It was strange
Your work is so much different that the general public can understand and grasp completley. mayne people watch awkwardly at the style you present, with the gigantic boobs and the sketchy animation. The characters all move jumpy and strangly sometimes, the live actors of littlew kids seems to be far to out of place to enjoy. Finally, you need to choose a different guy to work for because this guys music isnt that good. Also, your perspective on the human body is a bit off but that is just your art style and I love that ahaha.
Now that the bad is out of the way, lets move onto the good. The coloring was great, the pixelized clips were really cool, i enjoyed the nice variety of characters and dance moves, you worked really hard on animating everything and that was clear, the special effects were neat to look at, andfor the most part everything was quite smooth.
If you want to appeal to the public, which i doubt you do hehe, then try to make your characters realistic in line and depth instead of sketchy on the outside. I know you like the hentai aspect, but it was unescesary for this video, especially since a little kid is featured in it which is REALLY awkward to watch because the hentai turns the viewer on, and then the viewer sees your little girl dancing. Do you really want your daughter to be looked at by perverts? Think about that clip man, just saying.
I know you dont enjoy criticism, but im just being honest man. Thanks for posting this to newgrounds, I wish it was a bigger screen though, which would not increase the file size by that much really. Good luck with your future stuff!
And hey, i dont deserve credit for this ok. All I did was give u some code for effects.