable by the majority of the public.
Well thats pretty much all i have to say. You have a WONDERFUL animation skill and talent, some of the bes tI have seen on NG. You just need to learn how to mix better and you can hire someone to do that for you hehe.
Hope to see more!